A sketch & Short Story on Event of Ansha Didi's Birthday!!(Pg:105)

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priya

@sonpaapdi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#471

@ padma di : lovly story di...!!!👏

lovd the frndship between purvi di n shreya...!!!😉

waiting for more stories...😊

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Padmpriya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#472

thank you so much priya, aditi, shreya di, puru...!!!!😃

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mano86

@mano86

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Posted: 12 years ago

#473

@Padma

story
⭐️

⭐️specially Purvi-Shreya Bond⭐️

a lot
😊

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@..optimist..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#474

Finally read it...😊

Very nice dear...!!👏

Loved the Poorvi-Shreya friendship...😃

Keep writing...👍🏼

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Padmpriya

@Padmpriya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#475

Thank you so much mano di 😊and neha di...😊

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misha.as

@misha.as

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Posted: 12 years ago

#476

Next part is also too good Padmpriya.😊⭐️
welldone...👏⭐️
Like a true friendship story...😃
Purvi and shreya are just like duo...😉
scenes at the bureau were very sweet...😃
loved it...😊👏
Keep writing more...👍🏼

Edited by misha.as - 12 years ago

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#477

PADMA, I read Both the Parts of Ur Story... Ur Story was Good but bit Rushy as U did not cover the Chemical part, U must add some lines abt SHERYA who told this to PURVI that She was little Uncomfortable as Some Gundas behind Her and Her Mother for that Chemical...😕😕

Why the Gundas did not trying to attempt their Kidnapp stuff on SHERYA when She was on Her way to DELHI to MUMBAI...😉😉

I really like that U included that PURVI and SHERYA are Best Friends earlier not after joining CID...👏

so many Gundas and why the Cops did not use Guns yaar especially Girls, arry ek weapon hay aap kay pass tou Fighting...😆😆

Abt that KARATE CHOPS, baccha except VIVEK kisi ko bhi is tarah kay Trained nahi bataya gaya hay😊... if U will take any establish character, plz use some adde stuff like she joined Her classes few days back and use some Chops which She learnt in Her Training etc...

Otherwise, I like the Story... its really Nice to Read some stuff based on Female Cops...👏

Thank You so much baccha...🤗