A sketch & Short Story on Event of Ansha Didi's Birthday!!(Pg:105)

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Jackles

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Posted: 10 years ago

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About the sketch, its too good. I knew you had it in you 👏😃

And the story is superb too, dear 👏. So thoughtful of ya 😃. Loved the way you portrayed her character the way it should be i.e benevolent esp towards poor children. I enjoyed the reverie in the very beginning. For a moment i thought she is delivering speech in a ceremony with award in hand 😳. The way she said, "Meri gudiya" to Ashi was so sweet. Her probe into the case is brilliantly sketched by you 👏. Last scene was the limelight 😃👏 . A+ from me 😃

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Padmpriya

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: -SAMAN-
About the sketch, its too good. I knew you had it in you 👏😃
And the story is superb too, dear 👏. So thoughtful of ya 😃. Loved the way you portrayed her character the way it should be i.e benevolent esp towards poor children. I enjoyed the reverie in the very beginning. For a moment i thought she is delivering speech in a ceremony with award in hand 😳. The way she said, "Meri gudiya" to Ashi was so sweet. Her probe into the case is brilliantly sketched by you 👏. Last scene was the limelight 😃👏 . A+ from me 😃

Thank you so much sis. 😃 😊