My Stories/OS/VMs - Page 3

Thanx a lot Shivani...
My first story is story of contest 😊

Thanx a lot Shreela

reading it now...

Finally ... finished it!!!!!!!! 😊'

First of all, thank u for posting such an wonderful story. Kudos to u, Debasree!👏

The way u have managed case & at the same time, the emotions... is really unbelievable... Also, i must mention the twists ... U have kept the suspense throught the story very well... 😊😊😊

I was expecting something about the Biker... that he might be a criminal... I thought that ACP's injury might be related to the case... but anyway, it's okay. 😊

Freddy, Sachin, Vivek... all had done their jobs very well... but of course, Abhijit & Daya are the dynamic marvelous ones... ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️


So all in all, a very good story... expecting to see more from you soon.

Keep it up! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: luv_cid_shreya

Will read it as soon as possible. 😊

Edited: I meant to read the story a few days before but my Internet was down so I just finished reading it. Overall, I loved the story Debashree. You really captured everyone's characteristics with great ease. Keep up the great work. 👏

Thanx Sri

Sree I finally read it

Thanx Nandini for reading...😊...I'm happy that u like it...

wow... wonderful DEBA...
yaar... U used very excillent UV prints!!!!!
use GR8 songs...
but yaar all CREDIT goes to U...
main nay tou bus BHAGAAR lagaya hay😉
very well done...

Nehin Yaar GD u help me a lot otherwise i cant create this...thanx once again

no buddy... apun tou khud abhi LEARN ker raha hay...