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Bhavanab

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

TO Those who haven't read the whole story !!! Please don't see the comments before reading !! It may reveal some parts of the story !!!

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Bhavanab

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

@sstanni thanks for all these !!! Well I and Shaggz have posted the story but it has parts written by all of us !!!

Do keep guessing who's written what !!

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dr.fahmi

@dr.fahmi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: sstanni

Daya: boss yeh chai pee raha hain, mera bhi gala sookh raha hain.
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😆 and then he was again suggesting to abhi sir in resturant "kuch order kerte hain"😆

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JP22

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

Thanks tani and doctor...really amezed you people like little little ting of our stories.

Edited by jiya1 - 15 years ago

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Shruti Chatterjee

@shreela

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

awesome job!👍🏼👏👏 baas ek baat kahena chahungi ki, yaar keya Kolkata mein Rosogolla ke alawa aur kuch nehi milta?😆 kuch aur bhi toh order kar sakte the! but very nice job truely!

Edited by shreela - 15 years ago

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Bhavanab

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

@shreela thanks for liking !! But Kolkata's famous for Rosogullas !! Atleast we who don't live in Kolkata ( Like CID officers) hum logon ke liye Kolkata ka sabse famous dish is Rosogulla !!! I love them !!

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Tanni

@DivianTanz_Divz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Shagnika

Again an amazing part and the climax part😉! Loved the way the places changed in scene 13...That was one of the nicest part of the story. Greatly completed. Very very good job.

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Daya follows Shadab who was walking along the busy gallis of the city. Suddenly Shadab gets up on a pulley rikshaw and asks the man to take him to a certain place. So Daya does the same. It was a new experience for Daya to travel in a "man pulled rikshaw".

New experience. Nice idea.......
SCENE 13

SCENE SHIFTS TO GOA

SCENE SHIFTS TO CHENNAI
The quick shifts of places were good. And nicely expressed....

They continue the conversation; the man who was sweeping the floor comes towards them.
Freddy as sweeper! Wanna see him like that. He would really look funny!!

Acp couldnt make head or tail of what the man said. He turned towards Abhi-Daya with helplessness. Abhi-Daya looked at each other, now trying hard to control their laughter.

Abhi-Daya were on the verge of laughter! ACP noticed this and gave them stern looks.

This is very funny. ACP is feeling helpless and his right and left hands are laughing instead of helping him!!!😆

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Tanni

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

Lastly, left some more things to say..........

Have read the last part. Couldn't guess who wrote which parts, but must have to say fabulous job u have done Sneha, Bhabna, Jiya and Shagnika. The story was just very very creative. And it had some uniqueness, from the usual stories of CID...

The stay of the CID members in different places was beautifully presented. The quick shifts of places were good. Disguise scnes were well presented ...
Loved how the whole team was in action....

The arrest of th criminal and the situation u showed, was just amazing...The confession, reasons for being a criminal was somehow unique. I loved the life history and the reasons of the VR to be a criminal.

I can't praise more. I'll be tired but the admiration of u can't be finished...So, I'm stopping myself here..

In fact, I am not that elegible to praise u. Just hats off to u. U all did a great and huge job friends..

At last wanna say to our director B.P. Singh "here see the 4 great writes Jiya, Bhabna, Shagnika, Sneha. New pattern of story, get from them...". I wish this great story would convert into an episode. Please FW read this and do an episode with this.....
Again....

Edited by sstanni - 15 years ago

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Bhavanab

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Posted: 15 years ago

#39

Thank you so much sstanni !!! That was extremely sweet of you !!! Don't know if our story was that good to be made into an episode but your post was very encouraging !!! Thanks a ton buddy !!