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Aarathi R Vimal

@Aandromeda

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: jiya1
Friends plz read whole story frirst and plz let me which part you like don't like.I know it's a big story so will take time to read.still wanted to know how it ?...waiting for r responce.

dii, true to the word: this was a treat alright.......loved every bit of it especially how in the beginning you guys switched the names" aditya" and "dayanand". i'm not sure but i think this is the first story that has a got a major spread out of india ( mumbai, delhi,goa chennai, kolkotta it's like there's no other major city left on the map) ..........everthing scene had a follow up and the conversions between the officers were well co ordinated : so no confusion. to my 4 dii's ( the 4 musketeers ): all of you deserves a pat on the back
narrowing it all down" it's better than great"....

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#22

@Anchal,Dr.Fahmi and Aandromeda Thank you so much for appreciating our hardwork !!!

Aandromeda Thanks for such a beautiful post !! It's given us immense happiness !!
@dr. Fahmi Thanks again !!! That was very sweet of you !!
Anchal Thanks again !!

@aditi take your time sweety !!!

I'd also like you all to try and guess who wrote which part !!

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neelambari

@Chiinnu

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#23

read it atlast!
It was long, smart and interesting. Above all let me say hats off to your collective effort.

I loved the start, the jasoos stuff. The undercover scenes was nice too. But I dislike the way those names interchanged, it creates confusion to readers. The card selection from abhijit was cool. The conversation between acp and duo in bureau was a little dragging. Loved the hacker's effort.

I didnt like the mystery disclosed by salunkhe, better it was said by vivek IMO. Why should salunkhe said that???

Then in shagee's land....loved the rosogolla, he will soon become addicted to it. The escape scene from duo was nice.

Well done girls 👏

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Sonia Rachel John

@awesumsonia

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#24

my 4 di's -u guyzzzzz r rocking!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) :)

my better half Aarathi urff Andromeda,hav told everything wat i wanted to sayy.....

i <3ed the aditya-dayanand part veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy muchhh........(*lost*)

in short, this is AN AWESUM-BLOSSOM STORY..

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Tnks Achal,Chinu<aditi and doctor for liking our story.Doctor yes editing part was may be huries but what to do I got around 30 pm when u post your story we want to read that.for editing we spend around 2-3 days but stil we rush i admit that.😃will tried to imopved in next story If we got the chanced to come togather.we desparatly tried to include those part which we are expecting from normal CID.after reading your commets Its We all r satisfied u all like our combine efforts.😃

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Tanni

@DivianTanz_Divz

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#26

@Bhabna, Can I quote any part of the story, which I liked most?

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#27

@sstani sure! Go ahed with quoting and all but keep the quote short... Or else confusion occurs 😃

Everyone Thanks a lot.... 😳

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#28

@sstanni arre sure re !!!
@namratha Thanks for liking it sweety !!
@chinnu thanks for appreciating our hardwork !! Will keep your suggestions in mind !!

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Tanni

@DivianTanz_Divz

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Shagnika
@sstani sure! Go ahed with quoting and all but keep the quote short... Or else confusion occurs 😃

Everyone Thanks a lot.... 😳

Hey! Thanks a lot friend...I've just read one part. am quoting from that now. Will read the other parts soon and quote from them too....😊

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Tanni

@DivianTanz_Divz

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Bhavanab

Wonderful start Bhabna....just amazing👏😭! The coding-decoding ideas were awesome... The casino situation was nicely presented.
My eyes were paining because of staring at the white pages...but couldn't stop reading it....

I loved these dialogues and parts so much of the 1st part:
Dayanand :- Toh Daya the detective ban gaya Aditya the accountant ??
Daya(laughing) :- Haan boss !!! Aur Abhijeet bhi toh Dayanand the Manager ban gaya !!

ACP: Kya baat hain Abhijeet, Daya yeh zameen mein kya khoj rahe ho?
Loved these dialogues very much...

Daya: (awards him with a tight slap and he falls on the floor) toh kya?
Rewarding slap😆! Loved this thought a lot...

Vivek: ohh tum hacker ho?

Vishal: main expert hoon sir, shayad aaapko meri zarurat hain
Vivek-Vishal part was quite funny..

Daya: boss yeh chai pee raha hain, mera bhi gala sookh raha hain.
😆😆

-------I don't know who are writers of this part among those 4 great writers, but must say that the start is great...and the climax part, I mean the last part was mind blasting👏👏👏

Edited by sstanni - 15 years ago

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