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First of all,sorry for commenting so late...
The story is mind-blowing !Very well-written and precise,never felt boring.The plot was gripping and u guys managed to maintain the suspense til the end.👏I loved the way ACP sir saved the messiah in the end.The Abhi-Daya disguise was fab and I liked the idea of Dayanand and Aditya.
The idea of the manager planning the robbery was excellent.👏As also the way u mentioned various locations and the part where Abhi-Daya were following Shadab to Kolkata was aptly described.Special praises for the hacking expert and the way Abhi-Daya escape from the haveli.👏The CID element which has been missing from the show of late was evident in the story and each of duo's scenes was superb!
Ultimate verdict:Congratulations for all ur hard work has paid u immensely!!Excellent first attempt at team writing and I think u should write more in future.Best of luck!👍🏼
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
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