STORY - Aakhri Chunauti Last Part - by Visrom

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Aditi_97

@Aditi_97

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#91

woww...... visrom di!! the story is getting more and more
interesting!!😛
How I wish the actual story of AT was something like this!!! 😍

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d_c_b_a

@d_c_b_a

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#92

Awesome story👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼 !

Please finish it soon ,can't wait to know more

-----Anchal

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-SNEHAL-

@-SNEHAL-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#93

Super duper hit story visrom di!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks a lot for wiping out bad memories and putting in such good alternative instead in our head. 👏

I think i am gone remember this one as the original AC series last part 😊

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Aparaajita Mehra

@aparakshitij

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: snehal_7s
Super duper hit story visrom di!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks a lot for wiping out bad memories and putting in such good alternative instead in our head. 👏

I think i am gone remember this one as the original AC series last part 😊

Well said,Snehal!

The one which we saw on TV on Sunday is only fit to be called CID in Europe,it was not like Aakhri Takkar at all.This story has every ingredient was which required in the series finale.In fact,i would hav loved to see this story on TV.

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#95

Thanks for liking so far. I am not sure if I'll be able to meet your expectations yaar....now I am nervous. 😕

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Aarathi R Vimal

@Aandromeda

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#96

dii great story👏

the beginning was too perfectly written and acp's emotion's very well portrayed. every thoughts well said. though the writing style is way different from your other stories it was too good.

pls complete it soon..

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prabha.

@prabha.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#97

No Worries Viz, its going well so far, just concentrate on the story and forget the rest, expectations and all that.

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#98

Visrom.... Not to worry!!! Go as you wish... Keep aside all expectations pls! Take your time and write the way you want to... In peace! 😊

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Aparaajita Mehra

@aparakshitij

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: visrom

Thanks for liking so far. I am not sure if I'll be able to meet your expectations yaar....now I am nervous. 😕

Hey,dont worry yar,u'll be able to do full justice to the story and I'm sure u'll meet our expectations!

Although I havent read much of ur work,except Khooni Building and this one,I can say that u r a very good writer!Not once did I get the feeling that ur story is dragging or u r diverting from the basic plot.U are able to hold the suspense till the end and u r precise,clear and logical in whatever u write,something which is missing with FW writers of late..