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Posted: 15 years ago
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GUYS, AM ALSO SORRY FOR HURTING SOME OF YOU! PERHAPS ALL DAT I HV WRITTEN S BEST UNDERSTOOD WHEN SHOWN ON TV. AM REALLY SORRY IF I HAD HURT URE SENTIMENTS IN ANY MANNER, I PROMISE TO CONTROL MY EMOTIONAL NEGATIVITY IN MY NEXT STORIIES! PLEASE BEAR WITH ME! I LOVE CID. PLEASE DONT MISUNDERSTAND ME! ABHI AND DAYA ARE ALWAYS IN MY HEART. I BROUGHT BAK MUSKAAN BECAUSE I REALLY LIKE HER ACTING, ACP IS TOO GOOD. PLEASE FORGIVE ME IF I HAVE OFFENDED U. I WILL TAKE TYM TO FINISH DS STORY. FEEL FREE TO NOT TO READ DS STORY IF YOU DONT LIKE IT! AM REALLY SORRY! SORRY, GUYS! Drilabh.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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(Another) Scene- Daya's car

(Asha is calling Suhaani)

Asha- Suha, where are you? Accha, hmm. Okay. Have you talked to Acp sir? Accha listen, tum aise kaise byabahaar kiya tumhaari senior ke saath? Pehle tum apne par shaq layi uski baad tum iss sab ko itna muskil me daal diya! Kyon? Nahi, sorry bol ne ki koi faida nahi hai. Tumko maine acchi tarase jaanti hoon. Humesha tumhaari maan aur gurba(pride) duty se aage rakhte ho. Senior ko respect karne chaahiye tha! Nahi meine koi baat nahi soonoongi. Meine rakhti hoon. Bahut gusse hoon tumhaari par.

(She cuts the call)

Daya- Arre Asha woh ek bacchi hain! Kyon…

Asha- Daya, mei uski mausi hoon. Uski manners chaahiye tha! Tum sabko use kiya, provoke kiya hain. Woh ek tadaan aur artless ladki hain!

Daya- Koi baat nahi! (Smiling)

Asha- Daya, itne saal ki baad mei tumhaare saath tumhaara gaari mei investigation karne ke liye jaa rahi hoon! (Smiles, reminiscently as she remembers her times with the CID) Itna yaaron wupas aa rahe hain mere pass!

Daya- Haan, bilkul yaad hain! Tum toh humaare team mei paanch saal ke liye thi, aur toh aur ek baar Acp sir ne tumhaari naam mention kiya tha ek women's day bravery award function mei!

Asha- Ha? (She laughs)

Daya- Anyway, chalo kaam aa gaya hain. Mera informer kaha hai yeh hain Karamnath ka ghar. (He points to a house as he brings his car to a halt)

Asha- Daya, woh darwaaza…

(They see the front door open wide)

Daya- Haan, kuch toh hai. Chalo hum dekhte hain.

(They get off, move towards the house, take their guns out and get into the house)

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Posted: 15 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: drilabh



Relax! I LOVE abhi-daya too much! it's just dat they were suspicious and felt hurt at d way acp kept on keeping them at bay and praising suhaani.
even suhaani is at fault for having lost her temper in front of her seniors... it s all abt humans too.dont worry, d officers r nt negative, its jst they insecurity!

dont worry, CID will b always positive... and to me they r never villains- just officers who get emotional at tyms....

thanx for reading btw!

lol



. The fact is I don't see such a big mistake on Suhani's part. She was not supposed to speak about herself, right? If she knows forensic science, I see no reason why the CID team should be losing their temper. They can't even tolerate the fact that she knows their names beforehand. In CID there have been characters who are far more arrogant than Suhani (though I myself wouldn't call her that). Take the case of Dr. Niyati Pradhan. She never allowed anyone to complete a sentence in front of her and was full of herself. Still the CID team has not reacted to her in such an ignoble manner. Iam implying to say that don't make the team look so insecure because Abhijeet and Daya can never be like that. Also they can't be so harsh to their colleague.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: abhijeetdaya



Actually i forgot to congratulate you. The forensic part was really superb with expert description. Well frankly speaking, I didn't like the part when Daya asks Muskan to slap Suhani. That took things a bit too far. I don't expect Abhijeet and Daya to behave in such a ruthless manner especially to women.[/QUOTE


okay i will dlete dat part. i will jst make muskaan walk towards suhaani... my mistake! sorry!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Scene- Bureau

Acp- Abhijeet, Daya ne abhi phone kiya aur bataya Karamnath ka khoon hua.

Abhijeet- Kya? Sir, Iska matlab uska saath aur koi tha iss kaam mei! Khooni ko kaise pata chal gaye CID Karamnath ka picche par gaye?

Acp- Wahi toh! Mujhe bhi samaj nahi aa rahe hain…Abhijeet tum ek kaam karo. Tum aur Muskaan Asha aur Daya ko join karo. Dekho, doondlo. Kuch na kuch zaroor milega.

(Abhijeet's phone rings. He looks at it, glances at Acp)

Abhi- Haan sir.

(Abhi leaves. Freddy comes in.)

Sir, woh Jaipur ki CID ki Acp aa gaya hai.

Acp- uska saath jo laash hai woh lab mein bhej do aur unhe yahaa aane do.

(Then to Vivek and Tasha)- Tum dono lab mein jao aur dekho Salunkhe saab kya bolte hai. (A sudden thought comes to his head) Tasha, jo aurat ki nishan Abhijeet mile the woh nishaan aur yeh laash ki nishaan match karwao.

(Vivek and Tasha leave)

(Acp Ajay enters. He shakes hands with Acp Pradyuman)

Acp- Aap Suhaani ki dost?

Ajay- Actually woh mere pehla mangekaar thi. Baad mein unavoidable circumstance mei meine Mona ko shaadi kiya aur Jaipur chale gaye thei.

Acp- CBI mein tum dono kaam kiya tha?

Ajay- Haan…

Acp- Anyway. Tum kaho. Yeh Mona ko khoon kaise hua aur kaun kiya?

(Ajay tells him what he had already told Suhaani)

Acp- My god. Aur abhi pata chal gaya woh Karamnath ka bhi khoon hua hai!

Ajay- Kya!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Scene- Karamnath's house

(Daya and Asha are examining the body. Policemen have come and are now searching for clues. Abhi and Muskaan enter)

Abhi- Kuch mila Daya?

Daya- Boss, meine ek diary mila. Waha sab state ki CID ki members, officers aur informers ki naam likha hua hain!

Abhi- My god! Itna bara chakkar!

Asha- Aur yeh dehkliye Abhi sir!

(She shows him the picture of Suhaani, Asha and their family)

Yehi hai woh aadmi jo meri jiju ko betray kiya tha!

Abhi- My god!

(The picture has a red cross over Asha's jiju's face. Abhi looks at the picture, shocked.)

Abhi- Tumhara jiju ka naam kya hai?

Asha- Tanmay.

Abhi- I see I see…

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Posted: 15 years ago
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(Meanwile)

Scene- An unknown location

(Two men are meeting on the road in a lonely highway spot. There are dry cliffs around. It is a steep rough area along the suburbs of Mumbai)

Man 1- Karamnath toh gaya. Ab koi news aaya next suspect kaun ho skta hai?

Man 2- Nahin par tu fickar mat kara yaar!

Man 1- Mere officer boss soch rahe hain CID mein spy hain.

Man 2- Woh toh hai. Kya usko hum maar daalunga.

Man 1- Arre bhai, ab toh saab kuch nahoi kaha, toh shaant raho aur chup chaap tera kaam karo.

(A third man arrives)

Man 3- Arre meine bahut koshish kar raha hoon woh Asha ko maar daalenge baare mein. Lekin mera baaki CBI colleagues humesha aas pass rahte hai. Uff!

Man 1- Aur meine humesha woh Suhaani ko maarne koshish kar raha hoon, lekin dia boss ne…

Man 2- e! Saab ka phone aa rahe hain! Tu dono chup karla.

(He listens to the caller and then hangs up)

Man 2- Chal, ab hum chalega! Tera kaam karla naa…

Man 1- Haan haan lekin yeh bahut hi mushki hai!

Man 3- Haan hum humaara kaam karne ke koshs karunga..

(Man 2 and Man 3 leave)

(Suddenly Man 3 notices someone listening to their conversation. He pounces on him and shoots him dead. Then he also leaves. What he didn't notice was an object lying near the dying man).

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Posted: 15 years ago
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(Meanwhile)

Scene- Forensic lab, CID

Tarika (To Acp)- Sir jis aurat woh police station mein gayi thi aur yeh aurat jiski laash laaye hai, dono ek hi hain.

Acp- I knew it!

Ajay- Matlab?

(Acp gives the details to him. Ajay is shocked)

Ajay- Yeh kaise ho sakta hain! Nahi mera biwi koi chor nahi hai!

Acp- Toh woh kyon gayi thi waahaa pe?

Ajay- Ho sakta hai uski case ke liye koi kaam tha!

Acp- Lekin yeh bhi ho sakta hai Mona is gang ke saath hai!

Ajay- Zara aap mooh sambhaalne baat karo! Ek Acp ka apne koi ko dusri Acp ka shaq dena ki himmat kaha se aaya!

Acp- Yeh ek bari crisis chal rahe hai, Ajay. Sab suspect hain.

Ajay- Mai bhi?

Acp- Ho sakta hain!

(One of Ajay's men come forward. He says, "aapka dimaag thik hai?" )

Ajay - Vikram, yeh hum dono ka beech mei baat hai. Tum log chup raho please.

(Suddenly Daya, Asha and Muskaan come in with Karamnath's body in tow, carried by some police men)

Salunkhe- Aur ek laash!

(Daya tells about the findings to Acp. Acp suddenly notices Abhi's absence)

Acp- Abhijeet kaha hai?

Daya- Sir uska achaanak ek call aaya. Usko jaanaayi para. Woh bas aa jayega.

Salunkhe(who was examining the second body)- Acp saab, Raichand ka khooni aur Karamnath ka khooni aur Mona ki khooni ek hai!

(Everyone looks shocked as Salunkhe show them what Suhaani had displayed on Riachand's body)

Acp- Yeh ek bahut hi ghatarnak aadmi…

(His phone rings. He answers. His expression changes.)

Daya- (As Acp hangs up) Kya hua sir?

Acp- Dia ki phone. Kehte hai uski special group mei ek member, Ramesh, ka khoon hua!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Scene- Aina's house

(Abhi enters a room to see his neighbour lying down on his bed. Aina is by the bedside, weeping)

The old man(neighbour)-Abhi beta, kya tum tumhara vaida rakhne ke liye tyaar ho?

Abhi- Kumarji, meine mera faisla ab tak nahi banaya. Ab humaare ek bahut bara investigation chal rahe hai toh mera koi waqt nahi tha.

Kumarji (Tears in his eyes)- Jo bhi karo please ek baap ka aakhri iccha puran karo

Abhi-(with a glance at Aina) Mei samajhta hoon aapka dar. Meine aur ek vaida karna sakta hoon. Ho na ho meine aapka beti ko protect karunga.

(Kumarji folds his palms, tears in his eyes.)

Abhi-(immediately holding the old man's hands)- Nahi aisa mat karo. Main hoon naa…

(Aina looks at Abhi. Abhi looks at her.)

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Scene-That night, Daya's house

(Daya gets down from his car and walks towards his door and finds Abhi waiting for him. Abhi is looking very dejected.)

Daya (full of gentle concern) - Kya hua mera bhai? Aise chehra tum par acche nahi lagta. Thoda haso…

Abhi- Daya. Mei jaanta hoon humaare bahut hi problem chal rahe hai. Lekin yeh personal problem itne se bahut mushkil hai…

Daya- Andar aao aur bataao. Koi khatre mei phaas gaye hai tum?

Abhi- Nahi jaisa tum soch rahe ho waisa nahi… Lekin….

(Daya opens his door, pats Abhi's shoulder and bids him in. He switches on the light, and while Abhi sits on the sofa, goes to the kitchen to get a glass of water for Abhi. He joins Abhi)

Abhi- Pehle tum mujhe bataao shaam mei lab mei kya hua?

(Daya tells him. Abhijeet shakes his head.)

Abhi- Yeh sab kya ho raha hai…

Daya- Ab tum mujhe bolo kya hua!

Abhi- Mere phaansi ka order aaya.

Daya- Yeh kya bakwaas kehro Abhi! Bolo kya hua?

Abhi- Taarika mujhe phaansi diyenge.

Daya- Par baat kya? Ab taarika kaha se aayi? Tarika toh tumhe khush diti hai!

Abhi (looking away, embarrassed)- Mera pyaar hua… Mera pardosi mujhko uska beti ki shaadi ki proposal diya hai..

(Daya, with "o yeh baat", starts laughing)

Daya- Abhi yeh sab mazaak toh nahi?

(Then one look at Abhi's face and he realised Abhi was telling the truth)

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