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Posted: 15 years ago
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(She ends her story. Everyone is silent. Then-)

Abhi (Tears welling in his eyes)- My god! Asha I am very sorry!

Daya- Itni saal tum dono aise…(He stops, shaking his head slowly and sadly)

Muskaan- I am sorry too…

Tasha- Hum sab aapki ki saath hoon. Jo bhi ho, aap aur Suhaani boss ki badlaa humaare bhi hoga.

Vivek- Ma'am, aap humme kaam dijye, humme karoonga.

Freddy- Lekin pehle Acp sir ke pass maafi maango!

Abhi- Haan Freddy, tum theek kaha.

Salunkhe- OO yeh sab chakkar! Ab kaam mei lag jao!

(Tarika glances at Abhi, and then with Salunkhe, leaves.)

Daya- Chalo! Hum kaam shuru kare! Humme batao iss case ki baare mein. Saare information de do.

(Acp sir enters. The CID team goes towards him. Abhi with folded palms and tears in his eyes said)-Sir humme maaf karo sir! Hum aapke par shaq nahi dena chaahiye tha!

Daya- Sir please maaf karo!

(Acp looks at Asha, understood that she had told them, looks at his officers and then sighs)- Kaam mei lag jao. Suhaani ki phone aaya. Woh aur Diya uss nakli inspector ka naam pata chal gaya.

Asha (Coming forward)- Accha? Kya naam sir?

Acp- Karamnath, inspector Karamnath.

Abhi- Karamnath.. kahi woh Karamnath toh nahi jo Commisioner saab ka saath aaj station mei aaya tha?

Acp- Haan. Wahi! Lekin accha hua maine jab iss case ki baare mein bataya tha unko, yeh Karam nahi tha unke saath.

Daya- Sir, shayad yeh saare chori aur khooni mein iss aadmi ka haat hain.

Acp- Haan ho sakta hai… (Thoughtfully)

(Acp notices the CBI officers who come forward. Asha introduces them to him as her colleagues Manish, Rajesh and Gagan. Acp nods his head.)

Abhi- Humme woh Chimbu ko pehle doondha hoga.

Acp- Aur toh aur, humme Raichand ke baare main aur patane hoga. Aur mujhe lagta hain yeh inspector-in -charge ka bhi haath hai… kya naam uska, Daya?

Daya- Er.. Manik, sir.

Acp-(Pensively) Manik… Daya, tum usko Bureau mein bulao issi waqt.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Daya- Yes sir. (He takes up his phone.)

Acp- Muskaan tum Raichand humaare records mein hain kya nahi, dekho. (Muskaan-"Yes sir.") Tasha tum Chimbu ko humaare records mein doondhlo. (Tasha- "Jee sir.") Abhijeet, tum aur Vivek phir jao police station mei aur dekho aur kuch sabhuj mil jaate hai kya nahi. Freddy tum jao Salunkhe pass aur pata karo. Daya, tum aur Asha ne yeh Karamnath ko piccha kasro, pata karo. Jao!

(He then turns to Asha's colleagues) Aap log Asha ki kaam karo yahaa.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Scene- Narcotics Bureau

(Dia, her group and Suhaani are having a round table discussion. Dia's boss enters. All stand up, Suhaani not very willingly.)

Boss- Inspector Suhaani?

Suhaani- Senior inspector Suhaani, CID.

(They shake hands)

Dia- Sir we were just discussing our next course of action. An informer of Ramesh here called us and told us that the man behind all this is inspector Karamnath, one of the inspectors aiding the commissioner. Presumably he told the commissioner about Suhaani being a spy in the CID.

Boss- Yes, I just spoke to Acp Pradyuman. He also guessed the same. And he also told me that he suspects that he is the man behind the murder and burgulary at the station.

Suhaani- I see. Interesting…

Boss- Anyway. Dia whatever you do, do tell me beforehand. I don't want the Acp after my blood if anything happens to you both. He told me to watch you both. (He leaves)

Dia- Okay, people! Here is the plan! We need to split up!

(Suddenly, Suhaani's phone rings. She looks at the caller id and is surprised-"Ajay?". She moves aside, while Dia continues talking)

Suhaani- Hello Ajay? Haan kya hua? Sab hone ki bahut din ki baad tum achanak? KYA? Mona is no more! My god! Uski khoon hua! O god! Accha. Theek hain. Hm. Bye.

(She hangs up)

Dia, mujhe jaane hoga! Mona ko khoon kar diya! Aur Ajay ko pata chal gaya Mona ki khoon mein koi police spy ka haath ho sakta hain! Mujhe lagta hain humaare aadmi hi hai!


Ramesh- Yeh Ajay kaun hai?

Suhaani- Jaipur ki CID Acp Ajay. Uska biwi Mona ek bari lawyer hain. Woh yahaa kissi kaam mein aayi thi… Ajay mere liye intezaar kar rahe hain. Mein jaa rahi hoon.

Dia- Praddy uncle ko bataao.

Suhaani- Hm. Haan theek hain.

(She leaves)


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Scene- Suhaani's new house

(A man and Suhaani are talking in the living room. There are three-four men standing around)

Suhaani- Ajay, tum kaise pata chal gaye Mona ki khoon aur uski khooni ki baare mein?

Ajay (Pensively)- Mona mujhe kaal raat mei phone kya thi aur batayi thi ya ek police informer ne usko dhamki diye thei. Agar iss case mein lag jao toh goli mar dunga.

Suhaani- Kya case mein?

Ajay- Mumbai mein Mona teen mahinei ek case mei lagi gayi thi. Yeh koi ek aadmi ke khilaf ek case. Maine soona Karamnath ke khilaaf..

Suhaani- Karamnath! My god! Acp ko bataane hoga mujhe! Phir?

Ajay- Aaj subhe mei maine Mumbai puhuchch gaye aur uski hotel saraf gaye. Wahaa se woh gayab ho gayi thi. Toh maine bahut doondh ki koshish ki, aur maine uski laash… uski laash mila hotel ki terrace par!

Suhaani- Ab kaha hain laash?

Ajay- Mere gaari mei… Maine tumhaari Delhi dost Yamini ko phone kiya aur pata chal gaya tum yahaa ho. Mei tumhaari majad…( He breaks down)

Suhaani (Her palm on his shoulder)- Mei tumhaari saath hoon. Maine abhi abhi Acp sir ko phone karungi aur tum laash lekar Bureau mei jao.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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PPL I WILL CONTINUE TO WRITE OTHER STORIES AFTER THIS STORY AS MY EXAMS ARE NEARING. I WILL TRY FINISHING DS ONE FAST B4 MY EXAMS... HOPE DAT S OKAY WT U !? AND THANX FOR READING AND ENCOURAGING ME! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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(Meanwhile)

Scene- Bureau

(Freddy slaps Manik, Manik becomes scared. He is sitting in in interrogation room, with Acp and Freddy standing on his either sides)

Acp-Bataao! Kyat um jaante ho Chimbu kaha hai? Bataao!

Freddy (Slapping the table hard)- Bolo! Jawaab do varna mein teri mooh pe aur chot lagaonga!

Manik (Sobbing)- Saab maine kuch nahi kiya! Aah! (As Freddy lifts his hand) Bataata hoon bataata hoon!

Acp- Jaldi bataao! Varna mei tumko thappar dunga!

Freddy- Sir aap thappar denge?

Acp- Freddy ab tum chup raho.

Freddy- Er yes sir sorry sir!

Acp- BOLO!

Manik (Stuttering)- S-s-s-sir mujhe ek aadmi paise diye thei Chimbu ko uss ghar ki chaabi den eke liye aur Raichand usko majad karne ke liye gaya tha chori ki kaam mein!

Acp- (His hand on hus forehead)- My god! You fool! Aur KAUN tha woh aadmi?

Manik- Mujhe nahi maaloom saab!

Freddy- Agar nahi…

Manik- Haan saab yaad aa gaya! Woh ek police informer hain! Naam Sam hain uska!

Acp (Thoughtful)- Sam…

(His phone rings)

Haan Suhaani. Bolo. What! Accha? Acp Ajay, Jaipur CID? Tumhaare dost? Accha? O god! Theek hain, haan bhej do yahaa hum intezaar karunga!

(Abhi and Vivek enter)

Acp- Freddy, le jao iss bhast aadmi ko (Freddy takes Manik away)

Abhi- Sir. Humme aur ek insaan ka nishaan mila hain.

Acp- Chimbu?

Vivek- Nahi sir. Ek aurat.

Acp- Kya!

Abhi- Haan sir. Pata nahi kaise par yeh policewaalon ne bataye humaare jaane ke baad ek aurat CID officer ban kar waha gayi thi. Humme uski nishaan mile ek shelf ke par.

Acp- Humaare records check kya?

Muskaan (Entering)- Haan sir dehkha lekin humaare records mein yeh ladki nahi hain!

Acp- Toh kaun ho sakta hain yeh ladki?

Abhi- Er.. Sir kya aap Suhaani ko… (Acp looks at him) Nahi sir sorry par mera matlab tha shayad woh apni investigation…

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Posted: 15 years ago
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very good going complete it soon waiting
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Drilabh, why did you give such a negative shade to all the officers. I can't even imagine Daya and Abhijeet getting jealous of their colleague. Don't make the CID team look like a bunch of villains.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhijeetdaya

Drilabh, why did you give such a negative shade to all the officers. I can't even imagine Daya and Abhijeet getting jealous of their colleague. Don't make the CID team look like a bunch of villains.



Relax! I LOVE abhi-daya too much! it's just dat they were suspicious and felt hurt at d way acp kept on keeping them at bay and praising suhaani.
even suhaani is at fault for having lost her temper in front of her seniors... it s all abt humans too.dont worry, d officers r nt negative, its jst they insecurity!

dont worry, CID will b always positive... and to me they r never villains- just officers who get emotional at tyms....

thanx for reading btw!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: drilabh



Relax! I LOVE abhi-daya too much! it's just dat they were suspicious and felt hurt at d way acp kept on keeping them at bay and praising suhaani.
even suhaani is at fault for having lost her temper in front of her seniors... it s all abt humans too.dont worry, d officers r nt negative, its jst they insecurity!

dont worry, CID will b always positive... and to me they r never villains- just officers who get emotional at tyms....

thanx for reading btw!


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i think i shud tell u all smthng b4 u ppl think i am gng to make shuh a hero and others a villain! no no dats wrong. u c suhaani is full of attitude as u can c. she is very proud and always keeps her pride before duty. so she is the one who is at fault. she shudnt have told daya in the beginning that she cant say wat she is doing. she shu not have warned abh-daya in the lab. she shud not have been so smug abt herself, making everyone feel really insecure! in front of acp she showd respect, in his absence she is very rude and haughty wt even her seniors. so abhi daya naturally feel too bad that they r rude to her. she was stupid to lose her temper too. asha will soon force her to apologise to them after revealing yet another truth. in d end she will change and d others wl forgive her.

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