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Posted: 15 years ago
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Scene- Courtyard of a small mandir

(Chimbu was dragging Aina. He was laughing, telling her today he will fulfil his wish of marrying her. She was terrified, screaming. It was a deserted place and the passer byes were used to such scenes so didn't bother. She was pleading and shrieking and praying at the same time. He half dragged her half carried her, already having beaten her up the other night. She was bruised all over.)

(Suddenly) Abhi- cchod do uss ladki ko!

(Chimbu stopped and looked up.)

Suhaani- CCHOD DO!

(Chimbu was unwilling and turned back with Aina's arm in his hand)

Muskaan - Agar tum usko naho cchoda toh Daya sir ka dawai khaayega!

(Aina was screaming, looking back at Abhi who was edging nearer and nearer. Seeing this Chimbu attempted to run in another direction, when)-

SSSLLLAAAPPP!

(Reeling from Daya's slap, he fell down. Daya powerfully held him up by his collar and shook him violently like a rat-" How dare you hurt Bhaabhi". Hearing this word Muskaan and Suhaani look at each other, then turn back to see Abhi.)

(Aina was in Abhijeet's arms, sobbing and shivering. Abhi gently held her and comforted her. Then he took her face in his palms and said,

" Tumhaari jagah ab mera dil mei hai. Tumko kuch nahi hoga. Tumko meine mera paas rakhunga."

She was simply sobbing silently but steadily calmed down. He half lifted her from the ground and with his arm around her shoulder held her. She calmed down slowly.)

(The team then leave, Daya manhandling Chimbu and dragging him away, and Suhaani and Muskaan with their guns out incase anything happened, and Abhi-Aina.)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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CID-ians, am really sorry but i have to start afresh my thread. I will post this story as a whole in a new thread. As my exams are coming, i will be even slower. A well-wisher here has advised me to finish the story then post it, as it is confusing to read if posted bit by bit. So i will post this story as soon as i finish in one whole in a new thread. Please dont mind. All inconvenience really regretted. Drilabh.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: drilabh

<font color="#ff0000">CID-ians, am really sorry but i have to start afresh my thread. I will post this story as a whole in a new thread. As my exams are coming, i will be even slower. A well-wisher here has advised me to finish the story then post it, as it is confusing to read if posted bit by bit. So i will post this story as soon as i finish in one whole in a new thread. Please dont mind. All inconvenience really regretted. Drilabh.</font>



Kahaani mein twist laana koi tumse seekhe yaar! It's really very very interesting. Sorry for my nagging all the time. Wishing you all the best for the exams. Pls complete the story as soon as possible. Waiting eagerly for it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhijeetdaya



Kahaani mein twist laana koi tumse seekhe yaar! It's really very very interesting. Sorry for my nagging all the time. Wishing you all the best for the exams. Pls complete the story as soon as possible. Waiting eagerly for it.



heya thanx a lot 😊 who said u r nagging😆 i welcome suggestions... actually i myself ws getting confused wt my story... well i wont change it but will tweak here and there especially d part where d officers behaved negatively wt suhaani!! 😛 everyone's suggestions are welcomed lolz

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