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Today I was planning on writing something else but instead I ended up writing this poem. Its on Chaya. I have always wondered what happened to her and will she ever be back. Unfortunately we never got a closure regarding Chaya who to me has been the one of the most tragic character in this show. She is the one who gave up everything and did not get anything in return...and my poem is just about some thoughts that are in my head regarding her.

its so good Mishti di...

She gave him up for time unknown,
The child of her heart but was she forced

Or did she relinquish her right because of times

Since she was not sure whether others would mind

And call the fruit of her heart names that no child should know

Is this the reason she gave up her child for time unknown.

This lines. I love them a lot..

I am poor in poetry, but can say that they are so good.

and these lines

Wonder what happened to her after she went away

Did she make peace with self and lived life not in vain

Were there hands holding her when the memories turned to grief

Or was she left alone facing the deluge with no one to brief

Did she force herself to harden her heart and look away

Or is she still waiting for the one whom she gave up for time unknown.

was she left alone facing the deluge with no one brief...

Chaya was one character who was surrounded by obligations around her. and being a good mother she doesn't want her son to be said as a father less guy, or some other,...

she took all the pain of abandoning her son and gave him to a person whom she belived can give him a better life...

Dev was bound by obligations from very childhood, and may had some pain, but Chaya would have suffered much more than him, becoz she knows that his son was alive. Dev doesn't know his mother was alive.. but she knows it and that will have more pain...

I always wonder how would it be potrayed if ever it was brought. But for me it was one such good character I wished to see.

Misti, I am glad that you started this thread. You had a thread like this in CB1 forum. I will comment on it later, but I am really happy that you talked about Chaya. She remained the tragic figure for whom no justice was done.

Originally posted by: why6

Misti, I am glad that you started this thread. You had a thread like this in CB1 forum. I will comment on it later, but I am really happy that you talked about Chaya. She remained the tragic figure for whom no justice was done.

I ended up hoping against hope until the end that instead of Madhavi/Padma/Dai or reforming Virat/Maheswari/Rohan, they would instead concentrate one episode on Chaya even if it was unbelievable where they would bring her back. They talked so much about Devki and Yasoda in this show and had actual Kanha. Yet Chaya was never brought back until the end.

Angie ji... Actually I expected Maheswari and Viraat to say some thign like a small sorry to Dev but they didn't...

and above all, there was sudden reveleation orf RR 's real identity and no responses abt it were shown. I am leaving all that

and whats humorous u know, they only talked abt Yashoda maiyya. Including Kanha he spoke of Yashoda maiyya only. so they showed two -two(Two for Dev, Two for Radhika)😉 Yashodas in show. But sad alas none spoke of Devki form start to last so no real mothers in show either it goes for Radhika or Dev

'the one who gave away' became too complicated for the writers they couldn't fashion out some sense n have her back, they were too hollow

Misti glad to see this thread and the poignant poem on Chayya made me shed a few tears on her feelings and its so hard to separate from a child at that stage she must have given her piece of heart and what she felt that would have made a lovely track involving the sentiments and made the trp audience cry and cry as some of the top shows do. what a missed track the mother son sentiment

Lovely sentimental sad poem Misti😭👏👍🏼

Originally posted by: sparklingeyes

Nice poem misti

Originally posted by: JustShanta

'the one who gave away' became too complicated for the writers they couldn't fashion out some sense n have her back, they were too hollow

thanks Mishti u r terrific !!!

Angie i do not understrand ''Yet Chaya was never brought back until the end''.
did i miss something ? but she was not brought back even till the end

Shanta, I miswrote in English. What I meant was that I hoped that they would either show one episode where Radhika finds Chaya (say when she was going to complete her vrats) and brings her back to Dev. Or they would show Dev finding her. Or at least at a minimum, a reference to her by Dev and telling Radhika that he wants his mother back and Radhika assuring him that they would jointly search for her and she is sure that Kanha would help them find her. Even if they had shown a conversation like this, at least it would have been good. But not even in the end she was ever mentioned.

very nice poem misti dont know what cvs had in mind they ignored good subject matter for good tracks and went every which way to make stupid tracks some times wonder the cvs were in kahoots with zee and PH to make boring stupid tracks the bhoot in rubi was just so stupid should have continued RB track and side side chaya track