Some thoughts;poems-index link page 1 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Myra.nelly

Sounds promising, will be waiting for it..

Originally posted by: instcris

What beautiful poetry, Misti. You described with so much emotion this mother's wait, thoughts of agrieving mother who is waiting still child taken from her chest, still in the bud. She lives with her ??thoughts, the anyone known, felt acutely the longing who killed her body. She throbs in each figure found in the way, who would she want to imagened the gesture of her husband, about unforgettable memories, transmitted to her boy, unseen in maturity. How sad life, must have had Chaya. What a pity it was not even a time sequence, after Dev discovered the truth about his mother. I strongly believe that Avinash had played with great art, because it is master of displaying sadness silent. Thanks, Misti!

Originally posted by: Myra.nelly

Sounds promising, will be waiting for it..

Originally posted by: why6

Misti, I am glad that you are writing something and Ushasri asked for it. I was planning to ask you to write up something on Dev finding Chaya and then seeing both reactions. In CB1, I always wanted to see Amma exposed and getting a punishment fitting her crimes. It didn't happen. In CB2, I wanted Chaya to come back and reunite with Dev and it didn't happen. So it would be good to see it at least in writing.

Misti beautiful work. I had tears in my eyes. The last para of the first poem touched me so deeply. I read in one of your post that you felt Chaaya was one of the most tragic characters in CB. So true. I totally feel that way too. And that would have been such a wonderful track, Chaaya and Dev. I have always loved the way Avinash has portrayed Dev in pain and anguish. Avi would have totally done justice to such a track.

You know your poems brought back a scene in CB1 that used to be one of my favorite scenes just for the poignancy it depicted of a motherless girl desperately wanting a mother's love. I think it was right after Devki catches Radhika and Dev in the kund where Radhika drowns and Dev saves her. Devki then totally ignores Radhika when she gets home. Radhika pleads Devki asking her the reason why she is ignoring her. My goodness that was such a heart wrenchingly beautiful scene. I am not sure why I associated this particular scene with your poems. But something about love denied between a parent and child gets to me. Thanks Misti for the beautiful poems.

Originally posted by: seema12345

gosh misti dont know how i missed this poem thread it sounds beautifull have read only the first and last page

will read all the others later on liked this idea of chaya and dev meeting

actually misti you have great style of wrting ---you make everything come alive with your humourus style of writing

how about writing a ff about radevs life and would love to have dada exposed as an egomaniac along with daima i dont know why but never liked daima reminded me too much of amma of cb1

i have ideas aplenty but wrting them down ----

wrote the written update one time and was a nervous wreck --but so happy did it-- didnt that after that in one months time no more cb.

Originally posted by: chayya55

wow just saw the link to cb1 poems

thanks misti will read them later