Some thoughts;poems-index link page 1 - Page 2

Originally posted by: misti73

To the one who gave away

Did she wonder about the life that he will lead

Without a mother's love to soothe the pains that he might feel

Or did she think that the ones to whom she is giving away

Would give him all the love that he will keep his fears at bay

Did that give her the strength to face the pain deep within

When she was giving up her child to others for time unknown.

Was she told that the child will gladden the days

Of the people who lived in castles and ease their pain

That the child will get all the joys that he would desire

Did that lead her heart to break and her thoughts in a mire

That made her think that maybe her love might not be enough

And did this prompt her to give up her child to others for time unknown?

Wonder what happened to her after she went away

Did she make peace with self and lived life not in vain

Were there hands holding her when the memories turned to grief

Or was she left alone facing the deluge with no one to brief

Did she force herself to harden her heart and look away

Or is she still waiting for the one whom she gave up for time unknown?

(c)MistiB

Originally posted by: chalhov

Misti glad to see this thread and the poignant poem on Chayya made me shed a few tears on her feelings and its so hard to separate from a child at that stage she must have given her piece of heart and what she felt that would have made a lovely track involving the sentiments and made the trp audience cry and cry as some of the top shows do. what a missed track the mother son sentiment

Lovely sentimental sad poem Misti😭👏👍🏼

Originally posted by: misti73

Thanks for the appreciation Chalhov. Don't cry Chalhov here is a 🤗 from me. I still remember her look when dada took away baby Dev from her...she had a helpless look as if she had no choice. Don't know what she must have gone through.It would have resulted in a very emotional track and tracks like these if written and executed well usually bring in TRPs.

Originally posted by: chayya55

very nice poem misti dont know what cvs had in mind they ignored good subject matter for good tracks and went every which way to make stupid tracks some times wonder the cvs were in kahoots with zee and PH to make boring stupid tracks the bhoot in rubi was just so stupid should have continued RB track and side side chaya track

Originally posted by: Neerjaa

Misti you are a gifted person , read your poems in CB1 and after that also , ...you have given voice to chhaya,s thoughts ...it was really very poignant poem , ...It was creatives job to have brought this character forth in the story ...may be Misti , one from Dev,s side , his thoughts , as creatives never felt the need to show his thoughts about his mother ...I really happy to see you back with your creation and i think others [ comic strips, cartoons ] etc.must be coming soon

Originally posted by: misti73