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WOW .. DI story just rock with each update , trip is enjoyable as well as interesting , u describe village life & its natural beauty very nicely , dev is still confuse about his feelings & hope now she may realise something ....Thanks .

Thanks Devika for the last 2 updates. Good, one has taken matters seriously, and the other is falling into the trap. enjoyable and do carry on.😃

Hi Devika

Loved the last two parts--

loved Chandenpur-a beautiful picturesque village; wish I could be there. Loved the whole scene in the tree----that scene was so much Radhika--fitted her personality completely.


Back to Delhi---the whole part of quibbling between Lechu and Dev and the movie scene was also beautifully described---

And Dev is he "falling in love"----

So now--the Act moves to US?....will Dev return or will Radhika go to US---
I just hope Dev's flight is delayed because of blizzard in NY😊 and he gets to stay back for a few more "days" in Delhi....

Wowww!!! amazing loved each scene.... Hope may happen something in between and DEv won't go to US...DEv he is falling in love he he he!!!What is next??? you are igniting my curiosity...

Loved the end part Devika:)

Awesome Devika...

Radhika studying..Devika u r really taking me to my home...I also used to take my books to my fields and read there..we have lots of ponds in my village and boats...i used to sit in boat and study peacefully in between nature..and even we had tractor but i never drove it though :) and i used to help dad in all his field works..i was the biggest advisor for him :)..after I left to hostel, he used to wait for weekends to do some of field works so that I will b hap to help him :)..even after leaving home for 12 years I still feel homesick..now I can really understand ur Radhika :)

Wow..Dev returned her something special..that part was so romantic..and now sending him to US..plz delay his trip for some more days and then u can send him to US and to my home for homemade food near Stanford :)

that 1 year hmmmm....... so dear 1 year go quick😉 that is cooool.

nice n coooool update 👏

GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm stuck for words!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lovely update devika... end part was too good...