FF -3 : Tum se Hi. - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Whoa! Aranya, you've done it again! The feelings and the delicate emotions that u have portrayed r simply beautiful!!! Do continue the good work!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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2 good
i loved it 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice work arayana ... ur potrayl of emotions is too gud
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wonderful part very well writen 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_kdr

Whoa! Aranya, you've done it again! The feelings and the delicate emotions that u have portrayed r simply beautiful!!! Do continue the good work!
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Dear luv_kdr.....do you really think I deserve so many praises....I dont think so.....please i really dont write that well!

thanks anyway for liking it😃

Aranya

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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 11:
The early morning, everybody packs their bags and head back to the base....Sameera feels ok in the morning and refusing help from everybody, she packs her own bag and proceeds along with the others.
Very soon by afternoon, they all reach the base.
Veer sir calls them and asks them how they all spent their time.
Samrat tells him how Sameera and Abhi had lost their way...Abhi then tells him that Sameera had an extra map which saved their lives.
Veer sir will appreciate Sameera;s thinking.
Just then Sameera's cell rings....she picks it up and talks to her mother. After talking for to minutes she becomes really happy and sarts smiling...a really true smile.
Veer sir observes a change in her emotions and asks her what the happiness was all ablout...Sameera replies that her brother Jugal is out of danger nd will be very soon alright.
Veer smiles nad then assigns them some work for the day.

Sameera stays back in the room and then walks to the window nad looks up at teh sky and thankx her father.
Veer sir is behind her and hears her out...he slowly walks to her and assk her whom she is talking to.
Sameear replies ....her father...she then tells him about her dad Shekar Singh....an officer like her whose dream was that she also become an officer.
Veer hearing the name is shocked, he asks her who her mother is.Sameera in reply walks to her ag and provides him with a photo having all her family together.
Veer sees the photo and stares at it....he realises for the first time...Sameera is his daughter.

Sameera then walks out of the room....with her bag, forgetting her photo with Veer sir.

Will cont soon.......

Aranya

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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 12:
That evening, Veer organises a party for the hawks.
In the party, Abhi sees Sameera very happy and enjoying herself.
Very soon Sunaina comes and announces the entry of her daughter....Shikha.
Shikha comes and looks at evrybody and goes straight to hug Abhi. And when she hugs him , she says I love you.
Abhi hugs her backa nd then Sunaina announces taht Abhi is going to be their damaar.
Sameera hears this and starts clapping...today is one day when she feels with peace with herself...she feels as if her Mamu has forgiven her and as if the feelings of guilt have been washed away from her life.

Then the hawks enjoy the party.....except for Veer...who keeps looking at sameera and deeply thinking about his past.
Very soon it is nighta nd time to go home.....Sameera and Tanvi walk back home when it starst raining heavily.....they both get drenched in the rain.
Tanvi then decides to call farhana nd ask him to bring a car to give them a lift.
Farhan instead sends Abhi to help them.
Abhi comes driving teh jeep and sees Tanvi and Samera fully wet.He gives them a hand and takes them to teh base.
When Abhi looks at Sameera, he feels very much drawn to her...as if something telling him in his heart that she is his....not anyone else's.....he feels as if he wants to always see her happy and smiling like this...as if he wants to wipe away all her tears and give her a lifetime full of happiness....
Suddenly these thoughts take his concentartion from the wheel and he soon starts trying to control the vehicle...when he hits a lamppost.
Sameera and Tanvi get out of the jeep and help Abhi also out. All the three of them stare at the damage....and at the rain..now reduced to drizzling.


Will cont soon......
PRECAP: Abhi's feelings......

Aranya

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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice
keep updating............ 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Yeah it will be taking me some time to update....till then please bare with me! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Aranya! Amazing posts and please keep writing!!!!
By the way did you read my ASORs??

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