FF -3 : Tum se Hi. - Page 2

wow.......
again nice story
cont fast 😊

PART 6:
Abhi tries to make small talk with sameera....but se doesnot evn respond to him the whole day.
The hawks will have a mission....to cut logs of wood and then make fire with the help of stones. Abhi decides to test Sameera nd asks her to cut the logs of wood and bring them....while he gives Farhan the job of lighting a fire.
Farhan looks at Abhi quetioningly....What would Abhi do...But Abhi doesnot answer him and he sits down to cook for them.
Sameera takes her saw and goes to the tree branches she is supposed to cut....it is very hard work and the labour and energy that she must spend is enormous!!!
Next to the tree, she sees some parts of another tree cut previuosly by Farhan....she takes them and cuts it into smaller pieces.

Then Sameera carries them back to the area where their tents were there...She places the pieces on the ground.
Abhi looks at her...amazed at her strenght...this girl is strong he realises...unlike what she wants to look!
AbhI cuts th veggies while Farhan lights the fire....
THen they all have dinner....Sameera eats very little and doesnot even talk to Farhan when he asks her whether he coul help her put up the tent.

Abhi tries to figure out wht is wrong with her....but she acts as if the world matters nothing to her.
Night befalls and Sameera puts up her tent with the greatest strenght she can muster.

The next morning , after 8 Am , all th hawks meeta nd resume their journey together more deep into the woods.
On the way , there would be nothing to eat.
All the hawks would be famishd by now and would be losing their energy.
Sameera hears Tanvi complaining to Isha about how difficult it aws going to be for her...to carry on.
Sameera then stops on the way....in front of evrybody...opens her bag and produces 6 packets of Lays.
The hawks shout and greedily snatch the packets....Tanvi and Isha hug Sameera....still Sameera says nothing...she keeps quiet all the time...with not even a smile on her lips!
Farhan , Samrat..also hug her...but she doesnot respond.
Abhi wouldnot have moved even an inch till now...so Sameera offers him one...so he moves forward and accepts it, trying to read her expressions...

Sameera puts the extra packet into Tanvi's hand and closes her bag and starts the journey forward...All the hawks look at her...she eats nothing but is offering everything she had to someone else!
Tanvi tries to give the remaining packet back to Sameera...but she alresdy would have walked a mile ahead of them.
Tanvi looks at Abhi asking him what was wrong with Sameera...Abhi looks away..because he knows what is wrong with her...she is suffering some loss that is binding her as if a question of life and death.

Abhi doesnot have his packet but instead walks behind Sameera leaving all the others to finish their packets.
Very soon , he catches up with her.....he then asks her:" Sameera tum hamesha se itne weak ho kya?"
Sameera looks at him..th word weak striking her fast and hard.
Abhi , glad to have her attention continues:" Sameera shayad tum nahi jaanti ho...har insaan jo born hota hain, usse ek na ek din maarna bhi hain."
Sameera looks at Abhi and then turns away....tears coming again to her eyes...falling on her cheeks nad then down to her chin...she mangaes to still reply:" Main jaanthi hoon....lekin mere apne ko khone ke baad -"

Sameera stops in mid sentence...thinking why on Earth was she at all explaining to him...she turns away and wipes her tears.
Abhi understands the change in her actions and holds out his packet to her...she refuses...but he pesters her saying taht then she will laso die os starvation.
Sameera unable to get rid of Abhi takes one piece.

Will cont soon....do tell me how it is...I am trying to bring out Sameera;s emotions slowly one by one...hope it is as interesting as I want it...

Aranya

wonderful part aranya u portrayed the sam's sadness so well nice part 👏

awesome work aryana ...... keep updating soon

aranya,
as usual awesome 👏 👏

PART 7:
Very soon...Sameera realises that her stomach is growling....she takes a few more pieces from Abhi's packet and eats them.
Abhi smiles knowingly about her feelings.
After walking almost for half an hour , both of them decide to rest down. Sameera sits on a stone and tries to call her mother....unfortunately there is no network connection there and she sighs.....
Sameera then places her head between her legs and lies down.
Abhi keeps watching her....trying to read her feelings...but unknown to his own self , he feels very drawn to her and likes watching her every move.

They wait for about 15 min there.,..for the others...who dont arrive there....they seem to have lost their way.
Abhi and sameera realise this very much later and run back the whole way to see if they can find the others....but in vain.
Sameera then throws her bag down and says....:" Now what will I do? There is no food also....all the food bags were with Samrat and Tanvi.....aur mujhe tumhare saath rehna hain .....kaisi mushkil hain "
Abhi throws his bag also and then looks at her and says..." I know what a problem when trouble like you is so near me."

Sameera hears Abhi....and feels very hurt....no one has ever called her a trouble before. She squeezes her eyes shut to stop the tears that now lie at the very tip of her eyes from flowing. She turns away to let Abhi not have a chance to know that he hurt her....but she seems so weak these days that she is not able to control her tears.....she immediately gets up from the ground where she had sat and runs away.
Abhi sees her suddenly running away and takes both her bags and his and runs behind her.

Sameer runs until she is no longer able to continue....she hugs a tree and cries out...all her tears making her eyes hurt.....she needs someone who can help her out....she has hidden everything till today...but now it just seems impossible to hold back what she has. Flashes of her Mamu , Beeji and jugal keep coming back to her...she cries softly still and till no more she can manage....she silently drops down to the ground still hugging that tree.

Abhi would have followed her all the way.....when he sees her crying , he understands that he must have hurt her or triggered her to cry....but he is shocked at one thing....Sameera cries so softly without making any noise for the loss she is going through.
Slowly he walks towards her and tries to reach out to her,.....when suddenly she turns back and hugs him.
Abhi is shocked for words....this is the first time that he has been in so much nearness to a women...and of all Sameera.
Sameera doesnot seem to realise her mistake....alll she wants is someone who can hear to whjat she has to say....she needs to justify herself for the guilt that runs through her everytime and to ask someone she knows to beg god to save her brother.

Will cont soon.....

There is one thing I would like to share with all of you....this FF is aimed at the emotions of Abhi and Sameera....who will have to take care of their feelings for the country and their emotions.
I titled it Tum Se Hi...to show in later parts how much Abhi and sameera's lives depends on each other and they have to find solutions to problems.....where the solutions will interlink their emotions!

Thankx
Aranya

thanks for the update please continue soon
really a cool one 👏 👏 👏

it is really good......keep updating fast 😃

good potrayal of emotions.Please continue soon.