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Posted: 17 years ago
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Will take 2 days to update themm.....so please wait for me!!!
I am really sorry...but I wills urely update tham ASAP!

Thankx
Aranya
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
😛 Wow your ff rocks plz do continue soon .............. 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
Aranya, yaar, ur so very talented! Some of ur stories really make me cry, be it out of happiness or sadness!!!!
Plzzz update soon!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 8:
Suddenly , Sameera sees their bags falling down....she pulls herself from Abhi's hug and runs down the cliff to save them.
It takes Abhi some time to adjust to his being not hugged anymore....he looks around a second later to find Sameera no more there.
He runs around searching for her...when suddenly he looks down the cliff to see her now rolling down stretching her hand foer the bags....Sameera would be rolling uncontrolled.
Abhi also immediately jumps down the cliff and he too ends up rolling down the cliff....and very soon catches up with her....now they roll one on another!

Very soon , SAmeera reaches for a rock and tries to steady herself...but Abhi comes down on her and she bangs her head on to the rock.
It hurts her and she cries out in pain...it starts bleeding and she is no longer able to bear the pain...she passes out.
Abhi realises his fault...he tries to wake her up but with no effort...he sees the blood and then understands that the pain must be terrible.....he stands up a little dizzy after the rolling and loks around him...he doesnot know where they are.
He tries searching for their bags...but everything seems to be unfortunate.
He is now in the deep forest with a bl;eeding girl and with no food and change of clothes...no money , no cell and in simple words nothing.

He agains tries to wake Sameera up....but she doesnot seem to be in any position to be able to stand or walk. He then lifts her slowly and carries her...and walks under a shady tree.
He places her down and then goes in search of water....something that could atleast wake her.
Abhi walks in the hot sun for a very long time....searching .....and at last at some distance, he finds their bags. He runs to that point , picks them up and walks back to the place where he left her.
On walking back there, he doesnot find her....he curses under his breath and now runs around with two heavy bags everywhere he can in search of Sameera.

Sameera on the other hand would have got up and gone in search of Abhi...and water...she would be extremely thirsty by now nad would do anything for a glass of water.

Will cont soon........

I am gl;ad all of you liked the story so far...thanks a ton for all your replies!
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Aranya

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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 9:
Sameera runs everywhere searching for Abhi...her head hurting and she's very tired too.....
Abhi shouts out her name once...Sameera hears it and replies....Abhi comes in the direction of her voice nad finds her standing there too weak and hurt...unlikely to do anything.
He finds her and immediately rushes to her witha bottle of water...Sameera takes it gratefully and then drinks it .
That calms her down and gives her the stability to stand.
Abhi looks around them and finally zeroes in on a place that would be ideal to saty the evening and the night.

Sameera walks up to Abhi and tells him that it actuallly seesm to her taht they ahve lost their way and not The others. Abhi stares at her in shock.
Sameera takes her bag, opens it and hands over to him a map.
Abhi takes it from her and then looks at her...he gets angry...why the hell didnt she tell him before that she had a map...then they could have avoided all this problems.
He asks Sameera angrily.....Sameera looks at him and suddenly turns away ignoring him...She has had enough for today with all the running and hurting..she cant stand to answer him.

Abhi reads the map and then tells her that he knows that they can find their way back. Sameera nods back at him. Abhi then opens his bag to put up the tent...But sees Sameera packing her bag.
He asks her:" Kya kar rahi hoon?"
Sameera:" Hum abhi chalenge...nahi toh kal kya ho saktha ..."
Abhi looks at her..thinking that she is the most strangest of all people he ever knows.
I mean tell me when you are so hurt and in pain...which sort of person wants to continue their journey?

Abhi is marvelled at her punk...he packs his bag and both of them start of for the journey.
Sameera doesnot even take a break the whole time.
Abhi and she walk the whole long stretch taht they had to cover....and finally by 9 in the night, they make it to the piont where they see teh other tents of teh other hawks put up.
The others come ang hug them.
Sameera hugs Tanvi and sits down and very soon she is so tired that she just drops down.

Tanvi looks at her and then shouts for teh others to comee. Everybody then see Sameera hurt badly on her forehead...Isha rushes and fetches the aid box to help dress her wound.

Will cont soon.........

PRECAP: Shikha's entry and Veer comes to realise about Sameera.

Aranya
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i will be posting the next parts after a few days....so please wait for me..Thank you so much!

Aranya
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Posted: 17 years ago
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its ok
thank u for the update

Ek aur sham ja chuki hai zindagi ki, Ek aur din aayega zindagi ka,Ye mat socho k kitne lamhe hain zindagi me,Ye socho k kitni zindagi hai har lamhe me.
Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
Please Aranya jaldi post karo !!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 10:
Sameera is immediately carried to the tent by Samrat...and put to sleep.
Tanvi then asks Abhi about what happened ...Abhi replies in bits a nd pieces.Tanvi nods...but feels Abhi is not telling her something...very soon Farhan calls them.
Tanvi and Isha go inside to see Sameera getting up...after Samrat would have poured water on her face.
Sameera gets up and Tanvi gives her water to drink and some food to eat.
Sameera takes the water and refuses the food..saying that she is not hungry.
Tanvi realises that she is telling lies...she forces her to eat.
Sameera then gets very angry and asks her having heard once cant she understand.

Sameera gets up and then feels very weak...her whole bady aches and she is unable to even walk....she feels really nauseatic also.
She loses her balance when Farhan holds her...he realises that she has very high fever.
He immediately tells Samrat and Tanvi and both of them get medicines.
Isha and Farhan help carry Sameera...she will be fighting with them that she would be alright but they dont agree.

Sameera with one force of strenght breaks from their hold and runs away....Isha tries to go behind her...but really she neednt have worried. Abhi sees Sameera running awaya nd catches hold of her. Sameera tries very hard to get free...why the hell cant these people understand...she needs to be alone ..she is hurt and her eyes are stinging with tears that she cant control...Sameera hates crying in front of others because she thinks that it shows her weakness.

Abhi holds her and drags her back to the tent....Sameeera has no strenght in front of Abhi and she quietly lets herself to be taken back.
She goes inside and drinks water and the tablets that Tanvi gives her....then she turns away from all of them and asks to be left alone.
All of the hawks agree and walk out except for Abhi.

Sameera doesnot notice Abhi still remaining there...in fact she doesnot notice anyone not being there....she only cries....she needs her family , her home , her brother, Beeji , Mamu back...nothing else matters....she needs her mother.
She feels so bad and ill...her whole body not able to grieve over her loss....
Sameera then coughs and claps her hand over her mouth.
She feels something sticky and then sees that there is blood on her palms.
She is horrified......

Abhi notices it too...he immediately walks over to her and makes her sit down...and then provides her water telling her rest is waht she requires.
Sameera looks away...Abhi then asks her to tell him everything that she has on her mind....Sameera looks at him and without knowing what she wants to say starts off from the very beggining.....all those memories coming back and making her feel guilty , small and hard.

Abhi listens to her...now understanding all her pain..he looks at her catches hold of her hand and wipes her tears and asks her to go to sleep...Sameera does what he says...she finds something in him that reminds her of a person who she always wanted to call her own.


Will cont soon.............

Aranya
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
nice update please continue it soon
thank u
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