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Hi guys.....once again.

I am back with another FanFiction.....which i would like to call Tum Se hi. This one's story will be a little different from the actual CHA. The character sketch and layout will be slightly different too. I just hope that you will like reading this too........I surely will try to make it as interesting as possible.

I just love writing....anything to do with narration or writing.....hence here is my third Fan fic. It will be taking me a while to update all the three at one go...so please wait for me.

I will be posting the first part now........as and when I introduce new characters , I will give a brief insight beforehand.

PART 1: &nbs p; &nbs p; &nbs p; &nbs p; &nbs p;

It is the first day when Veer sir calls a meeting for the new division formed within the Hawks. All are present there except for two people. Sameera and Abhi.

Veer sir introduces himself to the rest of the hawks and also introduces each one of themselves to the others. Farhan Khan , Tanvi Sharma , Samrat Shekhawat , Isha Oberoi. All of them shake hands and are then shown by Veer sir into their staying areas. He says that there are two more people to join the hawks who will be coming in later.

In the mean time, Sameera receives her letter.......she is thrilled and she goes screaming about the house to her beeji and Jugal, her brother and mother and of course her Rahim Mamu. Hearing her shout , Rahim Mamu comes running ......and accidentally slips on a wet surface and falls down. He breaks his hip bone.

Sameera and her mother hearing the sound of breakage come running to find him completely disabled to even move his body.......rush him to the hospital. SThe doctor informs Sameera and her mom that it will take atleast require 5 to 6 days for him to completely recover. Sameera is aghast. She calls up to the IAF base and requests for a delay of joinig the hawks by 5 days. Veer picks up the phone and is very unhappy about the delay.

He is a man of perfection and delays make him angry. He reluctantly agrees becasuse it is her first time.

It takes more than 5 days for Mamu to get alright. Sameera decides and makes up her mind.....she cant stay here longer. Her country needs her and so she has to go. On the 4th night , she bids goodbye to Mamu and her mother and leaves.

The next morning , Rahim Mamu gets up in the hospital......his eyes searching for his daughter......it seems to him that she has left. He is very unhappy that she left him and went away......but he is in bliss because she can finally be an IAF. He closes his eyes and never wakes up again.

Will cont soon.................do read this too

Thankx

aranya

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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice part aranya i read ur ff 4 first time but it looking really nice n interesting1 keep coming them nd continue soon nd show our very own abhi cutest guy 😳
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PART 2:
Sameera reaches the Base the early next morning. She reports into the meeting room with her bags at sharp 7 AM as asked by Veer sir.
On entering the room, she sees the other 4 hawks standing there and walks in a little nervously.
Veer introduces her to the rest and the 4 of them also introduce themselves to her.
Sameera is then shown to her living premises by Tanvi and Isha.Sameera becomes very good friends with all of them.

That afternoon , she gets a call from her mother who would have just reached the hospital...after her chores to see that Mamu would be no more. Sameera hears her mother out in silence and then slowly keeps the phone.
Tears come out of her eyes and she sits down....unable to think of anything. She only feels guilty....first of all because of her screaming in the house, did Mamu come running to meet her and hence slipped down and secondly , because of her leaving Mamu , he was now no more.
Sameera cries for a while and then decides to do what she usually does when she is very sad.....go for a long drive in the meadows to forget her problems temporarly at least.
When Sameera gets into the jeep....she is stopped by some fellow....a strong one who pushes her out of the jeep and climbs in and goes away. Sameera gets up and yells after him but in vain. Then she walks back to the base to find that same man there.
She walks up to him and asks him :" Tum aapne aap ko kya samajhthe ho? Mujhse aisa dhaka kyun mara?"

the guy turns out to be Abhimanyu Adhikari, the next or should I say the 6th member of the hawks. He looks at Sameera with an expression of pure arrogance. Who the hell was she to even ask him that,.....if she was an officer than she must know of him.....he was a prisoner of War and has finally escaped.....first thing he had to do was to report into Base and meet Veer sir.

Sameera sees his look and turns away.....she would deal with him later....as it is she had too much on her mind. Abhi takes her turning away from him as her fear and laughs at her.
Sameera just ignores him and walks away to her room. In the loneliness of the room, her guilt and her sadness comes back once again to her......she very soon gets a call on her cell. Veer sir wanted the hawks to assemble at the meeting room.

Sameera wipes her tears and goes to the meeting room. She once again sees that man.....uhgh! would not he leave her in peace for atleast once?
Veer sir introduces Abhi to all of them and all the 5 hawks introduce themselves to Abhi. When Sameera's turn comes to introduce herself , she hears Abhi mutter under his breath:" Air Force officer aur woh....kya selection kiya hain aapne Veer sir!"
She automatically stops in the mid sentence of saying who she was....
Farhan comes to her rescue and tells Abhi who she was.
Abhi nods and smirks away.....glad she knew what he thought of her.

Will cont soon........do read this too.....I will keep updating all the three!

Precap: Sameera's second loss.

Aranya

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank u

Mohabbat karke dekho to
Mohabbat kya nahi karti
Mohabbat khud bhi hoti hai
Mohabbat khud hojaati hai
Mohabbat khud banati hai
Mohabbat khud bhi banti hai
Mohabbat khud bhi andhi hai
Mohabbat andha karti hai
Mohabbat jhuk bhi sakti hai
Mohabbat jhuka bhi deti hai
Mohabbat khud bhi nafrat hai
Mohabbat Pyaar bhi karti hai
Mohabbat Pyaar hai Dil ka
Mohabbat esaar bhi karti hai
Mohabbat kaam hai dukh ka
Mohabbat naam hai sukh hai
Mohabbat naam hai is ka
Mohabbat is hi ko kehte hain
Mohabbat karke dekho to
Mohabbat kya nahi karti.

Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 3:
Veer sir then in the second week...gives the hawks a very vigorous training...esp exercising.
The whole week Sameera would be tired and will have hardly any stamina by the end of the week...she would have lost most of her energy and will be looking very weak.

The other hawks would have been already in the order of training weeks before she arrived....after all she was a new member to this team. Only Abhi ridicules at her and tries to hurt her in every way possible. Sameera gets fed up him and becomes very good friends with tanvi who always tries to save her.

Late evening on the Sunday , Veer sir tells the hawks that they have to prepare themselves for their first mission and for taht they will have to spend two nights deep in the forest....which would be fully packed with animals ( of course! )
The hawks make preparations necessary for the trip. Veer makes them into two teams.....One having Abhi , sameera and Farhan and the other having Samrat , Isha and tanvi.
The leader of the first team would be Abhi and the second one Samrat.

The members of teh teams would ahve to obey to the rules of their leaders. Sameera hated to hear this from Veer sir...that means she wil have to do everything abhi tells her!
The two teams set off on their journey....they soon appear at a crossroad. The team 1 will have to take the left and the second team the right.
They separate ways and soon reach the location where they have to put up their tents.

Sameera has soem difficulty in putting up her tent and asks Farhan to help her....But abhi intervenes and asks Farhan not to help hera s an officer should be able to do this on her own!
Sameera gets really fed up but is tired nd tries 5 times to put it up....not possible by her.
By the time she gives up , Abhia nd Farhan would have been asleep.
Sameera takes out her sleeping bag and sleeps outside in the forest having nothing to cover her from the cold!

Will cont soon......keep reading this too....
Thankx
Aranya

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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh pls update today only. i am greedy so pls update šŸ˜† šŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks for the update please continue soon
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PART 4:
Sameera has the mosquitos and the cold to keep her company....she starts shivering in the night.
But the next early morning , around 3 am , she gets a call on her cell. The sound wakes her up and she takes the call.
It is her mom....Sameera finds it difficult to talk in the forest and puts it on the loud speaker mode.
And she walks behind a tree to take the call.
Unknown to her, Abhi also is awake due to the sound of the ringing of her cell. He gets up and comes outside to see sameera walking behind the tree. He notices that she would ahve spent the whole night out.....and also he can hear every word she is speaking!

Sameera takes the call....her mother starst cryinga nd aftera few minutes breaks the news to her....Sameera's beeji is no more. Sameera hears it and starts sobbing too. Her mother tells her what happened .....y'day, Jugal and her beeji would have been in the gaddi when someone would have hit theirs causing the whole vehicle to overturn and.....Her mom also tells her that Her Brother Jugal is very badly hurt and that he might not live long at all.

Abhi hears it along with sameera.....sameera then keeps the phone down and starst crying completely....her mind races to God...she asks Him why he was doing this to her.
She cries fora long time and then realises taht abhi would have been watching her. She looks away and wipes her tears and then wlaks away from that place.

Ssry for the small part. ....will surely cont 😃 soon....
Aranya
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PART 5:
Sameera walks away from there are into the forest....she finds a rock and sits on it....and cries openly. Her feelings of guilt come back again....she asks God...first her dada , then her Mamu , then her beeji and then finally was he going to take Jugal away too? She feels very depressed.....like those who feel so after their near ones leave them forever.

Abhi follows her and sees her there....lonely and forlorn. He decides that he must comfort her....whether he likes her or not....she is so vulnerable and so lost and unhappy...that his heart aches to sooth her.
He walks in front of her and sits beside her...Sameera doesnot notice...then Abhi reaches for her chin and makes her look at him...trying to say things to comfort her.....Sameera doesnot hear anything he says....but somehow she reaches for his shirt and starts crying all over again...placing her head into his chest.
Abhi pats her back and sits like that with her until her last bout of tears are over....Sameera then stands up, wipes her tears and runs back to the area where their tents were.

Abhi slowly comes back too....astonished at her act.First she cries and then she runs????
He sees her fishing something out of her bag....a photo and that he guesses of Jugal...Sameera says into the photo:" Jugal tum jeeyoge....Main tumhe milne ke liye nahi asakti....I have to fulfill my dad's wish. You are strong jugal....you will live. I promise you that. Nothing will happen to you! Show the world your strenght Jugal...you will and must live!"
Sameera then looks at the sky and says:" Papa aap kahi yaha hi he...please Jugal ko bacha di jeeye. Main aap ka sapna poora kar rahi hoon....Air force officer baneka."

Abhi looks at her strong willed attitude and si shocked...is she the same girl who was so weak y'day to put up a tent?

Sameear then cooks breakfast for the boys....The whole time Sameera doesnot uttera single word to Abhi...and stays away from him as far as possible.

Will cont soon.....do read it!

PRECAP: More sameera nd Abhi nd Shikha's entry!

Aranya
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr8 work well written continue soon šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘

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