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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
Posting Parts 19 and 20 😊

PART 19:
Farhan returns with the blood bottles. He hands them over to the doctor.Immediately Veer sir is priority and the doctors go to help him.
Within a few minutes, Sunaina arrives there...she has a worried look on her face as she hears Shikha sobbing about her dads condition.Shikha tells her mom about what Veer sir did for sameera.
Sunaina has enough when she hears that for that Sameera's sake Veer put his own life at a risk.She gets up from her seat next to Shikha nd decides to call it quits.
Suniana goes to the room in which Veer is admitted and asks the doctors if she could see him. They refuse.
So Sunaina decides to tackle Sapna in front of everybody.
She enters Sameera's room and sees her fast asleep.She pulls Sameera brutally till sameera with teh pain of being pulled opens her eyes with a scream.
Abhi earing her scream rushes to her room.
Sunaina then pulls Sameera by her hands and makes her sit upright and questions her:"Tumne kya kiya? Veer ki zindagi ko tumne danger main daal diya....tum apne aap ko kya samajhthi ho? Woh mere pati hain and main chahithi hoon ki woh apna jeevan khushi se rahe. Unka kaisa haaal kar diya tumne?" Tumhe sharam nahi aati hain kya?"
sameera:"Maine kya kiya hain aunty?"
Sunaina this time pulls her ears and scolds her really badly telling her that for her sake Veer put his life in danger.
Sameera cries out due to the pain....Abhi intervenes and pulls Sunaina away from Sameera and holds Sameera....:"Aunty Sameera ab tak theek nahi hain....aur uski koi galti nahi hain...Veer sir ne apne hi marzi se ise blood diy hain."

By this time , Sameera's mother would have entered the room.....seeing Sunaina hurting Sameera...she goes to sunaina and holds her right hand up in a gesture of slapping Sunaina.
Sunaina:"Acha ab tum mujhe marogi?Pehle apni beti ko sambhalo and phir mujhe marne ki koshish karo."
Smeera's mom :"Nahi bhut ho gaya...tumhe dimaag nahi hain kya?Apne aap ko pehle tum sambhalo. Sameera theek nahi hain...hospital main isseliye hain.ky tumhe bhagvaaan ne ankhe nahi diya hain kya?"
Sunaina:"Mere paas dimaag hain aur isseliye aaj tumhari is beti ko wh raaz bataongi jo uski poori khushiya aur jeene ka mazaa cheenlegi.....Kya batadu usse uske pita ke baare main?"

PART 20:
Sameera' mom gets very scared at sunaina's prospect and pulls her aside telling her:"Nahi aisa please mat karo....main Sameera ko dukhi nahi dekh sakti."
Sunaina:"Acha aab kya huwa...tum dar gayi na.....main aaj Sameera ko batake hi rahongi."
Sameera hears her mom and Sunaina talking something and asks them:"Maa mere pita ke baare main Sunaina aunty jaante hain...unhe batane ko dijie ....main zarroor jana chahoongi ki mere pita kaun hain."
Sunaina:"Very good sameera.....abhi batadoongi ...kush time do main abhi aati hoon."
Suanina calls everyone in to the room including Shikha , Tanvi , Farhan , Isha. Meanwhile Abhi tries to talk Sameera off talking about her dad:"Sameera hey sab baat karne ki kya zaroorat hain....tumhare paap-"
Sameera cuts him off:"Abhi maine aaj thak na mere paap ko kabhi dekha hain aur nahi unse kabhi baat ki hain...main 100% jaana chahoongi."
Sunaina pulls the gang and comes in.

Simultaneously Veer would have got the required stuff done and will be very eager to meet Sameera. he asks the doctors to take him to sameera's room....they agree.
On reaching her room, he sees everyone listening to someting Suanina is saying. He tries to hear what she is saying--
Sunaina:"Sameera tumhare pita ko tumne dekha hain and tumhare pita abhi bhi zind hain...aur ye baat tumhari maa bhi jaanti hain...tumhare pitha-"
Veer intervenes:"Shut up Sunaina....tum yeh kya keh rahi ho?"
Sunaina turns back hearing Veer's voice..:"Bohut accha huwa ki tum aa gaye Veer...main toh bs Sameera ko aapne pitha ka naam bata rahi thi."
Veer looks at Sapna and finds her sobbing and vulnerable to the fact of how she will be answering Sameera's questions. veer makes up his mind then and there.
Veer:"Sameera main tumhe tumhara pitha ka naam bataonga...tumhe yeh kisi aur ke mooh se sunne ki koi zarooratnahi hain."
Sameera looks at veer sir and says:"Sir thank you so much for everything.Aaj aapne mere jaan bhi bacha liya and now aap mujhe mere pitha ka naam bhi bata rahe ho...i am so happy sir."

Sorry.......but will continue soon....In the next parts I will try to make it really enjoyable. 😉 😛
Till then bye 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
nice one

I love the way you talk and smile,
For you I can go that extra mile,
I love you forever, for you I ll wait,
Years will pass, I wont count the date,
I am with you each moment of your life,
Dont ever be said, dont ever you sigh,
My smell you ll find in your air,
Close your eyes, and i ll be there !!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: kvn1983

nice one

I love the way you talk and smile,
For you I can go that extra mile,
I love you forever, for you I ll wait,
Years will pass, I wont count the date,
I am with you each moment of your life,
Dont ever be said, dont ever you sigh,
My smell you ll find in your air,
Close your eyes, and i ll be there !!

All of u r so talented👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Silver Screen

All of u r so talented👏

thank u for ur praise

Beauty is not in the face; Beauty is a light in the heart. Love is something eternal.... The aspect may change, But not the essence.

Roses are red
My heart is sad
A smile from you
Will make me glad...


Remember me from day to day,
Remember me when far away,
AND
When a grave should be my bed,
And remember me when i am dead...

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Posted: 17 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: kvn1983

thank u for ur praise

Beauty is not in the face; Beauty is a light in the heart. Love is something eternal.... The aspect may change, But not the essence.

Roses are red
My heart is sad
A smile from you
Will make me glad...


Remember me from day to day,
Remember me when far away,
AND
When a grave should be my bed,
And remember me when i am dead...

u r welcome yaar😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
really iam also waiting to see what happen next

Follow your own heart, Not others.

Love and Perfume cannot be hidden.

What is a BEAUTIFUL Girl???
An innocent dove,
A pillar of beauty,
A temple of love,
A faithful companion,
A friend in distress,
The richest treasure a man can possess..


Never wound hearts that love you,
Never give them the endless pain,
Because wounded hearts,
Are like roses that never bloom...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
Here are parts 19 and 20

PART 19:
Sameera now looks very eagerly towards Veer sir wanting to know about her dad.....the one who made a huge part of her life.
Veer has second thoughts on whether he should tell her about her real dad.He tries to start the conversation when Sapna intervenes...:"Sameera tumhare papa -"
Veer doesnot let her finish. He decides that if there was someone who should Sameera , it must be him.
Veer:"Sameera tumhare pitha ke baare main tumhe kuch batana chahoonga.Uske baad tum khud unhe pechaan paaogi."
Sameera:"Theek hain sir."
Veer:"Tumhare pitha ek Air Force Officer the.Unhe apna desh se bohut pyaar tha aand bohut pyaar hain. Unhe ek din ek mission pe jaana tha. Tab unki mulaqat ek anjaani ladki se huwa.Woh use dekhte he, pyaar karne lage.It was love at first sight. Uska naam Anuradha tha.
Tumhare pitha ne us ladki ko apna naam Shekhar Singh bataya."
Sameera :"Kya paap ka naam Shekhar Singh nahi hain ?"
Veer:"Nahi Sameera unka naam ....tum pechaanogi tab thak meri kahani suno."
"Mission kuch hi dino main Khtam ho gaya tha. Aur tumhare pitha ko wapas aana pada.Lekin woh Anuradha ko kabhi nahi bhool paye."
As Veer says this, he looks at Sapna and she looks at him....(very "ajeeb sa" feeling hain.)

Veer continues:"Uske baad tumhare pitha ki maa ne unhe shaadi karne ke liye kaha tha.Unki maa bohut bimaar thi and bhudhi bhi.Unhone tumhari pitha se wada liye tha ki - woh ek minister ki beti ke saath shaadi karenge.
Tumhare pitha ne bohut koshish ki unhe samjhane ke liye ki woh ek aur ladki se pyaar karte hain....tab unki maa ne kaha ki agar 3 mahine main woh us ladki se mila sakte hain toh uske saath shaadi kar sakte hain."
Sameera:"AAp papa ke baare main itna kaise jaante hain?"

Veer(ignores the question and still continues in a very casual sort of voice):"Tumahare pitha ne saare jagah dhundha lekin tumhari maa unhe nahi mili.3 mahine ho gaye and unhe minister ki beti ke saath shaadi karni padi. Woh us minster ke beti se pyaar nahi karte the aur na hi karthe hain..... par unki ek beti bhi hain us minister ki beti ke saath."
"Jab tum Hawks join kari na , tab tumhari maa aur tumhari pitha ne ek doosre ko 25 years ke baad mile."

Sameera:"Toh mere papa....abhi bhi zinda hain aur......(?looking questioningly at her mom) maa aap papa se mile aur mujhe bataya nahi?"
Sapna:"Sameera maine isseliye nahi kaha kyunki main tumhe dukh nahi dekhna chahithi thi."
Sameera:"Is ka kya matlab huwa? Yaniki aap ne mujhe andhere main aaj tak rakha? Ap ne ye kabhi nahi socha ki main jise dekh na aur milna chahathi hoon woh mere sab se pyaara sapna hain? Toh kya huwa....ki woh koi aur ke saath rehte hain...toh kya huwa unki ek aur beti hain???"
Sapna:"Sameera beta mujhe maaf kardo...maine galti ki hain...lekin ye tere bhalayi le liye hain kiya tha"
Sameera:"Mere bhalayi ke liye...toh phir mujhe kyon acha nahi lag raha hain. Main ye baat papa ke baare main kisi aur ke muh se sun rahi hoon....lekin aap ke muh se nahi. Mujhe aaj pehle baar aap ko maa kehne main thakleef ho rahi hain-"

Abhi:"Sameera tumhari maa ne jo bhi kiya theek hi kiya.Woh tumhare sawallon ka jawab nahi de paa sakti hain....isseliye jo bhi kiya acha kiya."
Sameera :"Abhi tum bhi!Kya aap sab jaante hain ki mere pitha kaun hain balki main nahi jaanti hoon. Mujhe jaaana chahiye lekin...Veer sir jaante hain ...sab jaante hain----"
Sunaina now decides to break all this acting.
She says:"Sameera main jaanti hoon...Veer jaante hain...Sapna jaanti hain aur yaha thak ki mujhe lagtha hain ki abhi bhi jaanta hain."
Sameera:"Abhi...tum jaante ho?"
Abhi would have liked to sworn and tell Sameera that he didnot know but...:"Haan Sameera main jaanta hoon."
Sameera now besides herself feels very betrayed and shattered.She looks at her mom and with a final burst of energy she asks:"Maa mere pitha ka naam kya hain and woh kaun hain?"

PART 20:

Sapna now feeling her temples ache turns away from Sameera and looks at Abhi for help.Abhi seeing the look turns to sameera to open his mouth...but Veer stops him.
Veer:"Sameera ko uska pitha ka naam main bataonga. Woh yeh baat mere muh se sunege."
"Sameera tumahre pitha ka naam Veer Pratap Singh hain"

Sameera now opens her lovely eyes wide and tears automatically fall on their own. She remembers those incidents wwhen she had thought that Veer sir and her mom had known each other for a very long time. She sobs silently and pushes away Abhi's hand when he gives his hand for comfort.
She cries unrectrainingly....until Shikha breaks the silence.
Shikha:"Papa iska matlab ki Sameera mere behen hain? Nahi chahithi hoon main aise behen jo...kisi aur maa ki beti hain."
Sunaina:"Shikha theek kehe rahi hain...na maion aap ke saath rehna chahthi hoon aur na hi Shikha aap ke saath rahegi.I will go and immediately file for a divorce.
Aap apni ladli Sameera and Anuradha ke saath rah sakthe hoon. We are through Mr Veer Pratap Singh."

Will continue soon......sorry that part 20 was a bit short.
😛
Thanks for your sayings and replies.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
nice one 👏👏👏

Dost hai to Aansuo ki bhi shaan hoti hai,
Dost na ho to Mahfhil bhi Kabristaan hoti hai,
Sara khel to dosti ka hi hai,
Warna mayyat aur barat ek saman hoti hai.


Na khwabon me dekha, na nazaron me dekha,
Hazaron me ek humne tum hi ko dekha,
Gum dene wale to har pal hai yahan,
Har pal khushi dene walon me ek aap hi ko dekha.

Woh Zindagi hi kya jisme Mohabbat nahi,
Woh Mohabbat hi kya jisme Yaadein nahi,
Woh Yaadein kya jisme Tum nahi,
Aur woh Tum hi kya jiske saath Hum nahi.



Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
PART 21:
Sameera hearing Shikha speak thus looks up and decides to bring this whole matter to an end
Sameera:"Shikha....main bhi nahi chahthi hoon aise behen ko jo mera khatam kar na chahithi hain.Tum mujhse Abhi ko cheena chahthi hoon.....lekin yeh nahi samajthi hoon ki Abhi bhi mujhse pyaar karta hain.

"Aj tum yeh keh rahi hoon ki tum apne pitha ko chodh kar apni maa ke saat jaaogi....mujhse poocho kya hota hain , kya lagta hain jab 25 saal ke liye na tum apne pitha ko jaanti hoon and nahi unka kuch pata hota hain.
"Ab tumhari maa tumhare pitha ko chodhne ki baat kar rahi hain....par kya woh jaanti hain ki unke bina and tumhare bine tumhare pitha ka kya hoga?
Veer sir tum dono ke bine kabhi cmpleteahi hoonge.Unki zindagi tum dono ke saath hain.....ha ye sach hain ki woh mere pitha bhi hain....mujhe koi aitraaznahi hain ki woh kisi aur ke saath apna zindagi jee rahe hain.
But Shikha tumhe aitraaz hain? Arre kaise beti ho?
Kya tum apne pitha ki baat nahi samjthi ho?
Tum bhi Abhi se pyaar karti hoon jaise tumhare papa mere maa se.Aaj tak kismat ne unhe alag kar diya tha....
Phir bhi Veer sir sirf aapke saath rahenge.

Sameera turns towards Veer sir:"Papa....mujhe yeh aapko pukaar kar bohut khushi ho rahi hain.
Lekin aap ke bina main aur maa apni zindagi jeena seekh gaye hain nad chhthe hain ki hum aapna zindagi aisa hi jeeya. Aap ko bhi aapki zindagi hain...aap ka apna duty...Shikha aur Snaina aunty ka saath dena.
Pyaar toh sab se hoti hain....lekin pyaar milna bohut ushkil."
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
PART 22:
Veer hearing her speak feels a sense of pride at what his daughter is saying with so much wisdom...for more than her age.
Sunaina tries to get a word to say to Sameera...but is stopped by Veer....he settles the matter there and Shikha apologises to Sameera regarding her behavior. Sunaina also accepts reluctantly, thinking in her mind to take some action against thsi whole thing.
Veer, Tanvi , Isha , Shika, Sunaina and Sapna leave the room.
Abhia nd Sameera are left all alone. Abhi tries to talk to Sameera but she turns her face away nad refuses to listen to him.
Abhi:"Sameera I am very sorry.....yeh sab mujhe-"
Sameera:"Abhi kuch mat kaho. Sab ne bohut keh diya aur sab kuch ho gaya hain. Main tumhari mafi nahi chahthi hoon. Main thak gayi hoon.....sab ke liye accha karne ke baad bhi sab mujhe hi galat samajthe hain.
Ek taraf Samrat...doosri aor Shikha aur theesri Veer sir .....Main.. just leave me alone Abhi. Tumhse yeh umeed nahi thi ki tum mujhse itna bada sach chupaaoge aur woh bhi mere baare main"
Abhi, regrets his decision....he decides to allow Sameera to rest and walks a step when Sameera pulls his hand.
Sameera catches hold of his hand... Abhi comes and sits next to her on the bed.Sameera leans into his shoulder and cries, pouring her heart out completely.Abhi consoles her by patting her hair and back.
Sameera recovers soon and then says:"Abhi mujhe maaf kar do....maine na jaane kuch bhi keh diya...I am very sorry. Tum mere bhala chahthe hain aur isseliye tumne mujhse yeh baat chupadiya tha. If I hurt you , please forgive me."
Abhi:"Nahi Sameera...you are not at fault. Tumhe maafi mangne ki koi zaroori nahi hain."
Sameera lokks at Abhi and they hug each other. 😳

PART 23:
The next week , all the hawks except Samrat assemble at the base.They get the information that Samrat has completely healed and that he is doing fine. All the hawks decide to go and meet him.
They go to the authorities office and ask them permission to meet the prisoner. All them sight Samrat in his room.
Sameera goes ahead and asks him:"Samart ab kaise ho?"
Samrat doesnot answer but ,mainly stares ahead as if ignoring her.
Then Abhi and the others ask him of his well being...but he disregards them also. Then Abhi tactfully brings the topic of Hyder Shiekh and then Samrat looks at them.
Abhi:"Kya tumhe hey pata hain ki tumahre "Abbajaan" ke baare main hume pata chala hain?"
Then Samrat decides to answer:"Kha hain abbajaan?"
Abhi:"Hum tumhe aise thodi batainge? Tumhe pehle humara saath dena padega agle mission par tab hi hum tumhe unke baare main batainge"

Will continue soon.........hoping you still are reading this Fan Fiction too 😊

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