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Posted: 17 years ago
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as usual its nice. continue pls cause i read it 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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NICE ONE KEEP GOING PLEASE CONTINUE SOON

who hai zalim kahte hain ki hua kya hai,
jal raha dil aur kehte hain ki dhuaan kahan hai
mar gaya aashik aur kisi ne tawajjo na ki,
unki nazaro ke teer chalte hain to gilah kya hai.

Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
its good dear.. and dont worry still readin this Fan Fiction.. update soon.. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
pls update soon
waiting 2 ur fantastic ff 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
please continue

Not every bird can dance, but the peacock did that. Not every flower can represent LUV, but Rose did that. Not every Friend can reach up to the HEART,but U did
Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
Sorry for the delay....was out for 5 days
Anyways here are the next parts

PART 24:
Samrat then asks them....what the new mission was.
Abhi replies that only with the promise of Samrat helping them only will he tell him about the new mission. Samrat agrees.
Abhi:"Lets sign a deal that you will always help us in this mission no matter whatever we want."
Samrat:"Theek hain" Samrat agrees thinking this is the only way he can get out of jail and see his father living ever again.
Abhi:" Then let all the hawks sign the deal......remember agar tumne apna wadha thoda toh tumhe saza zaroor milega."
Samrat agrees.
Sameera:"Samrat mission yeh hain ki tumhe humaara saath dena hoga tumhare pitha ke bomb ki destroy karne main."

Samrat hearing this satres at Sameera.....fully shocked...here he has to destroy that thing that his father created. He tries to answer back to Samera but then suddenly is stopped by Abhi.
Abhi:"Nahi SAmrat tumhe humaara saath dena padega...tumne deal sign kiya hain. Tumhare pitha ke paas jo bomb hain...woh is puri duniya ka naash kar sakti hain. Hume usse dhoondh kar destroy kana hain....then nobody will die."
Samrat clenches his hands and starts sweating.....he is scared...his abbajaan's bomb is important or the chance of seeing his father is more important?
Farhan:"Samrat...decide karna padega."
Samrat finally agrees....but man-hi-man he thinks of a plan to escape the hawks clutches....and still save the bomb and his father.

PART 25:
Rashi is called to the base on one day....asked to get the info about Hyder Sheikh with her.
She arrives and all the hawks except Samrat discuss about the info on Hyder Shiekh's captive place and the bomb
The information on the bomb is present in a riddle form...a very confusing one...it goes something like this:

Will continue soon.........need time to come up with the riddle 😳 😳 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
good 👏
pls update fast 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
thanks for updating send next part soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 25:
The riddle goes like this.....you will locate the bomb easily but once it is activated, it will take you a very hard task to destroy it.
When the hawks come to know of this they are extremely shocked. That means they have to find it much before Hyder Shiek activates it.
The information to Hyder's captivity is even more confusing....Hyder is hidden in a place where there is no water....but it isnot a desert, he is hidden where is it rains heavily. The next clue given is taht Hyder is hidden Where no man can walk on it.He is hidden in India itself.
Sameera thinks a lot on these clues.

She finally cracks it....It can only mean that Hyder is hidden somewhere in the oceans or seas....could be there is some kind of a underwater cave where he is hidden. But they dont know where exactly he is....Arabian Sea or Bay of Bengal or IndaianOcean
When sameera expresses such thoughts to Abhi nd the others, they immediately agree to her thoughts.
They start an investigation team to find out about any hidden caves beneath any water body surrounding India.

What the hawks dont realise is that the bomb need not be with Hyder. It could be with anyone....

PART 26:
Samrat contacts his uncle nad informs him of his plan to help the hawks and simultaneously protect his father and the bomb.
Samrat makes his own plans.....he prepares an army of men of his skilled at fighting nad hiding. Samrat is also now more tightly bound to the hawks...they watch his every move and every step...he needs to be very careful.


Farhan gets the info from the investigation and tries his level best to find any hidden cave...but in vain.
Everybody do their best in locating the hidden area ...unfortunately.....now they require Samrat's help.
They are forced to tell Samrat of their suspicions nad Samrat's face lits up with glee on hearing that. He decides that he is going to be the first to locate the place. He rereads the report and searches for the hidden cave....without any luck.

Then Abhi decides that they have to go on this mission as archeologists from foriegn countries to be able to find some information or the other. He names this mission as "Mission Archeology"

Precap: Mission on its full...and Samrat's devastating plan.

Will continue soon............please do read this as well....I keep updating both!!! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#50
really a nice part thank u👏 👏👏

You Are As Young As Your Faith, As Old As Your Doubt, As Young As Your Self-Confidence, As Old As Your Fear, As Young As Your Hope, As Old As Your Despair.
Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago

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