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nidha1983 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
really nice one thanks for updating
i wish u can update next part soon 👏

dosti hai naam sukh-dukh nibhane ka, dosti raaz sada muskurane ka, yeh koi pal bhar ki pehchaan nahi yeh saath hai umar bhar nibhane ka.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
y r u killin the members here? 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
ok here are Parts 14 and 15 😊

PART 14:
Sameera gets hit directly on her left arm.The wound is piercing.She cries out loud in pain.She takes a step backward and falters.The back-up move around her and start the fight.Samrath's men also do the same.
Sameera regains her self after a few seconds until which Samrath watches her with a smirk on his face.
Samrath:"Tum abhi bhi ladna chahiti hoon?Tum aaj tak kisi ko maar nahi saki aur aaj mujhe maroo gi?"
Sameera:"Sach hain...maine kisi ko aaj tak nahi mara lekin ab tumhe zaroor marun gi."
Sameera gets up and takes aim and shoots two of Samrath's people.Samrath gets very angry and aims at her.....she ducks and moves out of sight.
Samrath:"Sameera tum ab mujhse chupaogi kya?"
Sameera doesnot reply but with a lot of vigour gets 3 more men of Samrath down.
Samrath unable to track sameera down again shoots her... 😡 .this time her right leg.She falls down due to the shot and finds it very difficult to regain back her form.
Farhan watches this from the camera room and tries to go for help but then remembers Sameera's words and just sits down unable to think of a thing to save her.

PART 15:
Meanwhile Abhi arrives at the campus...and meets Shikha there.He sees her crying silently to herself.Abhi asks her the reason and she replies..telling him that Sameera and Samrath were fighting and that she had made a grave mistake by doubting Sameera for poisoning his drink.
Abhi hearing this immediately rushes in.
Farhan unable to see Sameera decides to save her and starts to move out of the room when suddenly he catches sight of Abhi.He feels really relieved to see him.
Abhi is also shocked at seeing Farhan.
Abhi:"Farhan tum yaha?"
Farhan:"Haan Abhi...woh Sameera ke kehne par main yaha pe tha.Samrath hi Jahaan Sheikh hain aur Sam ab bohut boori condition main hain.Usne back-up ko bhi bulaya tha lekin woh uski kaam nahi aaye.Sam ko bohut choth bhi lagi hain....Usne mujhe usse madat karne se mana kiya tha par ab hume uski madat karni padegi."
Abhi:"Woh kaha hain?"
Farhan:"Sameera canteen main hain."
Abhi leaves Farhan there and walks towards the canteen.

Sameera gets up and decides to give it her best shot and shoots Samrath....it hits him squarely on his right shoulder.He gets really mad and tries to shoot her but she escapes.
The back-up would have been reduced to just a 3 handfull and Samrath's men were just around 5 in number.
Sameera and Samrath would be really tired and wounded badly.
Samrath decides to end the fight by harming Sameera..he raises his gun to shoot her...Sameera would be in the act of fitting more bullets into her gun...just then she hears the firing of a gun and sees Samrath lying on the ground.
Sameera turns behind her and sees Abhi there. Seeing him, she runs to him and hugs him. They stay for a long time like taht locked in each others arms.
Finally Sameera pulls away and asks him:"Abhi ab tum kaise ho? Kya Tanvi ne tumhe woh medicine diya tha?"
Abhi:"Main ab theek hoon...haan Tanvi ne mujhe medicine de di.Tum yeh ladayi main akele nahi rahogi...main bhi tumhara saath doonga.Remember dushamn ko harana humari thakat hain"
Sameera :"Nahi Abhi...main yeh ladayi akele ladoongi...Dushan ka saamna akele khud karoongi."

Just as Sameera finishes this statement, she is shot with 3 bullets in the back.Samrath would have gotten up and hit her. Sameera loses balance and falls forward.. Abhi catches her while she falls to the ground.
Abhi takes out his gun to hit SAmrath when Sameera pulls it out of his reach and shoots Samrath directly on the chest...4 blows on his chest.He falls there unconscious.
Sameera after his fall too loses consciousness.

Will continue with the next two parts........until then thanks a lot for the replies. The next two parts will be very romantic. 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
Great...very interesting! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
nice one 👏 and also emotional 😭 😭
i wish nothing would happen to sammera
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
Very sorry for the delay.........

But here are the next two parts 😊 😛 😉

PART 16:
Just as Sameera falls, Abhi catchs her and sees her motionless...he gets scared and pulls her to him....but she doesnot respond. Abhi hugs her and tries to waken her....but......
Then Abhi shouts for Farhan , who comes running and both of them lift Sameera up and place her on a stool in the canteen.Abhi takes her mobile and calls the authorities to come and collect Samrath's body and arrest him. They agree to arrive.
Abhi carries Sameera and asks Farhan to stay back and take care of the activities in the school.
Just as Abhi comes out , Shikha sees him with Sameera and runs to him.....But Abhi just pushes her out of the way and carries Sameera to the helipad.
Shikha runs behind him asking him about what happened inside the campus but he just ignores her and walks away.

In the fly back to India, Abhi keeps trying to wake Sameera ....trying his level best tobe able to save her.
Abhi has tears in his eyes and he feels really bad about what happened to Sameera.
One of the tear drops fall on Sameera's cheek and flow on till her neck.She feels the wetness and opens her eyes to see Abhi crying.
She slowly with a lot of effort says:"Abhi..."
Hearing her Abhi turns back rapidly and feels so happy he hugs her to him.....:"Sameera ...tum theek toh ho?"
Sameera:"Nahin Abhi....bohut dard ho rahi hai....tum please mat rona"
Abhi:"Sameera hum jald se jald hospital pohunchenge and hum tumhara ellaj karwange"
Sameera:"i love you a lot Abhi.....mujhe jo kuch bhi ho jaaye... main tumhare saath hamesha rahoongi."
Abhi:"Sameera tum mujhe chood ke kahi nahi jaaa sakti....tum hamesha mere saath rahoongi...main tumhare bina jee nahi paonga."
Sameera hearing this smiles and they hug again.

PART 17:
Abhi admits Sameera in the hospital....Tanvia nd Isha and all the others along with Sameera's mom and Veer sir and Shikha ....everybody are present.
The Doctor comes out and Abhi sks him:"Sameera ab kaisi hain?"
Doctor:"Uske shareer main blood bohut kam hain....woh bohut weak hai and agar hume blood nahi mil jaayga toh hum na surgery kar sakte hain aur woh koma main chali jaa sakti hain."
Abhi immediately volunteers to give his blood but the doctor refuses because Abhi himself is very weak after the drink.
Then Veer sir volunteers. The dr agrees and they take 2 and a half liters of blood from him.
Because of this , Veer sir becomes very weak and is also admitted in the hospital(i know this sounds a bit off track but i wanted this to be a part of the story)

Sameera recieves the blood and the surgery for removal of the bullets takes close to three days.Sameera regains back her consciousness in 2 hours after the surgery.

Will continue with the parts 18 and 19 very soon.......
Thanks for those replies! 😃 😆 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27
Very nice!
i wish the creatives actually showed this. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
Ok here is Part 18

PART 18:
Veer sir is admitted and the hospital orders 2 liters of blood to be got from the blood bank.Farhan goes to the bank along with Tanvi to bring it. Isha stays behind with Shikha and Sameera's mom to console her.
Abhi goes to Sameera's room to meet her.
He sees her lying on the bed in a very weak and sad state.The Doctor stands behind him and tells him that Sameera must be on bed rest for atlest three weak more.
Abhi feels really bad....he reaches for her hand and kisses it.Sameera slowly opens her eyes and sees Abhi.
Sameera:"Abhi...."
Abhi:"Sameera tumhe dekh kar mujhe bohut bura lag raha hain.Agar main tohdhi jaldi canteen main aa jaata toh tumhari raksha kar saktah tha. Ab dekho toh sahi tumhari halat ko.....Doctor ke hisaab se tumhe 3 haftha to rest ki zaroorat hain."
Sameera:"Abhi ab Samarth kaisa hain?"
Abhi:"Sameera...Samrath ko humne authorities ke saath custody amin bej diya hain....waha woh uska elssj karenge."
Sameera looks at Abhi and smiles.....
Sameera's mother walks in....she gives Sameera a big hug and starts crying.
Sameera:"Mom...aap ro rhi hain...kyun?Main toh ab bilkul theek hoon...mujhe kuch nahi huwa hain...ye sab toh Abhi ke wajah se huwa hain."
Abhi:"Nahin Sameera ...maine kuch nahi kiya balki tume bachaya nur admit kiya."
Sameera's mom:"AAp donon ko saath main dekh kar mujhe bohut khushi ho rahi hain....aap hamesha ek doosre ka saath dena."
Abhi and SAmeera smile and hug Sameera's mom.

Sameera then asks:"Mujhe blood kisne diya?"
Abhia nd Sameera's mom look at each other and quickly turn away.Sameera's mom:"Beta woh Veer sir ne tumhe blood diya hain."
Sameera:"Veersir ne?Lekin ....kya unka blood group mere
A positive hain? "
Sameer's mom:"Haan"
Sameera:"Yeh hi Veer sir ki achahiyi hain...unhone mere liye aapna blood diya.....oh mom main kitne lucky hoon ki koi mere liye itna kuch kar sakta hain....jab main unki koi lagti bhi nahi hoon."
Abhi suddenly changes the topic saying that Sameera must be let to relax and both of them walk away.

Will continue after 2 days with parts 19 and 20
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
👏 Keep up the good work.its something interesting as the story line is quite boring nowadays
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
really really very nice and a touching one

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