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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks for that saying....its really nice.

PART 6:
Shikhs completely transformed by her mom and Samrath comes to Dubai to break their relation. She enters the college and heads straiht to the room where Samrath had told her all the hawks had a meeting.She enters and says:"Surprise!"
All of them look at her shocked.Sameera says:"Are!Shikha tum yaha kaise?"
Shikha says:"Bas aise hi.....aap sab ko main miss kar rahi thi!". After exchange a few words they part their ways....Samrath remains behind and informs Shikha of her next step in the plan.

Sameera decides to introduce Nikhila to Isha ....she drags Nikhila with her to get some doubt cleared from Isha. Nikhila agrees to go.Sameera enters the staff room and says:"Maam mujhe us DNA replication ke figure main doubt hain.....kya aap mujhe woh figure phir se dikha sakte?".isha agrees and Sameera slips her moblie in Isha's hand....The mobile reads:"Yahi ladki Rashi hey".Sameera points to Nikhila with her eyes.Isha stares at Nikhila and understands.

Samrath finally takes the second years and immediately recognises Rashi....decides to make her his Favourite to be able to make her his puppet.But Nikhila is disinterested in him.

Shikha with the help of Samrath enters into Sameera's room and throws all photos Of Sameera everywhere...and in the center of the room she palces a big photo of Sam-Abhi and marks out Sameera in red.She puts the other photos of Sameera on fire.....not bothered about burning anything in the room 😡

PART 7:(Love is in the air)
Sameera enters her room and looks at everything burned away and her photo crossed.....she feels really bad , hurt and upset...."Koi GHttiyar insaan mere mauth chahtha hain....mujhe jeethe hua nahi dekh na chahta hain" She leaves the room like taht itself and runs to the basket ball court weeping.Reaching there she takes a ball and shows all her frustation on the game.......
1.Samrath is the no 1 problem
2.She wants this mission a success.
3.All this photo business.
4.She has an enemy who is on the look out for killing her..........and she has her exams going to start...many more!!
Abhi sees and comes to the court....sees her crying and is very concerned.He also picks up a ball and joins her in the court.Sameera is so totally lost...she doesnot realise that he is there.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Continuing...............

Sameera keeps throwing every shot into the basket...unaware of Abhi. She enters one court from the other with the ball in her right hand while Abhi satnds to her left hand side.
Abhi pulls her hand and draws hwer Upto him...causing both their balls to fall.Sameera tries to get free but Abhi soothes her and asks her the problem...she breaks down completely and tells him everything ....she becomes so exhausted that she falls down to his knees.
(Pl try to picture this scene ...it can be very lovely! 😛
Abhi gets down on his knees and hugs her telling her not to worry and saying that they will work out everything.Sameera feeling relieved says:"Thanks Abhi...tumne mere sare pareshaaniya door karde. I really love you. lekin kya tum kise aur se pyaar karte ho?"
Abhi replies:"Nahi Sameera...main sirf tumse pyaar karta ho....tumne hi mujhe pyaar karna sikhaya hain ...tumne hi mujhe pyaar ka matlab samjhaya hain, toh main kisi aur se pyaar kaise kar sakta ho?"
Sameera starts laughing and hugs him once again.
Just then Nikhila comes calling Shweta....Sameeera turns and says goodbye to Abhi and goes.
While going Sameera gives a flying kiss to Abhi and he captures it in the air with his hand and places it on his heart.Sameera sees this and starts blushing.

PART 8:
All the hawks except Samrath are called for a meeting by Abhi and decide that its time for the truth about who they are.Abhi doesnot tell Tanvi ,Isha and Farhan about Samrath's real identity though.

Sameera goes to Nikhila and says directly to her:"Rashi! hi". Nikhila is stunned and looks at her and says:"Tum mere naam bhul gayi kya?...main-".Sameera cuts her across and says:"Tum Rashi ho and I am Sameera not Shweta.". Rashi now looks at her :"Matlab?".

Sameera:"Defence minister ne saare Hawks ko is mission diya tha....tumhari raksha karne.Tum saare hawks ko mil chuki ho- Tanvi and Farhan jo canteen main the.Humaara naya coach-Wing commander Abhimanyu Adhikari.
Humaara naya Biology teacher-Isha Oberio.
Aur main - Sameera Singh. Main tumhe aap ne aap ke baare main sach keh rahi hoon kyunki Jahhan Sheikh...Hyder Sheikh is college ke ander aa gaya hai.Main hey bhi jaanti hoon ki tumhare paas Hyder shiekh ke baare me info bhi hain....tumse woh info hum nahi lenge balki tumhe protection denge"
Rashi understands Sameera's words and agrees to do as directed.

Samrath puts his plan into action...calls his uncle and asks backup of an army of men for his attack in the college. He decides to start the whole plan with Rashi.

Sameera and Abhi request for the clearing of the college due to the open attack on the college by Samrath.
In the next few days...an order from the Principal is issued that the students must be made to leave the college due to the event of the mission.

But before such things can even take shape, Samrath sends his men to start open fire in the campus.A few of the children are injured and this creates a lot of confusion in the college.

Will continue with parts 9 and 10 later.........and thanka again for those replies!!! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Aranya

Continuing...............

Sameera keeps throwing every shot into the basket...unaware of Abhi. She enters one court from the other with the ball in her right hand while Abhi satnds to her left hand side.
Abhi pulls her hand and draws hwer Upto him...causing both their balls to fall.Sameera tries to get free but Abhi soothes her and asks her the problem...she breaks down completely and tells him everything ....she becomes so exhausted that she falls down to his knees.
(Pl try to picture this scene ...it can be very lovely! 😛

Will continue with parts 9 and 10 later.........and thanka again for those replies!!! 😃

nice one its so romanti, cute and lovely❤️ by imagining👏

please show Shikhs end or abhi can marry sameera without Shikhs knowledge.

Luv meanz to see someone with closed eyez, to miss some1 in crowd, 2 find some1 in every thought, to live 4 some1, luv some1, but sure tht sum1 is ONLY one!

Love isn't a decision, it's a feeling. If we could decide who to love, then, life would be much simpler, but then less magical.

Don't wait until it's too late to tell someone how much you love, how much you care. Because when they're gone, no matter how loud you shout and cry, they won't hear you anymore.

Agar hum na hote,tumhe naazneen kaun khehta,Tumhaare chehre ko hasta gullab kaun khehta,,,yeh to karishma hai hum mahobbat karne wallon ka,varna pattharon ko "TAJMAHAL" kaun khehta..

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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
gr8 aranya
u r 2 good
write soon i m waiting 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
ur r doing a fantatistic job just keep updating quickly
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
Thanks for those remarks! 👏
Ok here are parts 10 and 11

PART 10:
Rashi is called to Samraths office with the prospect of helping him out on some information....this is Samrath's plan directly to catch her.
Sameera comes to know of the injuries and the open fire and immediately tries to contact Rashi to know of her safety.She calls her:"Hello Rashi, main Sameera bol rahi hoon...tum thik to ho na?"
Rashi replies:"Ha main toh ab Suraj sir ke office main jaa rahi hoon."
Sameera:"Nahi! Tum waha pe mat jao.Waha..bbb..bomb lagi hain!"
Rashi:"Kya?Bomb?"
Sameera:"Haan...iss liye us office main koi nahi he...sir bhi canteen main the!"
Rashi:"Thek hain...main un se canteen main milungi"
Sameera:"Sir abhi abhi ghar gaye...tum unse mil nahi sakti"
Rashi:"Thek hain main wapas hostel aati hoon."
Sameera realises Samrath's plan and saves Rashi from being caught by Samrath.

Meanwhile...Tanvi and Isha help all the injured students and admit them to the hospital.But the condition in the college just worstens...
Samrath mixes a few drops of a powerful stimulant in Abhi's drink....making him unconcious for atleast the next 4 hours.Sameera comes to the canteen in search of Abhi and notices that he is almost living.She gets really scared and inspects his drink and recognises the stimulant......Samrath's plan again!
Just then she sees Samrath entering the canteen from one side and Rashi entering from the other.She needs to shield Rashi but how.........?
She quickly walks in front of Rashi and pulls her to one side....but Rashi sees Samrath and says:"Sir aap?"
Sameera claps her hand over Rashi's mouth and drags her off from the canteen.
Having seen Rashi and Sameera Samrath follows them.Sameera in loud whispers conveys :"Rashi....woh hi Jahhan Shiekh hain!"
Rashi now feels so insecured that she looks about to faint.She and Sameera keep runnning along the corridors and Samrath keeps following them.They enter classroom A3 for rest and meet Raj there.Rashi tells him...and he sends them from A3 to the next floor and blocks the path.When Samrath came there, he started talking to him based on some doubt in History.

Sameera then finds Tanvi and Isha and gives them the responsibilty of protecting Rashi.She says:"Ab Rashi aap dono ki responsibilty hain...usse kuch nahi honi chahiye.Ab tum theeno Abhi aur Raj ke saath helipad se wapas India chali jaayie(Abhi would have told her about how Rashi met her Grandpa on Jan28th)...Farhan aur mujhe Samrath ke saath kuch khel khelna padega."

She hands over Abhi's body and Rashi and Raj to them and bids them goodbye.She says:"Main ne Defence Minister ke ghar main 24 hour security ko bulaiya hain.Woh 10 din ke liye aap sab 5 logon ki suraksha karenge.Take care and goodbye.There will be no calls from me and no calls from you. we will all meet in india.They take Abhi's body and Raj and Rashi and leave.

SAmeera now calls India:"Main Sameera Singh baat kar rahi hoon.Mujhe 25 logon ki backup chahiye aur weapons ke saath .Aap unhe Dubai bej dejiye."

Sameera finds Farhan and both of them help the rest of the students to evacuvate the building.They then enter the Abhi's room and take out all the weapons carried by hawks on this mission.They have shortage of bullets.That's when Sameera decides to get more bullets by killing all of Samrath's men. She who had never killed people in her life, now has to recklessly shoot to protect this mission.She tells Farhan:"Yeh mera order hain...Just Shoot...unhe mat maro lekin shoot just enough to hurt them."
They take the walky talkies with them and go to all the 5 floors of the college and get more bullets from Samrath's men who ould be posted in every corridor.

PART 11:

The question finally arises- where is Samrath.Samrath would have gone to get Shikha and tells her that Sameera poisoned Abhi's drink.Shikha wouldnot have been to control herself and would have marched angrily to the canteen.
Sameera nd Farhan would have just finished their shootings and waiting for Samrath... when they see him with Shikha. Shikha marches upto to Sameera and demands:"Tumne Abhi ko poison kaise kiya? Maine toh tumhe apna Abhi de diya aur tumne uska jaan leni ki koshish kiya?"
Sameera(realising Samrath's chaal):"Abhi ko poison? Kisne kiya? Kab kiya? Yeh tum kya kah rahi ho?Mujhe toh pata bhi nahi hain ki Abhi kaha hain!"
Shikha:"Acha! Ab natak bhi kar rahi ho?Sameera sach sach batado"
Sameera:"Main sach keh rahi hoon....yeh mujhe pata nahi hain ki Abhi kaha hain...balki main aur Farhan un sab ko doondh rahe the....Abhi ne uska mobile bhi switch off kar diya hain."
Shikha believes Sameera after calling on his cell....(Tanvi strictly follows Sameera's orders and keeps all their cell phones switched off.)
Shikha goes in search of Abhi.

Now Samrath tries to contact his men...but in vain.He decides to go in search of them. Sameera finds this an ideal moment and asks Farhan to tape the whole fight between Samrath and her. She sends him to the camera room , where he hacks the sysem and switches on the cameras in the canteen.

SAmrath now returns....finding all his men hurt and almost dead.He turns to Sameera.Just then SAmeera gets a call: The back up team have reached Dubai...she asks them to be sent in to the college to the canteen.
Samrath then says:"Iss sabka matlab kya hain?Tum apne aap ko bohut chalak samajhthi ho kya?"

Will continue very soon....The next parts will be the verbal fight between Sameera and Samrath.
😃 😉 😛
Sorry...all those of you who wanted Abhi to be in the fight 😭 ...will soon include him too. 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Love each and every part Aranya...u r doing a great job! 👏
Keep up the awesome writing! 😳 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice one i wish nothing will happen to sameera and they also get proof against samrat.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😛 😛 Wow this really rocks , thanx alot............................😛 😛
Edited by yazzy07 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ok I am back........
Here are parts 12 and 13
😊

Part 12:
Samrath:"Sameera..kiska phone tha?"
Sameera:"Woh...main..ab.Isha ke saath bat kar rahi thi and use poonch rahi thi ki kya back-up aa chuki hain."
Samrath:"Back-up?"
Sameera:"Haan...u know ..Jahaan Shiekh ke against ke liye!"
Samrath:"Jahaan Shiekh..hah"
Sameera looks at Samraths face intently trying to find out something from his expressions...when suddenly he asks her:"Saare hawks kaha hain?"
Sameera:"Woh Samrath maine sab ko chupane ke liye keh diya...you know agar Jahaan aa gaya toh"
Samrath:"Saare college main hi hain kya?"
Sameera:"Haan...saare ek na ek room me bach gaye hain."
Samrath:"Rashi kaha hain?"
Sameera:"Rashi ko bhi maine bachene ke liye kaha tha."
Sameera replies very cooly......acting innocently.

In the mean time, Abhi regains his consciuosness....gets up to find himself in Defence Ministers house.He sees Tanvi , Isha , RAj and Rashi there....doesnot find Sameera and Farhan and Samrath.
He gets worried and asks Tanvi.
Tanvi:"Abhi woh Sameera ke kehni ke wajah se maine tumhe yaha pe laya."She tells Abhi everything bout what happened there.
Abhi then realises that Sameera had told him of her suspections on Samrath.........He gets up hurriedly and tells Tanvi to help him get to the Helipad to save Sameera.

Samrath after a long time of silence between him and Sameera decides to directly attack Sameera....just then the back-up arrive.
Sameera asks them to surround Samrath.
Samrath is shocked at the turn of events and at the various places his men were guarding...they reply and he asks them to immediately come to the canteen.

Sameera:"Ab Samrath...oops...Jahaan apne aadmi ko bhi bula rahe ho kya?"
Samrath:"toh tumhe pata chal gaya? Bohut Achha huwa..aab toh tum bach nahi paogi.Apne aap ko bohut chalaak samajthi ho?"
Sameera:"Main toh chalak ho...lekin tum aaj zara weak ho...main tum par shak bohut dino se kar rahi thi.."
Samrath:"Smart girl!"
SAmeera:"Ha..thanks phir bhi no thanks...aaj tum nahi jee paoge"
Samrath:"Sameera tum mujhse panga mat lo.Aaj kaun jeetega woh toh dekh lenge.Aaj Abhi bhi nahi tumhe bachane ke liye...toh tum kaise bach paogi?"
Sameera:"Main hamesha dushman ko harana sikhati hoon. Tum dushman ho....ghadhar ho...enemy ho.....toh hamesha Jeet usi ki hoti hain jo acha kam karta hain."
Samrath:"Woh sab baate ab bekar hain....jeet mera hoga aur tum agar chahiye toh apne Abhi se bhi akri bar mil sakti ho."

Sameera:"Tum mere kitne ache dost the..lekin tumhe achanak kya hogaya? Tum Shikha o bhi Abhi aur mere beech main lana chahete ho?
Ek baat jaan lo Samrath...Abhi chahe toh mujhse door jaa saktha hain lekin main Abhi se door kabhi nahi jaaongi. Mera Abhi ke liye pyaar bohut zyada hain.Tum chahe toh bhi mujhe Abhi se door nahi kar sakte ho."

Shikha comes back to the canteen and hears Samrath and Sameera speaking.Farhan at the same time tapes the video and is shocked on realising who Samarth actually is.
Sameera:"Tumne hi Abhi ke drink ko poison kiya tha na?"
Samrath:"Hann maine hi kiya tha."
Just as they finish speaking this , SAmrath's men arrive and surround Samrath.The back-up take their plce behind Sameera.
Shikhaafter hearing this,looks at SAmrath and accuses him and starts crying.Sameera moves forward to consloe her and at that moment Samrath captures Shikha and his men point their guns at Sameera.
Samrath:"Dekho mujhe bata do ki Rashi kaha hain...nahi toh main Shikhs ka jaan loonga."
Sameera:"Jab tak main zinda hoon and tumhare samne khadi hoon tum Rashi tak kabhi pahunch nahi paoge.Aur Shikha ko chodh do... uska jaan leke tum kya paoge.Tum toh sirf mujhse nafrat karte ho...toh mujhse fight karo...Shikha ke saath nahi."
SAmrath relises Shikha and Sameera tells her:"Tum janti nahi ho...ki Samrath ek Ghadhar hain...aur aaj tak tum ek ghadhar ke baat ko maan rahi thi.Main jaanti ho ki tum Abhi se pyaar karti hoon lekin ye bhool rahi ho ki Abhi mujhse pyaar karta hain. Ab tum yaha se please chali jaao....yeh tumhare liye behtar hoga."
Shikha quitely listens to Sameera and leaves the campus.

PART 13:
Sameera now knowing the time had come for the final break - through picks up her weapons and the bullets and commands back-up to do so too.
SAmrath takes the cue and prepares himself too.
Sameera talks on the cell secretly to Farhan:"Farhan kuch bhi hone se tum please mujhe bachane mat aao.Mujhe yeh fight aap ne aap jeetna hain.Aur agar main.....nahi rahi toh please Abhi aur Maa se keh dena ki main unse bahut pyaar karti hoon aur karti rahoongi."

Samrath says:"Sameera tumahare toh sirf 25 log ahin aur mere toh atleast 50.Tum jeet tak pahonch nahi paoogi."
Sameera :"Samrath...agar mere har ek aadmi ne tumhare 2 log ko mar diya toh? TaB tum akele bach jaaoge."
Samrath:"Apne ap par itna confidence?Tumhara plan barbaad ho jaayega."
Sameera:"Nahi. Aaj main tumhare liye itna prepared hoon ki tumhari har plan ke liye mera bhi ek plan hain. In fact maine tumhari plan barbaad kar diya hain. Aur amin ek Air Force Officer hoon...kabhi kisi musibat se bhag nahi jaoongi....Mere log Officers hain. Tum Ghadhar ho aur tumhare log Ghoonde hain. Toh jeet meri hogi."
Samrath gets really irritated at her cool and calm.

He strikes first and aims directly at Sameera

Well this is it till now...........will continue soon.Thanks again for all your replies 😳 😃 😆 👏

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