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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi , I am new to this forum but I have been browsing since long ..........in fact when Remix started. So I thought that now I would like to try my hand at FF.😃

The story in my FF is somewhat the same as in CHA but I would like to change a few things..................And insert those things I want!!!😳

PART 1:(on a very serious note)

Sameera one day overhears Samrath talking on the phone with Sunaina.She listens carefully to the conversation............Samrath says-"Oh aap fikar mat kijeye maine toh Shikha ko sab kuch kehdiya he. Woh sab kuch samajthi hai aur jaanti he ke Abhi sirf uska hai aur sameera ka kabhi nahi ho sakta.Mere kehne par woh Abhi-Sam ke saat aisa khel khelegi ..........ki aap yakeen nahi kar payeenge".

Sameera hearing this is horrified and realises that Samrath is the rootcause for all the problems between her and Abhi. Then Samrath makes another call to his Uncle and says-"Hawks me koi nahi jaanta ki Jahhan Shiekh unke beech mien hi hain".

Sameera know gets a doubt and walks away from there to do some deep thinking.She finally understands that .............Samrath and Shika and Sunaina are trying to break her relation wid Abhi and Samrath knows something about Jahhan that the hawks dont.She decides not to tell this to anyone but keep this piece of info to herself

😃 Please tell me if the start is good ......i will surely continue and make it really interesting for all of u!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 great job 👏 👏 👏
make samrat positive soon.... 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I really dont mind many of you not replying........will surely continue 😳 and wish more of you tell me how it is.

PART 2:
Sameera now becomes suspicious of Samrath and decides to install all functional cameras at the base.She goes to the control room and activates all the cameras to gain info on Samrath and locks the system with a password.
Sameera gets a call from Abhi informing her to come to his cabin on discussion of Mission Zodiac.she immediately goes.Abhi gives the roles to be palyed by hawks in the college:
Sameera - Shweta Singh - student
Tanvi - Uma Sharma - Canteen help
Isha - Miss Kamini - Bio teacher
Farhan - Manoj Tiwari - Canteen help
Abhi - Coach Aditya
Samrath - Suraj - History prof.

Abhi provides everyone with a device thro which they will be able to constantly report what ever they see. He tells them that they should warn and tell each other of everything they notice in the college.But Sameera intervenes and tells Abhi "Aisa nahi honi chahiye Abhi...hum sab kuch sirf ek insaan ko batainga....meaning only one of us must be reported about everything...We will all tell you Abhi.....and we will meet every Wed to discuss". Abhi looks at her questioningly but agrees to her suggestion.

Sameera keeps a good look out on the various things that Samrath keeps planning and keeps these information recorded safely.(Will mention the info later!)
On the 17th oh March,after they all pack their bags and required stuff , they leave to Dubai.

PART 3:
Sameera's first day at the college
Sameera enters, looking kinda nervous and scared.........she is a fresher and she hasnot prepared anything much for the subjects she is facing.
As she walks and comes slowly towards the entrance,a guy standing whistles at her.........she gets completely angry and her blood boils at his attitude.
She walks upto him and says:"Tum apne aap ko kya samajthi ho? " He replies..."Hello!Main Raj hoon, is college ka sabse bada senior! Tum freshman ho na....? toh zaroor tumhe rag karna padega...meet us today after college hours at the coconut tree in the garden"
Sameera is completely scared beyond words now and walks off the place in a hurry.......she didnot want such a bad beginning for this Mission!

Tanvi and Farhan's first day
Tanvi and Farhan enter the Principal's office and introduce themselves......Principal calls Radha and gets their admission into the Canteen. They also receive menus along with their roles to be played.

I am sure atleast this time I will get more replies........otherwise I hope to arouse your interests soon enough!! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awww plz cont soon
i want to know wat happens to samrat
& cant wait to see abhi as a coach lol
plz hurry
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plzz continue...good work 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Here are the other parts 3 and 4.
Thanks for all your encouragement.....they made me feel really nice! 😛

PART 3:
Sameera now enters the college and asks for directions and finally reaches her class.......first period is of some one called Sridhar Sir who takes Economics.Sameera feels really ackward but still keeps a look out to see if she cn find Rashi.......without any luck

Sameera hates Economics and feels really bored listening to the sir......feels really sleepy 😳 and then suddenly is asked to introduce herself. She walks out of her seat and then scans the class to see if she could see anyone like Rashi......"Hi main Sa...oops Shweta hoon and aur main IS Saal college join kiyi hoon"
As she finishes this the bell rings.

The next class is......History.Sameera keenly awaits Samraths presence to see the way he introduces himself and to keep a watch on him.Suraj(Samrath) comes in ....very nicely dressed and studious like a history mugpot!!He introduces himself and takes the class very nicely........Sameera feels herself doubting her thoughts about Samraths discussions.

Tanvi and Farhan help each other and have a gala time preparing the menu for the whole day.......Tanvi feels that she loses herself with this brilliant time she spends with Farhan!!They dont notice anything particular about anyone in the canteen.......as they have never known how Rashi looks 😆

Abhi enters completely confident.His first class is to take the Seniors.He sees a boy(a huge and a strong one)along with many others who was being given a lot of respect......Abhi doesnot like the very look of the boy and walks upto him :"Tumhara naam kya hain:?" the boy replied "main Raj hoon.......aap kaun hai?"
Abhi intoduces himself "Main coach Aditya hoon...is saal aap sabka naya coach".Abhi takes out his register and marks of the names of those present there."Pehle aap sab boys and girls 2 teams banaiye and uske baad aaj pehle mein aap sabke khel dekna chaatha hoon......so captains kaun hai?", Abhi says.
Everybody there screams.."Raj,Raj!" Abhi declares Raja nd another timid looking boy called Vinay as captains.They play Basket Ball first.

Isha, entered looking really so hot( 😳 ) that the students whom she asked for directions started gaping at her and whistling at her!
Isha couldnot tolerate such nonsense and decided to lodge a complaint against them......all the students realising that she was a new teacher and fear of grades ran away.
Isha had to teach 3 classes non stop and wsa really tired, decided to lie down in the STaff room.

PART 4:
Samrath decides to call a student to his staff room to learn more on Rashi. He asks the student"Kya ye college main bade logon ke rishtedaar aate hain?"
The boy replies:"Kyun sir.aisa to nahi hey.Yaha toh koi bada student nahi hain"
Samrath asks:"Kya yahan koi Rashi naam ki ladki hain?:"
He replies:"Nahi toh .....main koi Rashi ko nahi jaanta"
Knowing that there is something that is different about that name Samrath sends him away.

SAmeera comes out after a very long and tired day.......sitting in class for 5 periods!She walks out and bangs someone directly on the face.....it was Rashi!!Sameera immediately understands and apologises:"Mujhe maaf kardo...main nahi dekh kar chal rahi thi.Main yaha nayi hoon.Mera naam Shweta hain."
Rashi replies:"Hi Main second year main hoon...mera naam Nikhila hain. Welcome to the college!"
Sameera thanks her and starts walking towards the hostel....when someone shouts "Hey!"

I will continue soon.......will be going out of station for some time.....hope to receive all your nice remarks!! 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oooohh who was it???
abhi perhaps?
plz plz pppppppppppppppppppplllllllllllllllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzz hurry and update
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Love it...love it...love it...do continue soon... 😳
You're doing a fantastic job! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks a ton for all your mssgs......nice to know you liked my plot so far! 😊
Have posted Parts 4 and 5 now.

PART 4:
Sameera turns around to notice Raj standing there.She immediately gets panicky and turns back to run....but is surrounded by the seniors.She has no escape.Taking this alaso as part of her stride, she asks them:"Kya aap mujhe bula rahe the?". Raj answers:"Ha.....aapka time aab se shuru hota hai."
He continues:"Tumhe hum main se ek ladke ke saat dance karna padega....hum gaana bhi gaayaenge tumhare liye"
Sameera hearing this is shocked and says:"Aap sab jaante nahi hai ki main kaun ho...main Sam.....oh Shweta hoon aur."
Raj cuts her across and says:"Hum jaante hai ki tum Shweta Singh ho and humare paas tumhara file bhi hai jo humne Principal ke office se li thi! Ab jo kaha gaya tha woh karogi ya nahi?"
Sameera says:"Nahi karoongi main dance ....Principal ko bataoongi and.."
Raj:"Acha nahi karoogi? Toh phir tumahari aise haal karenge ki tum aapne aap ko pehchaan nahi paaogi"
Sameera now realises that it is better she says yes.....just then Rashi comes there and says:"Raj..yeh meri frnd hai...uska rag karni ki koshish bhi mat karna....warna-"
Raj meekly looks at Rashi and says to Sameera:"Tum jaa sakthi ho".
Raj and the other seniors all walk away.
Sameera then looks at Rashi and thanks her profusely:"Thank you soo much Nikhila"
Rashi:"Oh no problem at all ...agar kuch chahiye toh mujhe bata do."
They say good byes and go.

Sameera goes to Abhi's office and reports this piece of info to him...about Rashi and Raj.Abhi immediately sprangs up and tells her about the discussion he had with the officers of someone who is protecting Rashi and of whom Rashi doesnot know.Sameera feels differently and says:"Lekin aisa bhi ho sakta hai ki Rashi aur Raj ek dusre se pyaar karte hoonge ya achhe dost hoonge hain na?"
Abhi doesnot reply but asks Sameera to keep a watch on those two and to become very good friends with Rashi.

PART 5:
Samrath starts his plan of finding out who Rashi is..."Us Sameera ke wajha se mujhe kuch info bhi nahi mil rahi he...usne Abhi se kaha tha ki sab sirf use hi Info batainge, is liye mujhe kuch nahi pata hai...lekin main Hyder Sheikh ka beta hoon toh zaroor apna doosra plan banaoonga."

Isha gets up after close to 2 and half hour sleep and finally realises she has 2 min for her next class 😳
She hurries down the hall and enters the class in time.
She takes the attandance and doesnot find any one with the name Of Rashi.But she scans the page with the help of her mobile camera in order to give a photo copy to Abhi.one of the names there would be Nikhila.

Tanvi and Farhan become very nice friends to the college students and enjoy chatting with them.
On lunch one day, they see Sameera walk there with a girl by her side.Sameera walks upto to Tanvi and Farhan and looks at them with eyebrows raised and tells the girl next to her:"Hi Manoj ye mere friend hain...uska naam Nikhila hain. Nikhila yeh Manoj hain aur yeh Uma hain...he dono bohut acche log hain aur bohut accha kahna bhi banate hain."
Nikhila and Tanvi and Farhan say hi to each other.
Sameera and Nikhila go and get themselves a seat. Sameera says:"Main khana leke aati hoon...", she goes to Tanvi and Farhan and says:"He hi Rashi hain!"
Both of them look at Sameera nd back at Rashi and nod in agreement.

Abhi's next class would be to taech the second years sports.The girls had to learn ThrowBall and the boys had to play Volley Ball.Abhi was eagerly waiting for this calss to see Rashi properly. He takes his register and calls out the names....stops at Nikhila's name:"Aap main se Nikhila kaun he?"
Nikhila raises her hand and Abhi stares at her long and hard trying to remember whether her eyes matched the ones he had seen before. They were the same....Abhi is happy.

Samrath also moves on with his work and gets the whole years register from the OPrincipal and collects all the info he can on the girls who sound like Rashi....unfortunately for him there are no photos !!

I will be posting Parts 6 and 7 really very soon..........keep those remarks coming in......they really make my day 😳 😃 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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how sweet of u really a nice update 👏

this is for u
Never wound hearts that love you,
Never give them the endless pain,
Because wounded hearts,
Are like roses that never bloom...


"Wo to majborioon main lipti hain,Apney shiddat bharey khyaloon main,Apney ander chhupi ek aurat main,Wo hamesha hi darti rehti hain,Na to jeeti hain na to marti hain,Larkiyaan bewafaa nahi hoti,Per Hamesha hi darti rehti hain,Apne reeti or rawajoon se,Any waley naye azaboon se,Zardurat main khily ghulaboon se,Pyaar kerti hain or chhupati hain,Larkiyaan Bewafaa nahi hot,Kyuon ki majborioon main lepti hain,Or her lamha darti rehti hain,Apney pyaar se apney saye se,Apney rishton se dil ki dharkan se,Apni khowahish se apni kushioon se,Larkiyaan Bewafaa nahi hoti !!!"

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