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Koeli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

@vani's pov (mixed with mine)

then she came to know about their marriage and panicking she rushes up to arnav's room to tell him about the whole situation where she finds him flirting with some random girl. arnav was about to kiss the girl when he sees khushi and his evil head started working. khushi narrates the whole marriage thing to him (he is also clueless) but then he starts to irritate her more.

toffan mail (vani) you need to write some naughty doings of arnav with some random girl then khushi's entry in the terrace. khushi feels acuward seeing them like that. then the other girl will sulk and go from there as khushi will be hell bend on asking for arnav's time right at that time. then arnav will tease khushi as why she wants his attention and all and some teasing from his end. then she will narrate the marriage thing which she got to know from arnav's mother.

just a suggestion wait for my part before you start drafting. that will help you will know what is happening. dont draft right now. or else you can draft now and change thoda bohot here and there to match up with the flow. 😳

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Koeli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: sandy1
room scene cab be like this.

khushi runto his room anushid without knocking she opens it,
he was abt to "ahem" khushi turn her back to in haste vase fall down and Arnav pull back and saw her

Khushi tum!!!! he walk to khushi pull her to balcony or near by room. arnav spoke in anger Kya kar rahi thi tum, cnt u see i was busy...she cut him in she was far more angry and confused with situation

do you know whats going around you...no you are busy doing...She left incomplete and blush slightly.

DO HAVE ANY IDEA WHAT OUR PARENTS ARE PLANING FOR US.

he was behaving cool like he don't give a damn.

What are they planing. Are they planing to slaughter you tomorrow on Bakr Eid He laughed.

VEry funny khushi advance towards him and poke her finger to his chest.
YOU SHUT UP NOW!!!! what they are planing is worst then slaughtering me...they areplaning to get us married.

WHAT MARRIED!!! Arnav gave shock expressions She smiled andgave him look NOW YOU GET IT DUMB.next moment khushi's mouth wide open in perfect O shape

Arnav Ali Zafar was laughing his head out.

Arnav have you gone mad, This is serious. Bechara shock laga kya????

Cry baby always crying I knew this Aba and Amma talked to melast night i said OK

now vani you can make whatever change u want accordingly.
i gave you plot

lolz cool yaar.

by the way girls i am planning to make a introductory VM lets see how it comes out.

from hum tum movie. ladki kyun najane kyun ladko se nahi hoti

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SANDY

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

hahaha tofaan mail Vani

well appy i just suggested her now she has ur suggestion too.

she can now write her part of story what she want to have there.

@Appy

you start your part.

so i can start my one too

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Koeli

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: sandy1
hahaha tofaan mail Vani

well appy i just suggested her now she has ur suggestion too.

she can now write her part of story what she want to have there.

@Appy

you start your part.

so i can start my one too

ya looks like we think alike sandy which is good. 😳

yap i will start writing after i finish my ONS2 chap and mail it to you guys

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SANDY

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Appy_Indy

ya looks like we think alike sandy which is good. 😳
yap i will start writing after i finish my ONS2 chap and mail it to you guys

good u better update ons2 soon i m waiting for that one

r u going to update today

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Koeli

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: sandy1

good u better update ons2 soon i m waiting for that one
r u going to update today

yes today only 😆

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the notebook

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Appy_Indy

lolz cool yaar.

by the way girls i am planning to make a introductory VM lets see how it comes out.

from hum tum movie. ladki kyun najane kyun ladko se nahi hoti

ohh wowww

appy u rock just like sandy 😳

Ok I m writing that she goes to him and blushes and all...and tells him that maybe their families r gettin em married..he says yea i know///and teasing...that i will make ur life hell...i will torture u more wifey LOL

and then i have to write waistband scene whr he sees her changing and goes and teases her that after marriage he will barge in whenever he wants LOL

is it ok?

😆

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the notebook

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

appy and sandy..

tell me is it ok?

and when SHUD I POST/PM IT TO U?

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Koeli

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: GodnMe.Foreva
appy and sandy..

tell me is it ok?
and when SHUD I POST/PM IT TO U?

toffan mail send pm when you finish writing. we will also do the same.

just check the writters colume and edit your post.

copy the link of the pm a/c from my post it is properly linked. we should start adding people those who have commented.1-9 pages you add 10-19 let sandy add and rest i will add.

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Koeli

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: GodnMe.Foreva

ohh wowww

appy u rock just like sandy 😳

Ok I m writing that she goes to him and blushes and all...and tells him that maybe their families r gettin em married..he says yea i know///and teasing...that i will make ur life hell...i will torture u more wifey LOL

and then i have to write waistband scene whr he sees her changing and goes and teases her that after marriage he will barge in whenever he wants LOL

is it ok?

😆

yap you are right my dear. 😳

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