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the notebook

@the_notebook

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: sandy1
@APPY @ VANI
DO U GUYZ HAVE ANY PROBLEM WITH THE LITTLE CHANGES OR ELABORATIONS I ADDED TO WORK

no which ones? LOL

im sooo not knowing anything LOL

but what is "final approving scene that appy will write? omggg khushi will approve of the marriage???"

@appy and sandy

wont we be writing that what part ws written by whom? bcoz i have seen writers in combined FF write wht part was written by whom 😳😆

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SANDY

@.Sandy.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

@VANI CHECK PAGE 10 I WROTE THERE UNDER APPY'S ND UR POSTS

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the notebook

@the_notebook

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: sandy1
@VANI CHECK PAGE 10 I WROTE THERE UNDER APPY'S ND UR POSTS

What?which one?

u mean the wholeee chapter thing?

it was nice 😳

hey but one more thing, if we write some dialogue..[ as in appy wrote first part] then before reading it we wont be able to write our part...as the forecoming part wud be inspired by the start right?so the whole update wud look disbalanced and individually written...so maybe we shud divide the whole as in some parts...like first appy, then sandy's part, then mine. And first appy shud pm us her part then u will pm us ur part [ inspired by appy's part...dialogues..and events...] then mine.

and thats a bit impossible as the way u gave on page 10 its like first appy, then u, then me, then again u, then again me, and again appy's approval part which i didnt get ...whhat is it abt?approval of what? 😕

GOSH THIS FF WUD BE A FLOP 😆

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SANDY

@.Sandy.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

HAHAHA VANI DNT WORRY JUST RIGHT YOUR PARTS IF THERE WILL BE SOME LOOP HOLES WE WILL COVER IT DNT WORRY HONEY

ND APPROVAL PART I MEANT PROOF READING ONE SHE WILL COVERUP IF STILL THERE WILL BE LOOP HOLES SO TRUST ME THIS WON'T BE FLOP

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SANDY

@.Sandy.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

APPY U WRITE UR PART FIRST THEN I'LL ADD MINE THEN VANI WILL ADD HER LIKE WISEWE'LL COMPLETE OUR UPDATE IT WILL BE BIT LENGTHY PROCESS BUT ATLEAST WE WILL GET UPDATE LOL

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Koeli

@Koeli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: sandy1
APPY U WRITE UR PART FIRST THEN I'LL ADD MINE THEN VANI WILL ADD HER LIKE WISEWE'LL COMPLETE OUR UPDATE IT WILL BE BIT LENGTHY PROCESS BUT ATLEAST WE WILL GET UPDATE LOL

👍🏼

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the notebook

@the_notebook

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Ok so I hav to write arnav n Khushi waistband scene in eid...he teases her of marriage [?]

and a scene whr khushi sees him wid someone else and asks him what he is doin LOL

[dunno...like this only right?]

helppp

and wen shud i PM u my parts?

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SANDY

@.Sandy.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

@vani wen ever u feel like dnt worry if u feel its not apporpriate we will make changes before we update finally.

nd pm acc appy i think we need to use that one for while to comment so we can change its ststus from newbie to goldie or whatever is next one

so we can send working link.

here in chats nd on unknown feelings use that acc currently

its just abt 50 or 60 posts matter

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the notebook

@the_notebook

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: sandy1
@vani wen ever u feel like dnt worry if u feel its not apporpriate we will make changes before we update finally.

nd pm acc appy i think we need to use that one for while to comment so we can change its ststus from newbie to goldie or whatever is next one
so we can send working link.

here in chats nd on unknown feelings use that acc currently
its just abt 50 or 60 posts matter

next is a groupbie that is fifty posts.But its not possible to make it fifty posts one as a rule of I-F says newbies cant make ten replies/posts in a day 😭

and hey temme no...when shud i submit it I will continue that way 😳

and I didnt get it...how can I write a part when i dunno what Khushi wants to say?

ok lemme get clear...khushi goes to arnav's room finds him wid a girl..and what does she say to him? i mean i will write arnav's teasin and intimate things but what will they fight on? 😕 khushi wants to talk to him about what? 😕

and the eid scene...what will arnav say to her? thtt dey r gettin married?😕 SOOO CONFUSED😕🤣

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SANDY

@.Sandy.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

room scene cab be like this.

khushi runto his room anushid without knocking she opens it,

he was abt to "ahem" khushi turn her back to in haste vase fall down and Arnav pull back and saw her

Khushi tum!!!! he walk to khushi pull her to balcony or near by room. arnav spoke in anger Kya kar rahi thi tum, cnt u see i was busy...she cut him in she was far more angry and confused with situation

do you know whats going around you...no you are busy doing...She left incomplete and blush slightly.

DO HAVE ANY IDEA WHAT OUR PARENTS ARE PLANING FOR US.

he was behaving cool like he don't give a damn.

What are they planing. Are they planing to slaughter you tomorrow on Bakr Eid He laughed.

VEry funny khushi advance towards him and poke her finger to his chest.

YOU SHUT UP NOW!!!! what they are planing is worst then slaughtering me...they areplaning to get us married.

WHAT MARRIED!!! Arnav gave shock expressions She smiled andgave him look NOW YOU GET IT DUMB.next moment khushi's mouth wide open in perfect O shape

Arnav Ali Zafar was laughing his head out.

Arnav have you gone mad, This is serious. Bechara shock laga kya????

Cry baby always crying I knew this Aba and Amma talked to melast night i said OK

now vani you can make whatever change u want accordingly.

i gave you plot