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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
@ sandy i dunno if she made it lets ask her..:)

sandy

i still didnt get the whole chapter LOL
what is ur and appy's part and what is mine? 😕


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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
Check the colour codes. i hope is clear now 😳

COME ON GIRLS LETS DO IT BABY

@appy
@sandy
@vani

khushi is entering her house
she meets her mom
she is as usual pissed of with arnav's teasing in high school.
lets make both of same age i.e. 18 what way?
her mom tells her to go and deliver the mithai ka dibba to arnav's mom
khushi doesnot know that her's and arnav's marriage is fixed

@vani's pov
khushi's dad died in an accident long back and khushi's mom her to get married to arnav for her future security. all the elders agreed to the thing and both the families are in good terms. as her father died her mother was no able to support her family for long

@my pov
so her mom decided to give away her daughter to them for her daughters future and also to less burden herself.

khushi goes to their hows and take all the elder's blessings and hugs arnav's mom and gives the mithai.
she blesses her and tells something related to their marriage indirectly which khushi failed to understand.
then when she was moving out other ladies who already came to know about their marriage caught hold of her and brought her inside. khushi was clue less about it.

@vani's pov (mixed with mine)
then she came to know about their marriage and panicking she rushes up to arnav's room to tell him about the whole situation where she finds him flirting with some random girl. arnav was about to kiss the girl when he sees khushi and his evil head started working. khushi narrates the whole marriage thing to him (he is also clueless) but then he starts to irritate her more.

@me
hopeless she runs back and questions her mom about the whole thing and she says she doesnot have a choice and all. sad khushi agreed what her mother has to say. we can put about the dowry thing (arnav's family refuses to take dowry. they only want khushi and nothing else) i dont know muslim's meye yeh system hota hi ki nahi.

@vani
then we can include the prologue scene the shwal one i meant and the wrist band thing. that can be eid or something or some festive occasion.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
ok is the chapter like...

erm..khushi comes back to home then she goes arnav's home and then the marriage-clueless talk and she goes to arnav's room...

and the chapter ends? 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
@ appy
dont u think the reply u gave is a big ulta-pulta LOL
i mean its ur part then sandy's, then mine, then again sandy's then again mine...its nt in the correct manner so i am not getting the whole chapter..

does the chapter end with the waistband scene of mine? LOLi thought it shud be in the start as she goes and changes her dress as arnav told her to change in the prologue..if we start the chapter with somethin else the chapter will look a bit different from the prologue...dont u think?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: GodnMe.Foreva

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sandy

i still didnt get the whole chapter LOL
what is ur and appy's part and what is mine? 😕


ITS OK

FIRST CHAPTER LIKE THIS. IN PROPER MANNER THAT HAS TO BE FOLLOWED

APPY
OPENING SCENE ( LAST DAY OF RAMADAN) KHUSHI MOM SENDNING SWEET TO ARNAV'S HOUSE
KHUSHI ENTERING HOME, HER MOTHER SENDING TO ARNAV'S HOME,
ARNAV'S MOM ND KHUSHI'S TALK.


SANDY'S
LADIES SCENE


VANI
ARNAV'S ROOM SCENE...


SANDY
MOM DAUGHTER SCENE
SCENE WITH RAIZADA FIRST ON EID DAY

VANI
EID SCENE/ WAIST BAND SCENE


APPY
FINAL APPROVING OF UPDATE


HOWS THIS






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Posted: 13 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: sandy1

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WHAT ABT NEW PM ACC APPY DID THAT OR NOT YET


will do it soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
NO VANI THIS IS PERFECT AND NOTHING TO GET CONFUSE
NO PROB WE CAN CHANGES SCENES IN FIRST CHAP NOTHING TO WORRY
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ sandy

oh i get it NOW
lol

but what is "final approving scene that appy will write? omggg khushi will approve of the marriage???"
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@APPY @ VANI
DO U GUYZ HAVE ANY PROBLEM WITH THE LITTLE CHANGES OR ELABORATIONS I ADDED TO WORK
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
LET ME SEND PMZ NOW I HAVE UPDATED WEDDING BELLS SO NOW I'LL BE BACK IN 15 TO 20 MINUTESAND WILL READ THE CHANGES U GUYZ DISCUSS HERE

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