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Ria

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Posted: 10 years ago

beautifully written
i cud feel swayam's emotions...hats off to u penning dem down so well
thanks fr d pm :)

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Rachel

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Posted: 10 years ago

this was once again a brilliant work of yours!
beautifully written
the ending i would have liked it to be different but well its a story and i understand why you wrote it!
amazing as always!
love you !

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Piyu

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Posted: 10 years ago

this was so emotional.. but written beautifully

loved it nishi

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athi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

hey nish

nice drabble

its a proof for how very few words speak alot

in such short write up

you summed up everything

a reader wants to read

swayams loneliness

his love for sharon

his decision to be with her

and chose death instead of living the lyf of loneliness

nice one

keep writing and

keep pming me

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Shrisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

awesome os

Swayam's pain was beautifully described

and some where depressed people find their only way in suicides

but i am strictly against it though

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Sana

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wowww!

So emotional 😭...

Swayam's pain and the way he suicides out of depression is described really well

Hats off! 👏

Never read something like this before.. :)

Keep writing!

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Fatima

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Posted: 10 years ago

I will not complain in this, Nishi because I absolutely loved it.

His depression was beautifully captured.

I am also against suicide but in cases like this it becomes a necessity. Soulmates...I strongly believe it.

You come up with such extraordinarily beautiful stories.

I am a big fan 😳

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