A Swaron OS : Dady's Angel

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ANMOL

@Hp_TvD_mAnIc

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

wow dear asom os...

nd last line was aswom...
do write more some funny nd cute os plzz

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Mansi

@Mansi98

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

awesome OS👏

loved it❤️

ananya is seriously an angel😃

opps😆

i mean daddy's angel😃

it was damm cuet yaar😃

sharon shekhawat saying no fr icecream😆

but mr swayam shekhawat sunne se rahe😆

it was all in all very cuet OS😃

i love d last line most😃

n also when swayam was throwing her in air😃

keep writing more n more😊

n thanx fr d PM😊

Love

Mansi😊

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JensenVruShan

@JensenVruShan

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

What a beautiful and cute story

Loved the Father-daughter bond one of the best in the world Swayam as a doting father was wonderful😳 and the faith of Ananya was also described very well and Sharon is just adorable as the strict parent😆

''the day when I'll sit on my knees for some other girl would be when I'll tie shoe lace for my daughter''

this line was really the best in the story what a proposal

your writing just keeps getting better with each story

Thanks for the PM Ani 🤗 im reading all the stories albeit very slowly 😃

Edited by JensenVruShan - 10 years ago

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

sooo sweet nd cute nd lovely...

father daughter bond is sooo strong...

last line...it is sooo good yr...

thanks 4 d pm

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sonali saraswat

@cutelove

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Dis bond i really love nytime nyhow...dat swayam n his daughter bonddd...well written wth inclusion of dat fantadtic quote at end...dats one of myy fav ...!!!

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No name

@Incorrect

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

heyya ani😃

first of all m sorry i know m super late

but kya karoon busy hoon na

now about the os

the concept was soo adorable

i know u love swayam as a pampering dad

the cute talks between swayam n his daughter was adorable

the siren sharon was gud to read

the best part of the os was the last line i loved it to the core

all in all a beautiful os

unres ua comment ani

love

shini

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Preetirox

@Preetirox

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Awww!! Such a cute and super sweet os it was!!

Beautifully penned!!

The ice cream drama was super sweet!

The father and the daughters bond was well shown!!

Poor sharon got fooled by them!

On the whole it was amazing!

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

"the day when I'll sit on my knees for some other girl would be when I'll tie shoe lace for my daughter..."

iam in love with this line sorry for late commenting

i loved the os

loved the dadda swayam

keep writing more and more...

loved the daddy-daughter duo...

thnx for thepm

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

So beautiful Ani :)
Swayam and Ananya are too cute...He fed her ice-cream...awww
N the last line blew me away...Just so so s beautiful...It said so much about the love of Swayam :)
Amazing :)

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Taarey_Manan

@Taarey_Manan

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

RES
UNRES
AMAZING DIDU
LOVED D FATHER DAUGHTER DUO
JUST LOVE IT
THE WAY SWAYAM LET HIS DAUGHTER ANANYA HAVE D ICECREAM WAS AWESOME
AWW HE WENT N SLEPT WITH ANANYA
SHO CUTE DIDU
LOVED IT
ANOTHER AMAZING OS BY U
AWESOME
BEAUTIFUL
LOVELY
FABULOUS
SUPER DUPER HIT
MIND BLOWING
OS DIDU
THANKS FOR POSTING IT
-LOVE,
KANICA