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Posted: 10 years ago
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DADY'S ANGEL


"I want it right now..." she stood on the bed with a frown...

"you won't get it baby... Stop arguing..." came a calm voice from the balcony...

"may I know whats wrong???" came another sweet voice from the door and picked up the girl standing on the bed and gave her a twirl...

"papa..." a 4 year old ananya cooed in his father's arm... Yes ananya wanted chocolate ice cream at the odd hour of the night and her mother...mrs Sharon shekhawat was determined not to let he touch a scoop...

"yes my princess... so am I missing something..." swayam nuzzled her shoulder...

" I want ice cream and mamma is not giving me..." She flattered her lashes with a pout to melt swayam... the little girl surely knew how to flatter her father...

"swayam... no ice cream this late ...I am warning you..." Sharon came out of the balcony into the room glaring at swayam...

"of course Sharon... I know..." he gave a genuine smile and went Sharon keeping ananya on the bed... He gave her a warm hug and kissed her forehead whispering a miss you...

"not fair papa..." Ananya stamped her foot... swayam hugged sharon tighter so that she cannot see their conversation and quickly asked ananya to keep quiet and that he will see to the matter...

Swayam quickly freshened up and came down for dinner...ananya was sitting on the dinning table with a pooh in her hand while Sharon was feeding her... After she was finished with ananya she served herself and swayam and they ate and chatted over the day...

After dinner Sharon cleaned the table while swayam was playing with ananya in his arms...he was throwing her up in the air and catching her just in time swaying her In mid air breaking her into a fit of laughter... may be that's called faith of an innocent kid... she always has this blind faith that no matter what her father won't let her fall... she giggles without a fear of getting hurt just because of this one word...faith...

After Sharon was done she came and said...

"chalo ananya... sone chalo... swayam use apne kamre mein rakho..." And ananya suddenly remembered about ice cream... she looked hopefully at her father as fat tear drops brimmed her eyes ... Swayam being swayam could tolerate anything but her bacha crying...he immediately said cooing ananya...

"Sharon I think ananya is hungry again..i can hear her stomach rumbling..." He lied...

"huh??abhi to khilayi meine...do mein bhi sunu..." She came forward to hear her stomach... Swayam immediately pulled ananya closer in his arms and said...

"Sharon tum ek kaam karo jao so jao..mein meri annu ko ek glass milk pilake sula dunga...fir mein ata hoon..." by the time Sharon has forgotten about the ice cream drama...she was really tired so didn't argue much and went to her room...

Swayam took ananya to the kitchen and kept her on the kitchen cabinet...he opened the fridge and gave ananya a scoop of chocolate icecream in a bowl...

Ananya's face lit up and she hugged swayam by his neck with her small hands...

"love you papa..." Swayam kissed her cheeks and replied... " I love you too my choco pie..."

Ananya quickly indulged herself into the ice cream offering some spoon to swayam as well...

" hua kya?? Kya kar rahe ho tum dono???" Sharon shouted from the room...

"mein aannu ko ek glass dudh pila raha hoon..." he replied... Ananya giggled...

As she finishedshe looked at swayam with a pout... "papa el aur scoop do na..."

Swayam could never say no to his daughter... He quickly gave her one more scoop and they started having it...

"uff swayam??? Hua nahi??? " Sharon again shouted...

"nahi Sharon...mai anu ko ek aur glass dudh pila raha hoon..." He shouted back and got a tight hug and a kiss from ananya...

After their feast they went to sleep...

Next day it was a Sunday... they had planned to go to rey's house with ananya...

Sharon before walking into the bathroom warned swayam

"bohut late ho gaya hai..abhi agar tum nahi uthe to mujhse baat mat karna...abhi utho aura nu ko utha do... mamma ki baat to manti hi nahi tumhari beti..." She went inside... Swayam stood up with drowsi eyes and went to anu's room... Anu was sleeping hugging a pooh on her sweet pink bed with a barbie duvet... swayam went with a pout and made some place for himself and slept there hugging anu...

"swayam!!!!!!..." Sharon came inside the room and was shocked to see swayam sleeping there...

"SWAYAM...ANANYA...rey ka phone aa chukka hai..tum dono agar nahi uthe to mai bahar se lock karke ghar ko chali jaungi..."

Swayam immediately sat up and ananya too sat up rubbing her eyes and went on swayam's lap...

"goodmorning papa...good morning mamma..." She said hugging both of them...

Soon they got ready to leave for rey's house...

As swayam was wearing his watch ananya entered the room and said...

"papa..can u tie my shoe lace..."

"of course meri jaan..." Swayam bend down on his knees and made ananya sit on the couch and tied her lace while Sharon stood by the door adoring the two as she remembered swayam said while proposing her on his knees ,

"the day when I'll sit on my knees for some other girl would be when I'll tie shoe lace for my daughter..."




THIS WAS FOR MY RESTLESS SISTER DIYA...HAPPY BIRTHDAY MY CHOCO PIE!!!! MAY ALL YOUR WISHES COME TRUE!!!!

Love , ani...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Last Line...😊
Just luvd the Last Line yaar...👏
Itne achhe lines aate kahan se h...
Awesome OS yaar...👍🏼
Thanx fr pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
heyyy anii

i dont have anything to say

its sooo muchhh sweet one😳

and cute also👏👏

i loved swayam and ananya convos😆

its soo sweet

she is indeed a dady's girl😆

i loved the way she asked for ice cream to swayam😆

swayam he is a super cool dad,,,,😆😆

aww soo sweet was the kitchen scene

i loved the way swayam kept leing and sharon shouting😆😆

the next morning was awesome..
i loved the way swayam goes and sleep with ananya

the end was sooo much awesome...

i loves the way u end this...

the proposal words was soo cute and lovely

so write more

and update more

im waiting to read,,

soo
with lots of love
keechi di




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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh godz!!!
I loved it sooo sooo much didu
thank u thank u sooo much fr this gift!!!
hehe ur swayu n me anu NA 😛
mujhe ice cream chahiye!!!
Hehehe
love y didu
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Swayam & his daughter..have to be the sweetness ka dukaan. Their bond & convo was so cute..I read the whole update twice it gave such an awesome feeling. It reminds me my childhood with my papa.
The lastline of the OS was beautiful.
Very very nicely penned down. You are an amazing writer. Do write more on Swaron.
love,
Sree
Edited by sree_swaron - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome as well as cute os ani
Last line was high peech of the os
Great gng ani :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Aww.. so cute!
Nice OS.
Thanks for the PM.
Sorry I havent been able to read your other fics. Studies keeping me super busy ;(
I will catch up to them soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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jst luv the bonding bw father daughter duo...too cute..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awww so sweet
hayeee I just loved this story
I want ice cream too
n d last part d ending was mind blowing
I'm speechless
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Tis was so sweet ...i mean it
The last line was epic it made
The whole thing super spl
Poor swayam kya kya karna pardhtah hai usko
Doh doh princess ko samalney ke liye
The father daughtr bond was beautiful
Sketched
All in all a very pleasing read
Do write more ani 🤗

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