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Posted: 10 years ago
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DEar mods u can close this but pl read before closing
Technical ly im not breaki.g rules bcoz as of now theres no k or t in the serial :-)[

Leave ur brains behind please this is on d3BR]
Fire escape

Imagine kriya taani like the ghosts in Harry potter ...only more colourful
Ok scene
...both kriya and taaani in the white short dress that was the cause of irritation for rey and fight for both fandoms
No no stop...thats white ...colour of peace ...ummm...not for us...plus why bring that really short dress back

Costume change...taani in her anarkali of first date and kriya in her blackish frock ...ok :-)


Bg start now...tujhko jo paaayyyaaa...NO NAHIN...NOT AGAIN...STOP Bg
Just a whooossshhh

Ufff now start

Fire escape door opens and theres a bright light--a whooossshh noise--- and then both krita ghosts colourful ghosts on step no five
Kriya in a wheel chair...psss kriya ...u can drop the chair..ur a ghostly figure for now...oh ok kriya hangs up the irritating contraption on the wall
Now finally fine...both on step five:-)

Action

K /T - hi...pause...u know me?? ...both head shake one yes one no
K- actually im confused ki I know u ya nahin...pehle tho laga ki I know u swayam s behen and alll but phir laga ki nahin
U know how
T- nodding) I know CV s ..mere saaath bhi aisa hi hua tha ...waise main taaani hoon and I know ki aap kriya ho
Both smile and ask same time -yahaan kaise??
Both reply at same time- -- yaadein, memories and smile again
Both point to the floor no step seven (they r floating in air)

Rey s sitting on step seven his head in his hands like a statue
Both faces change to look sad as sad as ghosts can look

T- inko aisa dekhna bohot mushkil hain..aapke liye hi hain yeh sab devdas drama
K- yeh kaise keh sakthe ho?? Why not u
T- me nahin abhi aapka time chalrahaaan hain upar se rey ko selective periodic amnesia hain
But pose aur scene same hain mereliye bhi aise hi baithe the
K- defensively) tho aap chodke kyun gayi
T-mujhe kabhi samaj nahin aaya ki kyun gayi...atleast aapki paas koi tho reason tha.
K-CV s ne bhagaa diya hoga!!! Grinning taani smiled back

Both stare at the back of his bent head for a moment wishing they could run a hand in his hair

T- chalo sighing nothing I can do here..aap waapas kab aarahi ho?
K- errr...ummm..I dont know...matlab I dont know ki waapas aarahi hoon ya nahin ( sheepishly)
T- KYA??? But ...but ...but...(looking very upset) unfair hain...
K- arre aap hi waapas aajao na..main kya ...
T- main nahin aasakthi ..hum dono ki engagement ho chuki hain
K- dono
T- taani ki aur vrinda ki
K- oh that way...loooked at him again
T- but aap kyun nahin aarahin ho
K- (embarrassedly) shakthi ka contract ka kuch hain aur kriya... (pointing to the wheel chair hanging up on the wall)
Kriya ki haalat yeh hain
T- (look at the wheel chair and then at rey) inki haalat ke saamne mujhe kuch aur dikhaayi nahin dethi...sorry
K- (look at rey continuously) nahin I understand. .mujhe bhi aisa hi lagtha hain...but (look at taani)

Both together- CV s
Hey krishnaji hey universeji- rey ka khayal rakhna
Both krishnaji and universeji looked down surprised that the application came together

T- ab kya hoga
K- maybe kpi aur aayegi
T- nahin nahin...bichaaari ko do do fanclub ki gaali sun ni padegi
K- chalo phir rey akela hi rahenge
Both look sad but suddenly rey s head lifts up and his eyes half red half normal ot bcoz of crying and not crying phases
Punched his hand on the other hand
Taani pulled kriya aside as kriya looked irritated with him
T- ab yeh deewar ko maarenge yahaan aajao
K- yeh rey ki bachpana kab jaaayega...ab deewar ko maarne se kudh ki haath mein hi bleeding hogi

Rey cant hear them only we can
Rey- main akela nahin rahoonga...no ways (banging his fist on the wall) mujhe pata hain ki lya karna hain
Both kriya taani flinched at the bleeding hand and went hey krishnaji hey universeji while rey picked the mobile and dialled
Swayam dude tu abhi ke abhi fe aajao. ...t/k exchange glances...Sharon ko chod aur mere paas aa...main tumhe shaadi ke liye bhi nahin poochoonga... (listening relieved expression ...t/k stare at him) thanks yaar..tere hote hue mujhe aur kisiki zaroorat nahin..waiting
And cut the call..with a smile walked to and fro on the step seven and eight..looked at his hand...mere bleeding haath ko paati sirf tum baandh sakthe ho

Kriya looked horrifically and taani horrifically er
K/T- ab sharon?????
Aur vicky bhi
T- wo chodo..mujhe sharon ko bhabhi bulaane ki aadat hogayi hain ab main rey ko kaise bhabhi bulaasakthi hoon??
Kriya looked at her sympathetic and then both lets get out of here swayam ke aane se pehle
I know main rey ko aise nahin dekhsakthi

And whoooshhh...
Kriya appeared back pulled her wheelchair and then again whoooshhh
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Posted: 10 years ago
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fishhh 🤣
bst was swayam's behan...
mtlb...WTH rey ki baja dali tumne to 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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🤣
rey bhabhi🤣
this is such a funny os
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Posted: 10 years ago
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uff what an os
bechara rey...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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🤣his is exactl🤣🤣

this is exactly the sie efffects of being Rey fan
🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I just imagined Taani calling Rey "bhabhi," and then Rey responding to her with "ji nanadji." Just imagine guys! 🤣
Anyways, this is the funniest OS I've read in a while, so thank you for this. I'm actually surprised that there aren't that many K-T one-shots. But I really hope that you write more! 😃
By the way, iss sab mein Sharon ka kya kehna hein?

Edited by diyadawda13 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
OMG it was just so hilarious and perfect dear
kya udai hai sab ki
Rey taani's bhabhi 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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🤣 🤣

this was so damn funny


cant stop laughing


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh god...still can't stop laughing 🤣 🤣 🤣

Tanni calling rey babhi...this was epic 🤣
Uska bhai hi sauthan ban gaya🤣

par bechari sharon 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG OMG this is hilarious... awesome...
loved it baby loved it just loved it...

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