SwaRon TS:Nothing can keep us Apart (Current Track) Part2 on Pg4 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Farheen_vrushan

Nishi🤗

Loved the update dear...❤️

Bt ya u will get joote and chappals fr callin the update rubbish😡

U perfectly potrayed sharon ka guilt on hiding the truth and swayam ki curiousity on knowing why sharon was behavng all coldly..

Nd swaron kiss...along with swayam and sharon evn i went all blushy blushy just by readin it☺️

Ab jaldi jaldi strt workin on a new swaron story😳

Originally posted by: unishaz

superb..

Originally posted by: cutelove

Superb update ..really wow ..i mean such detailing wrk u hav done in order to get swaronish essence n u say it rubbish...plzz dnt cz it was jst outstanding.. It cld ha been simple talk bt dat inclusion of symptom of being crazy fr sharon seeing her disturbed i personally say i loved it to d core..n swaron kiss ..well i loved dat too...

u r an amazing writer
n every work of urs prove it
i m speechless after reading this work of urs
how u potray swaron character, their emotions is simply amazing
and obviously your pov to the story is so swaronish
thanks a lot for writing ..plz plz plz keep writing..
u r a blessed writer and i mean it👏

Originally posted by: Barbievishi20

More thn Amazing...
Wow Wow Wow
The way you portrayed Sharon's guit , Swayam's unconditional love by always supporring her was just wow wow wow...
+ A kiss totally bliss..
Thankyou so much Nishi for writing this...
You actually made my day..
You are Super Great Writer..
Keep Writing..

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

thank that finally at least sharon reveal the truth to swayan under such pressure situation
and both are in so love and it was a bliss of romance with that kiss part...
do continue soon and pm me

Originally posted by: sadafarsha

Hayye nishi

Kya update tha

I toh luved it sooo much

Itne dinon se wanted to read sumthing on this track and am waiting to see the reaction of swayam in the show

Am getting curious for that epi

Thanku for the pm 😳

Luv u

Sadaf.

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Dude why they don't show something like this in the show! Duh...their loss anyways.
It was superbly written nishi, really liked your take over this. Sharon and swayam's reactions were nicely described all over.
The corridor part had some nice lines explaining sharon's behaviour, i liked it and the kisss was bliss :D
Keep writing nishi :)

Originally posted by: Nishi.Kss

thanks Kajal..😃
greedy girl :P
waise im planning a new SS or FF maybe.. :P

yes...i m greedy..but its not my fault...tu likhati hi itna awesome hai ki ye dil maange more more more...
New ss or ff ...wow...
Bbtw tu hamesha hi meri wishes puri kar deti hai 😳 🤗
P.S tune muje hug nahi kiya 😡