SwaRon TS:Nothing can keep us Apart (Current Track) Part2 on Pg4 - Page 6

Originally posted by: shalomshini

nyc one nishi

loved it

Originally posted by: shantanuswayam

yes...i m greedy..but its not my fault...tu likhati hi itna awesome hai ki ye dil maange more more more...
New ss or ff ...wow...
Bbtw tu hamesha hi meri wishes puri kar deti hai 😳 🤗
P.S tune muje hug nahi kiya 😡

nishu this is awesome!!!!

Originally posted by: .Vrushanholic.

nishu this is awesome!!!!

so magical ^_^

Originally posted by: -shenz-

A nice portrayal of emotion and characters.. does leave me amazed.. And this was one that had both.. Your works are really catchy.. and along with that you pen down your imaginations really well.

And such reads are a bliss. It's enjoyable.. and moreover.. a refresher..

Keep up the good work!

Originally posted by: sweetdivya

nishi... 🤗

d update was awesome dear...i so loved it...

poor swayam he was really worried for her..i love dat part...

even sharon part was nicely penned down...

den swaron kiss...just made d update perfect...

and loved d ending too...specially d last line...

waiitng to read more from u now...

love

ur Divya Di.. 😳

Originally posted by: piyu1990

it's amazing nishi😃

i so wish we get to c like dis happen in the show

the way you portrayed Sharon's guit , Swayam's concern, his unconditional love was just amazing...

then swaron kiss loved the ending too..nothing can keep them apart

Originally posted by: Pallavimalhotra

u r an amazing writer
n every work of urs prove it
i m speechless after reading this work of urs
how u potray swaron character, their emotions is simply amazing
and obviously your pov to the story is so swaronish
thanks a lot for writing ..plz plz plz keep writing..
u r a blessed writer and i mean it👏

Again masterwork indeed,loved the way u potrayed SwaRon characters..Though i dont watch D3 anymore so current track and their story plot is like bouncer for me but but i must say The flow of emotions and their description was literally beautifull..The entire scene was perfectly penned according to ur imaginations..So in all,great work..keep it up

Sorry for the late comment Jerry.. 😛
Firstly Thank you for finally updating...😆
I'm sorry for the nagging...But kyakarti tu update hi nahi kar rahi thi..😳
Beech mein latkake chor diya... 😛

Coming to the story...
Beautifully written..
Wish we could have seen something like this onscreen.
This was perfect. Both Swayam and Sharon were perfect in the story.
Sharon's thoughts and turmoil.
Swayam's worry and concern for Sharon.
All perfectly described.
I especially liked the part where Swayam goes all numb.
And Sharon drops all her act then and there. 😳
I loved it. Ekdum SwaRonish tha. ❤️
Last mein SwaRon kiss. ☺️
Keep writing Jerry. 😃

P.S - Do send this to Ameeta and tell her this is what it should been on the show and NOT how she showed it. 😡