SwaRon TS:Nothing can keep us Apart (Current Track) Part2 on Pg4

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farryy...

@farryy...

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Nishi🤗

Loved the update dear...❤️

Bt ya u will get joote and chappals fr callin the update rubbish😡

U perfectly potrayed sharon ka guilt on hiding the truth and swayam ki curiousity on knowing why sharon was behavng all coldly..

Nd swaron kiss...along with swayam and sharon evn i went all blushy blushy just by readin it☺️

Ab jaldi jaldi strt workin on a new swaron story😳

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sonali saraswat

@cutelove

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Superb update ..really wow ..i mean such detailing wrk u hav done in order to get swaronish essence n u say it rubbish...plzz dnt cz it was jst outstanding.. It cld ha been simple talk bt dat inclusion of symptom of being crazy fr sharon seeing her disturbed i personally say i loved it to d core..n swaron kiss ..well i loved dat too...

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Vishi-

@Vishi-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

More thn Amazing...
Wow Wow Wow
The way you portrayed Sharon's guit , Swayam's unconditional love by always supporring her was just wow wow wow...
+ A kiss totally bliss..
Thankyou so much Nishi for writing this...
You actually made my day..
You are Super Great Writer..
Keep Writing..

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

thank that finally at least sharon reveal the truth to swayan under such pressure situation
and both are in so love and it was a bliss of romance with that kiss part...
do continue soon and pm me

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Sadaf Khalid

@sadafarsha

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Hayye nishi

Kya update tha

I toh luved it sooo much

Itne dinon se wanted to read sumthing on this track and am waiting to see the reaction of swayam in the show

Am getting curious for that epi

Thanku for the pm 😳

Luv u

Sadaf.

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Dude why they don't show something like this in the show! Duh...their loss anyways.
It was superbly written nishi, really liked your take over this. Sharon and swayam's reactions were nicely described all over.
The corridor part had some nice lines explaining sharon's behaviour, i liked it and the kisss was bliss :D
Keep writing nishi :)

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Nishi.Kss

thank you Shahnaz.. :D
short comment is really ok :)
im amazed that you were amazed by my work..really its a great compliment for me :)

A nice portrayal of emotion and characters.. does leave me amazed.. And this was one that had both.. Your works are really catchy.. and along with that you pen down your imaginations really well.

And such reads are a bliss. It's enjoyable.. and moreover.. a refresher..

Keep up the good work!

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

nishi... 🤗

d update was awesome dear...i so loved it...

poor swayam he was really worried for her..i love dat part...

even sharon part was nicely penned down...

den swaron kiss...just made d update perfect...

and loved d ending too...specially d last line...

waiitng to read more from u now...

love

ur Divya Di.. 😳

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: pooja123456
cute update!
swayam always by sharon side-awww...so swayamish

thank you..😃

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
swaron are made for each other..
nothing can keep them apart(not even cvs)..
the way you show sharon's guilt nd pain nd swayam's concern..
just fab..
so start writing new story..

thanks a lot..😃