SwaRon TS:Nothing can keep us Apart (Current Track) Part2 on Pg4

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GlamourousPearl

@GlamourousPearl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Plz update part2 soon
Worth reading...sharons part penned down very well...
Aisa swayam ab D3 shayad hi dekhne mile...hope dey utilize dis mrp track to strengthen srp's character as well as swaron's relationship
Well mst say ur fab...

N hoping nxt update longr n...

Edited by GlamourousPearl - 11 years ago

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zk456789

@zk456789

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Nice ts
thanks for the pm
Do update soon

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@Slayerkajal

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Thank you so so so much nishi 🤗 and shini ,you too 🤗
I m really really happy ...
The first part was amazing...short but still amazing...really wish we could see this in show but...any ways atleast in your ts we get what we wanted... 😛
Swayam's love and concern and sharon's state was nicely written...
Loved it specially their last convo...and swayam's dialoges...
Waiting for the next part ...monday ko update kar dena..delay mat karna...
Love you lots 🤗
P.S shini...i love you too... 🤗 don't be sad 😛

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bhumika gaur

@minimini66

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

heyy... 😛
this was awesome 👏 ... i was not so satisfied with the episode 😕
i mean sharon cried soo much and swayam not even asked her about the actual problem 🤢... and later on not even swayam's pov was shown in the episode
sooo THANKS to write on this situation 😳 😛 😉
update soon ... thanks for the PM 😊
MINI

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apy_swaron

@apy_swaron

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

This update was actually like i wanted it to be in the episode...

Well i even wanted sharon to open up and share everything with swayam... But still its ok i just hope there are no mus between them...

Well in the update swayam's concern for Sharon's such state was beautifully penned and the way he wanted to give her some time and space to get into right frame of mind...but i hope something similar would have been shown in the episode also...

All in all loved this one...

Update soon...😊😊

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

this was fabulous and amazing on current,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, lovely...
do continue soon and pm me

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sanchiswaron

@sanchiswaron

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

This is somewhat I wanted things to turn out

Amazing writing

Update soon

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

nishi 🤗

i loved TS dear...fst part was awesome..

every bit of it beautifully penned down...

sharon emotion's and swayam's concern for her nicely describe...

wish we had gt to see something similar...

nywaz coming bak to ur TS..

it was amazing..m waiting for next part...

update soon... 😳

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

nishi tis was an excellent write up

sharon's inner turmoil was beautifully penned

the scene whr she hears both her mother's n swayam's voice

was exactly how i wanted it to be

n i m happy tat you gave swayam's pov too tat way it was

easier for me to understand

wat he is going thru

all in all a very pleasing read

update soon 😛

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

That was a nice update nishi :)
You very well described sharon's emotions during her conversation with swayam and after that the inner turmoil too was firmly penned.
update soon.

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