Revenge tale :KriYaansh Short Series* Part -2 -Page -5 *

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Don't kick me please?? Aadat se majboor!! Can't help!! But dhamaka milega tum logon ko aaj!!

PS: Do tell me how is the name I mean Gif. I made it !! My first GIF !! ^_^ Me loving Photoshop .
* Finally I get back to my color !!😆*






She rejected the water given to her and kept crying. After a lot of bugging from her friend she finally decided to open up.


He tried to once again concentrate on the game but failed miserably. Throwing the controller on to the couch he walked away leaving his friend highly irritated. His friend followed him to the balcony too. How he hated him right now. And finally on his insistance he broke down telling everything to him.


" maine usse bohut pyaar kiya , aur itne din soch rahi thi ki wo bhi mujhse uthna hi pyaar karta hai "

" par sab jhoot tha, mei uskeliye sirf timepass tha "

"wo mere saath aisa kaisa kar sakta hai , wo mere peeche pada aur ab " She broke down.

" mai usse bohut pyaar karta hun , bas kehdiya ki mereliye kabhi pyaar jaisi feeling tha hi nahi , I still love her so much " he hugged his friend tight trying to find comfort.

She broke down more when her friend kneeled beside her and pulled her into her lap and patted her head. She felt in peace.

" naam kya hai?? " his friend asked pulling apart.

" Kriya " he turned around to control his tears once again. Her name itself can affect him so much.

She stayed silent ignoring her question.

" Ab bolegi bhi? " hearing the stern voice she spoke up.

" Reyaansh " she sat straight as her friend walked away confusing her. She needs her now and this girl left just like that. She slowly stood up and followed her to her bedroom. Her eyes went wide seeing her friend opening her laptop. She ran but was too late. Her Desktop had his picture.

" Reyaansh " she heard her friend whispering .


" Phone de apna"

"kyun?? " he questioned.

"abey dena " he handed it and his friend saw the wallpaper.

"toh ye hai Kriya?? " he nodded looking away.

" Get ready in 10 mins. Maine spa mei appointment liya hum donon keliye .

" Par Kriya "

"Ohh shut up Sharon. Kab tak uss ladke keliye roti rahogi? let's out , pehle spa then shopping and raat ko tum jab royegi tab company keliye ice-cream leke aate hai " Kriya winked.

" Par ek tha tho " sharon frowned.

" Subah bhook lagi toh kha liya , servant nahi aayi aur tu bhi nahi tho bas khaliya " she shrugged her shoulders and walked out of Sharon's room to her own room to get ready leaving Sharon gaping at her shocked.

" Dude tu na ye sab bhool ja , and try to move on. And uski first step hogi restaurant , I am damn hungry , and then pub chalte hai . "

"Nahi Rey bilkul mann nahi hai "

"Swayam " he called oh - so lovingly and when Swayam looked at him "SHUT UP, mai apna jacket leke aata hun apna muh dhole jaake "

" Rey " he tried but all in vain. Rey is already out of his room.

She stood in front of the mirror combing her hair. Suddenly she stopped and looked at her image.

"Meri Bestie-Sister ka dil koi nahi todtha. " applying lipstick she mouthed a kiss.

"So mister Reyaansh , get ready to experience a heart-break " Blowing the strand falling on her cheeks she grabbed her handbag and walked out.

Sitting in the car, waiting for Swayam he adjusted his hairs in the rear mirror.

" Mera bestfriend bohut acha hai , aur tune aaj usse rulaya ,get ready Miss Kriya , bohut rone wali ho tum " he smirked and started the engine seeing swayam coming out of their house.


So here it ends. I know sabko poora concept samajh aagaya . Hopefully pasand bhi aaya !!

So get ready to enjoy the Jhooti pyaar kahani !!🤣

Reviews and likes PLEASE?? !! I lUB THEM !!😳

-Deetha

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Deetha. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1 - Scroll Up

Part 2 - Page 5

Part 3 - Coming soon
Edited by -Blind.Dance- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start
Yeh swayam aur sharon ka plan hena
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Deetha 😆
This is fab
Rey broke Sharon's heart and Kriya broke swayam's heart
And now Kriyaansh are going to break each other's heart

Intresting update soon loved this first part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved d concept though I had to re-read it again to understand😆

Kriya and Rey all set to make each other face.

Gonna be interesting.

Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesum part dear continue soon n pm me too
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Posted: 11 years ago
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okk dii this concept is fan
first I didn't understand again I read
ab samajgayee
rey broke Sharon heart
kriya broke swayam heart
now kr gonna break each other heart
intrestingg diii continue soon
dii plss update ur works In ur gallery plsss
update the next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
unres

it seems interesting
nice concept and i quite liked the title

hope to see the next part soon



youare rocking with ps
great work
Edited by -Ocean.eyes- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Welcome to the PS world sp !
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I can already see its majic on you !
The gifs r simply WOW !
Me loves them !
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The write up is mast !
Love the storyline !
Though its common it depends on the writer to make or break the story !
And knowing you I know we are in for a ride !
Ab jaldi update do -_-
Warns I'm gonna run behind you !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG starting me i was so confused..ho kya raha tha kuch samjha nhi..

but ab samjh gya..

dii this is damn awsum i loved it..

haye jhoota pyaar m waiting for that,..

jaldi jaldi update karna

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