Revenge tale :KriYaansh Short Series* Part -2 -Page -5 *

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MysticMuse

@Mystic_Muse

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

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Awesome start. Your stories are always a treat to read.

I love the concept very much.

Dekhna ye hai k ye Hate-Love Story ki kahani kaise aage badhti hai.

I loved your title.

Mujhe pehele laga tha k Kriyaansh ka hal kuch aisa hai par yahan to ulta hi ho gaya. 😆

I have read another story of yours, jisme na KRIYAM are lovers aur ghar se bhage hue, nw i am nt finding that link. Actualy forgot the stry name.

If u cn provide the link it will be helpful.

Thank u.

Do update soon.

Edited by AishPoojaKR - 11 years ago

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Dee tere tede mede concept nai mujhe confuse kar dala...

Bandi I read this twice to get...

Mere bulb late jala kya karun..

But thats a good spice of writer..Start mai readers ki band bajana

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Akanksha

@Effacious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

ye kya? :O

tu isko surprise bolti hai...

Revenge Tale...like seriusly???

kuch bhi matlab...

pehle toh mjhe laga ki Rey Kriya ka breakup hua hai...but... Swayam n Sharon...like seriusly... hey bhagguuu ladkiii...

but this looks interesting... Hate-Love story...maza aayega... :P

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Rajeshwari_KR

@Rajeshwari_KR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Uff I loved the concept

Starting mein kya socha tha aur end mein kya hogaya😲

Really loving it Kriya and Reyansh breaking Swayam and sharon's heart and now all set to break each other!Gr8!

just can't wait to read more...update soon

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moumita

@sumimita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

start mein confused thi... then i got it...

nyc concept deeths...

ok now rey and kriya will take the revenge against each other for their bestie swayam and sharon..

pls update it soon

with lots of love

moumita

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krarshanaval

@krarshanaval

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

amazing and great... do continue soon and pm me

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mir_mishti

@mir_mishti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Dee🤗

it's fabbb..😛

Rey & Kriya seeks revenge from each other..😛

I just love Agrassine love story.. & it seems same..😃

Yes.. First both will make each other fall for themselves..😳

Eagar to know further story..😉

P.S. Very nice gif.. beautiful..😛

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PseudoWriter

@..Evanescent..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Lagta hai heartbreak season chal raha hai 😆

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shalini saroha

@shalini_arsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

i m already in lov it rey... Concept is amazing nd different... :) perfect name...:) i lov gif's too.. :) well done babe ...ab tu apne gif khud bnaya kr...:p

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alex754

@alex754

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Tooo good
I just loved the concept
The way u unvealed the names in the story is just fabulous
Awesome
Pls PM ME when u update
I am totally waiting for kriya's character to unveal soon
Each character is very interesting
Great start