Revenge tale :KriYaansh Short Series* Part -2 -Page -5 * - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Wow Awesome concept.
Loved it.
so both out for revenge for their friends.
Can't wait to see more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
concept was too good yaar...and is interesting too...!!!!
waiting for next part...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
luvd d startng... 😛
its awesom...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Deetha, awesome concept. Loved it. Continue soon please!

All I gathered is that the girl and boy were SwaRon and the respective friends were KriYansh. I loved the couple reversal twist! :))
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
i don not know to many times i read it again... finally got it...
so it basic the revenge tale ... interest... of hate to love story...
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
ausome a Revenge Tale...

I would love to read it...

Ausome start...

Do write soon...

Love Aditi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27


PART-2


" Kriya sach mei uski zaroorat nahi hai , I am fine . I can manage. " Sharon walked behind the rich bitch roaming here and there creating a storm in the house just to search her red high pumps which she threw somewhere yesterday after getting drunk highly.

" Ohhh Pleassee!! FINALLY " she grabbed her pumps and started wearing it.

Sharon rolled her eyes and followed her. Kriya literally ordered her that she will be dropping her to her college and then leave for her's. Isn't this girl treating her like a 5 year old ?? She sighed. Kriya was always like this. She is too precious to Kriya. She sometimes wondered how can a girl like Kriya love her so much.

" Dekh aaj ke baad tu uss bande se nahi milegi aur dikh gaya toh ignore karogi. Be strong. " Kriya repeated for God know the count , from morning.

Sharon left and Kriya drove back slightly and stopped right at the Main gate . And that's the time she saw HIM coming.

" Finally the target is here " and she looked away immediately and walked to the nearby stall where books were kept. While parking Rey saw a new girl in the campus. She didn't seem familiar. Clad in a plain black jumpsuit and those red high pumps making her look more sexy she walked to the book stall.

Kriya wantedly looked back just to see whether he got out of his car without him noticing and that's when he saw her face.

" Wow!! Isne toh mera kaam hi aasaan kardiya. Great. Khud chalke mere paas aayi. " with that he adjusted his jacket and stepped out and walked towards her, which inturn is the way into the college. So he planned to make her fall in his arms by pushing him but even before he could do something she wantedly bumped into someone and fell back and he took the chance grabbing her by waist and holding her safe. Kriya closed her eyes tight. What if he doesn't catch her . But once sensing a grip over her she smiled thinking her plan worked. She slowly opened her eyes and looked at him innocently acting a bit feared. Rey thanked his stars for fulfilling his wish without him doing anything. The moment she opened her eyes he looked at her faking concern.

Aisa act kar raha hai ki duniya mei isse jyaada mereliye aur koi concerned hi nahi ho sakta .

So innocently. My foot. Acting as if duniya mei yahi sabse jyaada innocent hai .

" You okay? " he started the conversation, and asked with fake concern.

"Yeah !! Fine. Thank you " she straightened herself with his help and thanked him acting innocent.

" Tum ?? maine tumhe yaha kabhi dekha nahi "

" wo mai bas meri ek cousin ko dekhne aayi thi. " She smiled sweetly.

" Ohhh!! Cousin?? koun? " He thought he might get some help from her that cousin.

" Actually , wrong info mili thi . Wo kisi aur college mei padta hai "

" So , can I know you name beautiful??? " He gave his charming smile.

" Hmmm, tumne hi toh bataya , Beautiful " she gave a sugary smiled and started walking away.

" Ye Miss . Beautiful rehti kaha hai?? " he called from back.

" Sorry Mr.Handsome, it's a secret " she turned back and whispered and both smiled at each other.

Hmmm !! I know Swayam ne mujhe bataya ki usse tumhe patane keliye kitna time laga. No worries Miss.Ghai, take your time... tum jitna time logi mai tumhe utna impress karunga , aur utna hi zor se tera dil tootega.

Not so easy Mister.Singhania. You have to work hard to get me. Jitna jyaada time mujhe impress karne mei spend karoge uthna hi difficult hoga mujhe bhoolna. Aur utna hi deep hoga wo mark jo tumhare dil tootne pe hoga.


" I love mysteries " he whispered back.

And giving each other sugary smiles they walked back and she walked out and he walked into the college.


They knew how to find the other , their best -friends being their greatest help.

You got to pay for what you did to Sharon Mr.Singhania.

I will make sure you experience what my bestie is going through now Miss .Ghai

They swore to themselves and left .




So how is it??

Reviews please!😳

-Deetha 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
hmmm...i'm liking it ;)

bith of them know the other one is pretending...but what acting boss... haah... xD

ok m really looking forward to how they r gonna trap the other one... this will be intereting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
loved both the parts!
concept seems interesting,
i love how they're both unknowingly taking revenge of one another and making things easy
little do they know what future has in store for them :P
update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Oh woww Rey ne sharon ka dil toda n kriya ne swayam ka [:O]
Kriyansh on missing Revenge [:-P]
Yeh dono revenge k chakkar may dil de denge ek duje ko [:-*]
Kya acting karte hai
jaante hue bhi anjaan bano [:-P]
SUPEB DEE duper like [:-*]

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