SWARON SS:Swayam and Me(Current Track)UPDTD PART5

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Amy

@Amy21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Awesome.. 😊 👏
Where is swayam..
Well done.. 👏

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shaaz23

@shaaz23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Just heart touching
Gangs concern was awww
Great work
Update soon

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

so finally some of their intention of the person came in front of the gang and his dad too
came to know... and his dad first spoke to sharon and told the entire thing truth...
and the gang is make a lot of difficult for sharon... i hope she get well soon...
do continue soon and pm me

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964103

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Vaah!! Kahan chhoda h!! Aisa kaun karta h?? Ab aagey ki story?? Very badd...

To correct this, update real fast!!😛

Loved Sharon's monologue!!

Want to noe Swayam's reaction!!

Thnx fr d pm!!😃

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Firstly sorry for d late comment. . Have been busy these days. .
It was a really great start. .
I liked how u penned d emotions in first part. .
Ur choice of words n way of presenting it is quiet impressive. .

Coming to second part i got a little confused i could not understand y everyone were blaming sharon n most importantly swayam left her alone in dat situation dat is somethin i can't imagine even in my dreams. .
But anyways i prefer waiting for further updates to get my answers. .

Third part was really emotional. .
U wrote it beautifully i really loved all dialogues..
It touched. . Par where is swayam y is he missing. .
Lookin forward to further updates. .

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

awesome update..

loved sharon's monologue along with gang's cry for her to come back to normal..

but where s swayam y s he not here???
update next part soon...

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sonali saraswat

@cutelove

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

loved each n every part bt u know aadat se majboor my mind was searching fr only one.person dat is swayam ..i mean har line ke baad i thought ab swayam ka no bt it ended...bt seriously well written !!! i know next wld be amazing so plllz update soon dear...

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

so amazing... bt where is swayam..???? want him der...
update soon plzzz... cnt wait fr d next part

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GlamourousPearl

@GlamourousPearl

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Completely sobbing me...
Emotional update...bt 1 thing I would appreciate is that u put all characters of d3 in ryt place wid correct dialogue usage...
Apt n beautiful execution of friendly bond of da whole gang...
Loved each bit of it...
Hmm...questions pouring in mind...
Wat hapen to sharon?
Why gang n dad react like dis?
Y did bharath mention "10day"?
Wat abt swayam ?
Where is he?
Y isn't he wid Sharon?
Isn't he suppose to be aid her?
Where is ruhi?

Answer to all dis question r demanded ryt away...bt bt bt ...will wait for u next update...coz u cumup wid something totally amazing n unxpectd...

Plz update soon n do pm plz...

PS...thnx for da wonderful n emotional update + for pming me...
Keep dat smile on...

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ANMOL

@Hp_TvD_mAnIc

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

hey here is my comment...

sorry 4 late cmmnt

wow girl it is an amazing piece of work..

i loved it... its totally diff...

nd sharon pov is aswom its is really beatutifully pended down...

nd u maintain a same pace in all chap its aswom... but a third chap is little fast ..but no worries ur going good...nd phlzz give big chaps...

plzzz update soon...

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