SWARON SS:Swayam and Me(Current Track)UPDTD PART5 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
finish reading your both parts together ... it was fabulous and superb...
omg i so hate her because of that sharon got so much hurt and her friends to did
not support her in this and has strength in herself in heart to bear...
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
OMG this was daamm interesting and amazing
Great work
Plz update soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
res
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i m more shocked aftr reading these two chapters in one go
the gud thing is i hate ruhi more 😉
amazingg update i must say
sharon's asthma was very intelligently used
a got to see a very hurt n shattered sharon in tis update
moreover i want to see wat is
swayam's reaction in all tis
do update soon 😛


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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
omg... I m shocked.. ruhi is cleverer than sharon, bt in d end I hope sharon will get everything back... update soon n thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sachi! I haven't been watching D3 lately, but I still got the entire plot! I know your love for intense stories so I can expect a little bit of the outcome of this one xP That stupid Ruhi! Urgh!!
Do update soon! And thank you for the PM! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Aww!! That's heart crushing!! Everyone is acting so... I don't know!! Poor Sharon!!!😔
Would lyk to see how she handles things all by herself!! I'm sure she'll win her friends, dad and her LOVE back!!😊

Thnx fr d pm!! Continue soon!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh my god... now i m shocked... its interesting... plz update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Hola Guys! Thanx for the support! Still waiting for comments from @Tanvish di, @swaronlove001, @mihi4vrushan,@rosyrkohly and @shilpaswaron! So,here is the next part..I hope you all like it!

PART THREE

Ya, I am on Deathbed and am thinking of all these things. I was thinking about Amar's Mobile Cafe, when I heard someone sobbing besides me. I was listening carefully than I realised that it was my Dad. Oh, Dad you don't have to cry. I am sorry to make you cry Dad,pls don't. I wanted to go and hug him but I was energy less to do that. And suddenly he started to say something. I couldn't hear clearly but I could make out what was he saying.

Dad:- Sharon, I am sorry bete. I didn't make a great parent. I was always on some or other Business Tour. After your Mom passed away it was difficult for me to face you. You reminded me of her. Angelic face, contagious smile and top of that a Graceful dancer just like your Mom. I am sorry to not give you enough time,Sharon. I am sorry for whatever happened today, I know you did not do that. Sharon, please wake up child. I love you darling. Just wake up, I promise I won't leave you ever.

(And Gautam Raiprakash left as he was not able to speak more. He could not see Sharon in such a state. Vicky left Gautam Prakash at his place and made him rest. Rey promised Gautam that he will take care of Sharon.)

There was a lot of sound in the room and soon I realised that it was Rey, Kria and Simmi fighting to speak with me. And they settled with Rey speaking with me first as he was my Best Friend since the longest time. And than Simmi and Kria in the order. Oh, lord everyone is being so sweet. I love these guys.

Rey:- Sharon, come on yaar. I am sorry. I blamed you for everything. And is this a way to take revenge? God Sharon you took Life out of me.Please wake up Diva, the college needs you and He started crying.

I love Rey so much.He has been their with me from the longest time and he understands me. Rey take care dear, even if I am not there you have to take care of Yourself,Dad and Gang..I made a silent prayer to God.

Simmi:- Babe, please wake up. Please wake up please and she started wailing, and than her voice vanished. I guess Rey took her out of the ward.

Kria:- Sharon dekhiye, main jaanti hu aap naraz hain sabse. Par ab main aa gyi hu na sab thik ho jayega. Uss Ruhi ki toh me aisi band bajaugi na ki humesha yaad rakhegi. Actually you know what aap uth jao phir saath main milke use Indore bhejege. Bohot maza aayega :P !

Rey:- Sharon, hume I mean mujhe aur Kria ko tumse ek bohot important baat share karni hai. Actually, I and Kria are a couple. We love each other and I guess u already knew that.

Kria:- Sharon aap voh pehle insaan jisse humne ye baat share ki hai. Humne abhi tak Swayam se bhi share nahi kia.

I felt so overwhelmed that I could not express. Finally, Rey and Kria are a couple. I feel so good that they shared this with me first. I know Swayam is an important person in their life. God, why are you making me listen such things when I am in such a condition? Damn!

Soon, I found everyone I mean the Gang speaking together.

Nilesh:- Sharon just wake up ha , we are not gonna pamper you always. You always find some or other reason to get pampered.

Rinni:- Sharon, babe wake up pls. What would I do here without you? Which dress would I wear on our Farewell?

And I chuckled mentally hearing that. RINNI is RINNI!

Bharat:- Ab tu natak band kar Sharon, kitna darayegi hum sabko? Teri daat sune hue 10 din hogaye. Ab chal uth jaa banatae.

And than I realised that I am in this situation since 10 days. Lord, don't make these guys suffer because of me,Please!

Amar:- Shalon me tumhala wait kal rha hu . Mela Mobile Cafe bohot accha chal lha hai. Tum jaldi aao, me tumhali favourite Cold Coffee banauga.

Aashi:- Sharon aap ek baar thik types ho jayiye, me promise types karti hu, main aapko aur Swayam ko kabhi pareshaan types nahi karugi.

Vicky:- Sharon I am sorry yaar. You know me well na. I speak it without any intention. Main darr gya tha Sharon. Chalo ab uth jao , we will go to a New Restaurant, it has recently started in Bandra. Its Awesome!

And I could hear sound of mild cries. Guys, you all me love so much. I wish you all become great Dancers and make me proud. After all God completes wishes of people who are gonna Die..

And that was too much for me,I went into Deep Slumber.

Pls give Comments and Hit the like tab, if you liked it. Much more to come :D!

Edited by sachi123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Loved the Sharon monologue n everyone's prayers to wake her up
But Swayam kaha hai?
Awesome update
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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emotional...
gang is there bt where is swayam? he was not there with shar..emotional update dear..update soon..
Edited by Rockingbhardwaj - 11 years ago

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