SWARON SS:Swayam and Me(Current Track)UPDTD PART5 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: sakshibshah

It was soft , calm, beautiful...
I mean I really really loved it...

Do continue this...

Lovely work! <3
Update asap..
Sakshi...


Thanx Sakshi 😃!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prachijainn

INTERESTING PART DI


WAITIIING FOR NXT ONE
UPDATE SOOON


Thank You Chotu😛!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanx for the reviews guys. It is overwhelming and encouraging ! Here is the next part, I hope you like it!

PART TWO

The biggest mistake of my Life was to confront Ruhi about her illness. She became aware of my plans and thinking. Instead of defending herself , she targeted my weaknesses. I couldn't believe that the small town girl Ruhi could do something like that. She aimed everything properly. I ,Sharon Raiprakash have few weaknesses, everyone has one. She attacked Dance, Swayam, Friends, Asthma and Papa all in one go. She knew this would take Life out of Sharon Raiprakash. Ruhi was indeed right. This definitely took Life out of me. The series of things which happened some time ago had made my Life upside down. I don't remember when did all of it exactly happen.

We were setting up our base on 3rd floor in our college for the Affiliation and hacking up the college id and all. Swayam didn't take part in any of it. I regret not listening him. Vicky was setting up the laptop and all of us were helping him.He was sure that he would handle it properly. There was a point in hacking where they needed a Trusties name and I without thinking told him to enter my Dad's name.Everyone was tensed so no one thought about it logically. Gautam Raiprakash my dad was in trouble now. Vicky couldn't handle the thing at one point. I took the initiative to handle it properly. I was alone in the room , everyone went to Canteen and I sent Rey to Swayam so that he could sort things out between them. Just then Ruhi came, I was startled a bit. She said that she would complain about this to VP sir. I was angry. I too warned her that I would tell everyone about her mental condition. She left. Just when everything was done,I was about to press "Enter" the sparks from the computer started, Damn! It was a short circuit. Ruhi locked the class from out. I panicked, I had to save the machine. I put my scarf on the CPU but it didn't work. Fire was increasing. My Asthma triggered, I was coughing badly. The Door opened and I saw Rey, Swayam, Ruhi and the Gang. Simmi gave me inhaler. I had no option but to take it infront of everyone. Ruhi spoke, "Sharon aap thik toh hena? Hume nahi pata tha ki apko Asthma hai, Apki vajah se Dance team ko affiliation nahi milega aur saath hi ye sab ke bare me puri College jaan legi" and she left.

Vicky- Sharon tumhe Asthma kabse hua?Kya tum ek chotisi responsibility nahi sambhal sakti thi ? Ab tumhare vajahse humara ek bhi dream pura nahi hoga and he left.

Rey- Tumne thik nahi kiya Sharon.

Amar , Bharat, Rinni had tears in their eyes, maybe tears of seeing their Dream shattered.

Simmi patted my shoulder slightly and left with Nilesh.

Swayam stood there, he saw me with all the Anger and Sympathy in his eyes. I went towards him to justify myself but he wasn't interested to listen it. He too left leaving me alone. Soon, everyone in the college came to know about the event. I was responsible because I handled it and the fire took place in my presence. My Papa was called and he was charged Rs.1,00,000 for the crime I committed. I was expelled from the College.No one, not even a single person supported me. Everyone made faces infront of me , called out various names. I was numb, my asthma, shattering everyones dream, SWAYAM, REY, DANCE, PAPA , I had lost everything because of Ruhi. I hate myself so much for this.

My Dad took my hand in his and in anger, he took me out of the College. I was so numb that I could not register what was happening around me. A truck came in my direction and hit me.*Thud* I could here lot of sound around me.A shocked Swayam was standing infront of me.

A/N:- I hope you like this part. As I told this is a different kind of thing, wait there is lot more to come.

Cheers,

Sachi.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Shocked
Ruhi 😡
Sharon lost everything
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Want to killed that ruhi 😡
Sharon met with accident 😭
Well done.. 👏
Next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
I read your OS and boom my questions
Why did they , espicially vicky ! blam sharon instead of confronting her and comforting her ?
what was her fault after all ?
Why didn't swayam help her at thet moment ?
i hate Ruhi a zillion times more after this :)
After all these questions , i would like to state that
I LOVED THIS
Very beautifully written !
I wanted to Run to Sharon and help her out
ANd Sharon ka accident
by god my heart stopped functioning for a moment
I loved love and will love sharon no matter what :P
May this was too intense for me to handle ,
They called sharon names
I wanted to rip their heads of 😆
then i realized that its a OS
and i got soo into it
which got me emotional
Sharon's accident is hurting but , i'm looking forward to it
do pm me , after all i gave a big comment :P
update soon please
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
dis one amazing ya ...really good bt u ended.a wrong time ..well it has to happen..
u story taking a good turn..update it soon plzz.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: fanista

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I read your OS and boom my questions</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Why did they , espicially vicky ! blam sharon instead of confronting her and comforting her ?</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">what was her fault after all ?</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Why didn't swayam help her at thet moment ?</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">i hate Ruhi a zillion times more after this :)</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">After all these questions , i would like to state that</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I LOVED THIS</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Very beautifully written !</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I wanted to Run to Sharon and help her out</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">ANd Sharon ka accident</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">by god my heart stopped functioning for a moment</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I loved love and will love sharon no matter what :P</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">May this was too intense for me to handle ,</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">They called sharon names</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I wanted to rip their heads of😆</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">then i realized that its a OS</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">and i got soo into it</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">which got me emotional</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Sharon's accident is hurting but , i'm looking forward to it</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">do pm me , after all i gave a big comment :P</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">update soon please</font>




Ohhho! Breathe Girl! I am sorry for making it too intense, But i love it this way! Even I love Sharon too much, I hope i satisfy you with further updates!:D!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
I got too emotional yaar
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Wow! Amazing!

Want to see Swayam's Reaction !

Ruhi...arghhh!

Sharon...aww poor she !

Update asap.
Sakshi.,

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