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ANMOL

@Hp_TvD_mAnIc

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

lovely os loved it di...

update soon

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GlamourousPearl

@GlamourousPearl

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Amaaazzziiing...truly amazing👏...
i was actually imaging VruShan all da time while reading i so want dis to b on my screen... da loverboy da intense Swayam n his Sharon...oh god superbly penned...
n der convo waow fullon emotions...jst out of da world...

i loved Simmi's outburst on Swayam...a truefrnd of sharon was out in ur FF...though i hate her n nil's ongoing watever it is...wat waste of tym dey r shown frm lastweek

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Amazing os..👏

great work..👍🏼

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

awesome... plz update soon😊

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bhavika

@BhaviJas

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

i luvd it...
it ws dam emotional intense...
jaldi laldi update do...dying to read more...

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

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unres

good to see you back varshu di!

i missed your works

and this one was awesome

swayam and sharon's POV was beautifully written..the doubt in swayam's mind was nicely conveyed..

then kriya's entry and sharon's insecurity..nice..it was great how sharon kept aside her ego and became friends with kriya just for swayam..

i loved it when swayam said(or rather thought) that he could not imagine any1 but sharon in the dance..

and then sharon hearing what swayam said..that he wanted to move on..how bad she felt that she couldnt make him trust her..beautifully written..

simmi just won my heart by making swayam realize sharon's love for him

and the last part...awesome!

in short it was amazing..

please update soon

love

nishi

Edited by Nishi.Kss - 11 years ago

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

awesome os..

amazing awesome beautiful n brilliantly penned os..

kria's plan back fired coz of swayam's words hurt sharon a lot..

sharon went to her farmhouse n still lost in swayam's words..

simmi's outburst was well penned.. i loved that part a lot..

finally swayam remembered abt d farm house n went to get her..

sharon's questions were awesome n swayam kissed her to show his love.. loved d kiss part n d promise they shared.. loved d way u penned d whole os..

waiting for next part of this os.. write soon.. waiting for it..

emotional n awesome os.. in love with ur way of writing..