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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Good to see a OS from u after a long time.
Loved the way how u described sharon's longing n emotions.
Poor sharon,glad that swayam finally realised ki Sharon loves him.
N the kiss <3.
Waiting for next part

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Yet again u have striked a chord from within. .
Am speechless am so emotional am so in tears rite now. .
I literally don't know Wat do i say. .
It was magical magical magical. .
I was so so lost in reading it dat i just din realise Wen i started crying while reading. .
It was so fabulous. .
Loved it completely. . Felt as if its part of me n my life. .
My words can't do justice to Wat u have written. .
One more brilliant piece of writing. .
U sure r an amazing writer n one of my favourite writers. .
It feels awesome reading ur os again after such a long time. .
Am just so touched 👏 👏
Isse zyada i don't know Wat to tell varshu. .
Update soon pls. . I just can't wait to read further. .

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try2149

@try2149

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

amazing os.just loved it.i have agoosebumps while reading it.

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Muskan Verma

@Muskan_SwaRon

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Ahhh

it was superb, amazing, mind blowing, fantastic 😳

Loved kriya's plan and Simmi, wat to say, uski wajah se swayam ko akal aayi 😆

loved the ending , it was so romantic and emotional

love u dii for writing this 🤗

i hope show me bhi jaldi patch up ho

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

edited my comment on pg3..😊

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Pallavi Malhotra

@Pallavimalhotra

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Amazing work
I hope new cv 's read this.. script ready h woh bs implement hi kr de...
Seriously thanks 4 this os.
Do continue soon

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uhs313

@uhs313

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Beautiful OS...Hope something like this happens in the show... hope swaronpatch up soon...If Only Cvs had brains like u...U r such a talented writer 👏 Keep up the good work 😃

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SnehaluvsKSG

@snehaswaron77

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Plz continue asap plz. I want some high volatage romance & sensuous swaron in next update plz..

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Ashu

@Avalanche.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Amazing!! Loved the passion and intensity!! Emotions ki baarash and simmi's outburst were awesome!! Pls update soon!!

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Namratha

@nami2811

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

I'm late and I loved it!

Read an OS after a looong time and it was worth it! End filmy tha :D

About not writing much I do understand coz work n SwaRon scenes nt so inspiring thses days :(

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