kariyaansh/abhiya ts- aye khuda p 2 page 5 - Page 3

Originally posted by: krarshanaval

BOTH THE VERSION WERE QUITE GREAT AND I AM BIT CONFUSED TO...
LOOK FORWARD TO READ MORE... DO CONTINUE SOON AND PM ME

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

nice os... hope u write 2nd part... do abhay died???

Originally posted by: dazzlingmanavi

AWSM OS

U DESCRIBED EVERYTHING SO PERFECTLY

THE PAIN WAS NICELY CONVEYED THROUGH UR WORDS

I DONT LIKE SAD ENDINGS :(

Originally posted by: prateek.007

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2" color="#990000">Vishu dude..Awesome start..Though i am D3 swaron lover but i also read Kriyaansh work..So all i can say it was perfect description..I like it..Beautifully written..So i am just looking forward..So do update soon..</font>

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<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2" color="#990000">Thanx for PM</font>

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