kariyaansh/abhiya ts- aye khuda p 2 page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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abhiya version on next post

kriyaansh version


Aye Khuda Tune Muhobbat Yeh Banai Kyun Hai
Aye Khuda Tune Muhobbat Yeh Banai Kyun Hai
Gar Banai Toh Muhobbat Main Judai Kyun Hai
Gar Banai Toh Muhobbat Main Judai Kyun Hai


as he took his last drink, he start walking toward the exit.. suddenly his vission become faint. a man come. he took his bollet and give to that man. and start walking toward his car. the man tried to stop him but he did not listen to him. he just turn his face toward that house from where he come. " swayam shekhawat". he read the namplate. a faint smile come on his face. he think something , sit in his car and droove from that place.

Kyun Diya Pyar Mujhe Iski Jarurat Kya Thi
Meree Barbadi Me Shamil Teree Hiqmat Kya Thi

they all were happy. he had everything. his love, his frnds but now everything lost due to his own mistake. now he was laughing on his fate. he is leaving them. he is leaving her. he is alone now but it does not mean they left him. no, he left them. he left them becuse he think he did not deserve it. now he is going away from her, not to return back.

Meree Raahon Me Khushbu Ka Safar Rahta Tha
Dil Me Aabaad Gulabo Ka Nagar Rahta Tha

he always seen love for him in her eyes but now he can only see haterness. she hate him. they hate him. but when they heard him talking on phone with someone. they were shocked. he was saying sorry to someone. becuse he was leaving everyone , not to return back. and it broke her again. she tried to stop him. they fought with him. even she slapped him. they all made him promise that he will not go anywhere. she forgive him. but he could not forgive himself. so now without telling anyone he was leaving. it does not mean he was happy. it killing him to leave them. to left her. she did everything for him but only got betroy from him. she deserve better so he have to leave.



Jindgi Khar Bhari Rahome Layi Kyun Hai
Jindgi Khar Bhari Rahome Layi Kyun Hai
Aye Khuda Tune Muhobbat Yeh Banai Kyun Hai
Aye Khuda Tune Muhobbat Yeh Banai Kyun Hai



he preesed accelrator, the pointer stop at 100km/hr. he just smiled. a painful smile. then he feel her presence. he feel her presence in left side. she was fighting with him " u know. u cant understand. how manytime i hv to tell u its dangerous. reyaansh stop the car right now" as he tried to touch her, she vanished.

Mai Agar Rou Toh Sahra Ko Samandar Kar Du
Sakht Ho Jaoon Agar Mome Ko Pathar Kar Du

she always did that. whenever he tried to spped up, she fought with him. and today, she was not with him but her memories tried to stop him. he again pressed accelrator 150km/hr. he could feel his vission got fainting. then from mirror, he saw a car following him. his cell was falshing a name " kriya" he smiled and tried to pick the phone. but his hand turn to other side


Raakh Ho Jaye Jaha Mai Jo Agar Aah Bharu
Aasma Tutpade Tujse Jo Fariyad Karu
Itni Gaherae Mere Ishq Mai Aai Kyun Hai
Itni Gaherae Mere Ishq Mai Aai Kyun Hai

.he could only see the road. he saw toward a board hanging to other side of road but could not read it. everything was happening in seconds. he could feel himself in air. then a sound. something warm on his face. darkness was consuming him but then he saw her face. yess she was trying to call him. he could hear only screams, his name and her voice. then everything become dark.

Aye Khuda Tune Muhobbat Yeh Banai Kyun Hai
Aye Khuda Tune Muhobbat Yeh Banai Kyun Hai
Agar Banaye Toh Muhobaat Me Judai Kyun Hai
Agar Banaye Toh Muhobaat Me Judai Kyun Hai.



part -2


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys. I shifted abhiya version into pkyek forums. So here is the link.

Edited by visu12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Is it over or are we gonna get a 2nd part...??
this OS was outstanding...u described his turmoil very well...ending was hurtful...bt can we ezpect a happy ending...?????
Edited by akankshaArsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow!! Bhai now that's outstanding !! 😃
Really u write just too finest 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sad end :'(
bt well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
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U r an amazing writer...
Beautifully written..
Keep writing more...

Awesum OS...
I hve sent u buddy request on ur both IDs...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome abhiya os , love the every scenes , u describe abhay inner termoil in perfect way , thanks for pm

-shailesh-
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Vishal Ji!!
It was beautiful!!

Main D3 dekhti ni hu, isliye scene zyada kuch samajh ni aya😔

But Abhay's turmoil was so excelntly described!
U write very well!!

Vese ye song kis film ka hai?

I lovd it!
write more on Abhiya! And Arjun too!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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well described

its over or there
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wht was this..??
is the 1st question i had realy
anyways its awsum
u wrote realy awsum

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