KR OS: Broken Wings - Page 4

Originally posted by: kriapatel

Amazing os
supab

Originally posted by: Pumpkinn

Beautiful os ...

Loved it ...

Originally posted by: Madhu_ArSha

Ohh teriii...
Dis is like.. Ommmggg...
Yeh sachhi aapne likha?
I mean aapke almost saare works read kiye hain maine n i never thought ki aap kuch aisa likhoge.. Bt never d less.. I loved d os..
Insaan n bhagwaan k beech ka reletionship.. Wowww.. So differnt n really awsmm... Loved it.. :D

Originally posted by: nature2

FAb Wrttien

You replying to comments :O Haayo rabba ye kese hoing? :O *Rub eyes*


*And then runs after watching u glare* 🤣

Originally posted by: sanju_arsha

First of all sorry for the late comment...

I had read it b4 bt commenting now.

Coming to the OS..

The concept.. I never expected such a concept from u..+ this intense scenes..

Apart from that gym wala Os..none of ur works contain this mature content..i think so...

N nw this concept...this was an impossible concept..

Bt the way u described the whole was brilliant. . .

Still godess n human?/Is it possible...

Now i have a doubt Why did rey feel like hiding atlast??

Originally posted by: ..Roop..

Vaishu...take a bow baby...

it was just too beautiful...

firstly to i was lill confused...

but than slowly as i read further i get it...

it was kind of different from your other works...

you have written it really beautifully...

the way you showed Rey a human how he has uncontrollable desire for a Goddess...

and the way he asked "can i touch you"..hayee...

and you ended it...i mean really khatam finished khallas really...😲

HOPE to get a continuation...😛

and once again i just loved it sooo very much...😃

Originally posted by: KAJU10

It ws beyond awesome. Its really a fantastic story.
The way u portrayed d story ws exceptionally mesmerising. I culd simply picturize each nd evry moment. The Kriyansh moments wr divine.
U hv penned d desire nd passion quite beautifully. Hope u continue it nd hope dis story hs more parts.

Plz accept my buddy request.

Originally posted by: --RAINA--

amazing os... Lykd it...

Originally posted by: ramya.reddy

amazing os

loved it

continue pls

human and a goddess releationship

its an awesome concept

baadme lamba comment dunge pakka

abhi exams hai

issiliye nahi deparahi hu