KR OS: Broken Wings - Page 5

Originally posted by: The007Shivani

Wow when is the novel coming out?
Plz write a book or novel i will happily go buy it

Originally posted by: -shenz-

So, finally I am here, Keeping all things aside, even my books ;)

You very well know what I felt after reading this, no doubt that you have actually got this so beautifully conceptualized and materialized it as a master piece.

Thank you so much shinzooo... tu hi toh hai mera.. how was eco today?

Firstly hats-off to you and Anky Di for such an amazing concept, Goddess and mortal, combination is quite good :P

i know... ^_^ these concepts are always sweeping you off your feet concepts...

And the way you expressed what the two were going through, like in emotional context, I was left speechless there.

aww... thank you so much shinzo...

His amazement and thoughts, especially where he was thinking to ask for the permission to touch her, I was like, Jaa jaa bachha teri wish zarur grant hogi 🤣

chii... shenz... matlab ganda dimag chala tu ... matlab tune iss angle se dekha... :P

Her desire to get an experience how it feels to be worshiped, be felt and all-was nicely put up.

thank you... ^_^

The most adoring part was, the make out session, so apt yet so descriptive with almost nothing to it, (you know what I mean)

I exactly know what you mean... Thankfully you saw it... I was waiting... I purposely did it.. Repeating the words... and then only using some words... Okay I am not gonna be carrying any pissing off at you..., just for this line... ^_^

Just to maintain the flow it...

But I truly loved it.

thank you... ^_^ ^_^ ^_^

I can see chances of this having been updated with another part 😛 I hope it does.

I don't see... aisa koi part chamak nhi rha mereko...

And yes, you take a lot of stress, unnecessarily. farjipana karti hai, when you think over your works in a negative way.

soch ke dekh shenz... i have all the reasons too... :/

Originally posted by: geeth_amar

Neva read such an os before... It was truly awesome. A relation between human n goddess was brought out vry wel... Wid d purity..! Luved it. Keep writing more dea... Wud luv to read

Originally posted by: anjali22

wow!!!

its amazing

Beautifully written

Originally posted by: sumimita

wow.. this is amazing..

kriya the goddess... and rey use to worship her..

superbm concept.. loved it..

thnks for the pm

Originally posted by: lovely7010

Initially mujhe kuch samjh nahi aaya...

but as the story proceeded...i loved it...

unique and different concept

beautifully penned..

Originally posted by: Incandescence.

OKAY!

*Taking LONG Deep Breaths*

leli???? thank god...

First of all lemme Shout on you for not coming online much! :/ Mann...Where are you... I first thought it was your exams around...But even after exams you were seen no-where...and then I see this OS! :|

exams... laptop kharab... fir internet problem... arey khoob stressful life thi...

BUT, Jo bhi hai.. Hayee...<3 Vaishu...Tell me jaldi se when are you coming to Delhi?

meri maa aayi huyi hai delhi... :P

Jaldi bata...

pata nhi...

I'm gonna take you to hospital...And do your open brain surgery!😉 To find out ki aisa kya hai tere dimaag mai...Jo tere pass itne saare amazing amazing Idea's hote hai. Plus..The way you write na...<3 Haye...I can keep blabbering about that till infinity! <3 :')

I can keep heraing till infinity.. bolte raha kar uppu.. accha lagta hai...

main nhi karvani surgery... :P

Vaishu! THIS OS was SUPERBLY FANTABULOUS!

Thank you so much... ^_^

I simply couldn't register anything else while reading it. I read it 4 times..And each f**king time I was left with a feeling So desperate..to read ahead..

Thank you so much... The fact that it left you wanting more accomplished the purpose... Thank you... ^_^ :*

Aaah... I know..How much writer's usually love writing open ended one shot's but me having innu sa heart, I kept on thinking aage ka..

I imagined one more tharki on it ;)

He He He... Tharki ka tharki saathi... ;) :P :*

And Haan.. Tharki se yaad aya! VAISHUUU Yaaarr.. Tere hath kahan hai?? Dikha to zara...Chuum lu mai unhe! It was so beautiful yaar!

Yeh rhe... *forwarding my hands... * *blushing... :P*

Her description! <3 Her dialogues! <3

His feelings <3 His dialogues <3

Those wishes she granted <3

Haye! LOVED It totally!

Thank you so much... ^_^ The way you said it... makes it worth more believable... :*

It was WORTH reading Mann! :* :*

Thank you... ^_^

Love you Effin much for this! 😳

Love you too... :*

-Pupu

Originally posted by: crazysky

it was beautiful
beutifull concept
never read like this before
it contained so much purity and serenity in it
really loved this os
only one word can define this os "serene"
i felt the serenity of it more than the word called "love"
simply beautiful

Originally posted by: tinatartari

Vaish I thnk thats the 1st piece of ur writing tat m reading or it ws just so flwless, so divine nd so mseumerizing tat I felt I ve nt read u before..
I must say I dnt hv wrds 2 describe hw I felt reading it!
it ws phenomenal...
thNks 4 sending me pm or I d hv lost the opportunity 2 read such a classic...words cant xpress what m feeling right nw..
nd the way u ended it is superb...
great concept th

Originally posted by: zona_malik

Awesome

Ahmazing

Superb

Fab

A very Unique OS :)