KR OS: Broken Wings

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Shukti_19

@Shukti_19

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

such a unique concept!!
It was so beautiful..
luvd it like anything..
can U plz continue it ?? at least one more chapter, plzzz...

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

that was marvelous and wonderful os... loved it

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Woww Vaish 👏

fabulous write-up😊

D way u described kriya was awesomeee👏👏

so she lost all her powers by sleeping wit rey😲😲

lovedd ittt😉

amazingg concept👍🏼

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-VJ.ReyManiac-

@-VJ.ReyManiac-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Neva read such an os before... It was truly awesome. A relation between human n goddess was brought out vry wel... Wid d purity..! Luved it. Keep writing more dea... Wud luv to read

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moumita

@sumimita

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

wow.. this is amazing..

kriya the goddess... and rey use to worship her..

superbm concept.. loved it..

thnks for the pm

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

awesome os vaishu...

beautiful os..

rey came to ask for his clans prosperity n was given a another wish..

he chose to wish for touching her...

mortal n goddess touch of story was awesome..

loved d way u showed kriya not able to voice her thoughts n held captive coz of rey's touch..

she lost her powers coz of it..

very hawt os...

if possible write part 2 of it.. plz..

superb awesome os...

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tina tartari

@tinatartari

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Vaish I thnk thats the 1st piece of ur writing tat m reading or it ws just so flwless, so divine nd so mseumerizing tat I felt I ve nt read u before..
I must say I dnt hv wrds 2 describe hw I felt reading it!
it ws phenomenal...
thNks 4 sending me pm or I d hv lost the opportunity 2 read such a classic...words cant xpress what m feeling right nw..
nd the way u ended it is superb...
great concept th

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chetna

@crazysky

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

it was beautiful
beutifull concept
never read like this before
it contained so much purity and serenity in it
really loved this os
only one word can define this os "serene"
i felt the serenity of it more than the word called "love"
simply beautiful