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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
So, finally I am here, Keeping all things aside, even my books ;)
You very well know what I felt after reading this, no doubt that you have actually got this so beautifully conceptualized and materialized it as a master piece.

Firstly hats-off to you and Anky Di for such an amazing concept, Goddess and mortal, combination is quite good :P

And the way you expressed what the two were going through, like in emotional context, I was left speechless there.

His amazement and thoughts, especially where he was thinking to ask for the permission to touch her, I was like, Jaa jaa bachha teri wish zarur grant hogi 🤣

Her desire to get an experience how it feels to be worshiped, be felt and all-was nicely put up.

The most adoring part was, the make out session, so apt yet so descriptive with almost nothing to it, (you know what I mean)

But I truly loved it.

I can see chances of this having been updated with another part 😛 I hope it does.

And yes, you take a lot of stress, unnecessarily. farjipana karti hai, when you think over your works in a negative way.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
OKAY!

*Taking LONG Deep Breaths*


First of all lemme Shout on you for not coming online much! :/ Mann...Where are you... I first thought it was your exams around...But even after exams you were seen no-where...and then I see this OS! :|

BUT, Jo bhi hai.. Hayee...<3 Vaishu...Tell me jaldi se when are you coming to Delhi?

Jaldi bata...

I'm gonna take you to hospital...And do your open brain surgery!😉 To find out ki aisa kya hai tere dimaag mai...Jo tere pass itne saare amazing amazing Idea's hote hai. Plus..The way you write na...<3 Haye...I can keep blabbering about that till infinity! <3 :')


Vaishu! THIS OS was SUPERBLY FANTABULOUS!

I simply couldn't register anything else while reading it. I read it 4 times..And each f**king time I was left with a feeling So desperate..to read ahead..

Aaah... I know..How much writer's usually love writing open ended one shot's but me having innu sa heart, I kept on thinking aage ka..

I imagined one more tharki on it ;)


And Haan.. Tharki se yaad aya! VAISHUUU Yaaarr.. Tere hath kahan hai?? Dikha to zara...Chuum lu mai unhe! It was so beautiful yaar!

Her description! <3 Her dialogues! <3
His feelings <3 His dialogues <3
Those wishes she granted <3


Haye! LOVED It totally!


It was WORTH reading Mann! :* :*

Love you Effin much for this! 😳

-Pupu
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
amazing os
loved it
continue pls
human and a goddess releationship
its an awesome concept
baadme lamba comment dunge pakka
abhi exams hai
issiliye nahi deparahi hu
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Wow when is the novel coming out?
Plz write a book or novel i will happily go buy it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Beautiful os ...
Loved it ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
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Miss papi pants! You never fail to make me utter this word "hot"☺️

Before going further, I wanna elaborate hot. I felt the heat while reading it and then I was grinning like an idiot. 😃I read two stories head to head and now I am smiling on my luck.😊

Starting from the start, I never thought that I will manage to imagine a story like this. You know Goddess and worshipper, I always loved these kinda fantasies but I was doubtful if I will be able to sponge it up when it is in written specially.🤔

But Miss papi pants made all my doubts fade away with this work😃

I really loved the way you narrated her. She was Goddess and you justified her status with the selection words and most importantly with your vision! I bow down to you! I mean it!

The way Raeys dodged the first wish and controlled himself from uttering truth, I thought this is gonna take list of events before he speaks up. 😳But then you amused me! Kyra asked him to wish second time! And he uttered it! I was literally excited to read further. Anxiety was on peak.

Then he touched her, I thought that would be it for the moment but you again amused me Vaishu!😳

I totally loved the way you expressed Kyra's feelings over mortal's touch! I mean this description made this story most special for me!😃

The way you described the whole scene, I am saying it! It was hawt!☺️

In end, when he realized that it wasn't a dream and she lying in his arms. And the ultimate highlight, she lost her status of being Goddess! Ahaaa! What a thinking Vaishu!😎

With consummation with a mortal, she lost a heavenly status and found the most real one. AHaaa!

Honestly! This was something I would read on daily basis! I request you to write some series on it!🤓 I would totally be punctual in reading! 🤓It's that kinda subject to me! And don't you dare to laugh after reading my punctual thing. 😡Lazy asses too have their favorite subjects for which they can be quick.😛😆 You wrote it with that proper injection of anxiety ke I am literally asking for more!😳

It was beautifully sexy and heavenly!

Loved it!

Love ya!🤗

Edited by Nxt_rockstar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Ohh teriii...
Dis is like.. Ommmggg...
Yeh sachhi aapne likha?
I mean aapke almost saare works read kiye hain maine n i never thought ki aap kuch aisa likhoge.. Bt never d less.. I loved d os..
Insaan n bhagwaan k beech ka reletionship.. Wowww.. So differnt n really awsmm... Loved it.. :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
First of all sorry for the late comment...
I had read it b4 bt commenting now.
Coming to the OS..
The concept.. I never expected such a concept from u..+ this intense scenes..
Apart from that gym wala Os..none of ur works contain this mature content..i think so...
N nw this concept...this was an impossible concept..
Bt the way u described the whole was brilliant. . .
Still godess n human?/Is it possible...
Now i have a doubt Why did rey feel like hiding atlast??
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
It ws beyond awesome. Its really a fantastic story.
The way u portrayed d story ws exceptionally mesmerising. I culd simply picturize each nd evry moment. The Kriyansh moments wr divine.
U hv penned d desire nd passion quite beautifully. Hope u continue it nd hope dis story hs more parts.

Plz accept my buddy request.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Vaishu...take a bow baby...

it was just too beautiful...

firstly to i was lill confused...

but than slowly as i read further i get it...

it was kind of different from your other works...

you have written it really beautifully...

the way you showed Rey a human how he has uncontrollable desire for a Goddess...

and the way he asked "can i touch you"..hayee...

and you ended it...i mean really khatam finished khallas really...😲

HOPE to get a continuation...😛

and once again i just loved it sooo very much...😃

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