Swaron Two Shot- Tanhayee..(current track)part4-pg 10

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

OMG..that was beautiful Varshu...loved loved loved it...

Sharon's pain...her attempts to win his heart back..

Swayam getting affected by her efforts..still masking his feelings...

Sharon indirectly confessing her love in fron of gang ...was just awesome...

The dance part was OH-SO-AMAZING...i could picturize the whole sequence ...

Can't wait for the walls to crash ..and two souls desperate for each other love will be together again...

That was so well-written .👏👏👏

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: sweet16cash
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Thank you for updating so soon I really wanted to read the next part soon aur tune meri wish poori kar di..😃.
Coming to the update you were brilliant with it as always.. I liked swayam and sharon's individual Pov's bahut achhe se likhe tune really their emotions were crystal clear.. Both are in pain one is in pain because he is betrayed by the person whom he needed the most for support and other is in pain because the distance is unbearable but both yet love each other..
Then the part where sharon convinces swayam for a duet with him determination hai ladki main..😃. The daughter-father convo was good to read.. Then the truth and dare game and the hug that follows was the first wow moment for me in your update so many emotions conveyed at one time in that moment..😊.
Then the moment in the rehearsal hall was the second wow moment for me in your update..😳.
Varshi tune kaha stop kiya yaar suspense se hi maar dalegi aadhon ko tu..😆.
P.S update ASAP..
Love,
Kashmi 🤗

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Unres...

Oh dam yeh kahan stop kar di tu☺️

Ufff yaar mein full us mein doop gayi thi n niche scroll kiya toh khatam shit..

Dat was such a classy update yaar...

Mein full os mein ghus gayi thi..

Aisa lag raha tha as if watever is happening am standing der n witnessing it in front of me..

Varshu dis is d best best os i am reading on dis particular track n i really mean it..

It was just mesmerizing..

D way it started both der pov.s perfectly written..

D truth n dare sharon hugging swayam dat time fab👏

D way she made him tell yes for dance brilliant dats more like sharon..

Sharon n dad convo nice simple n sweet..

Finally d way u described hw swayam was melting due to sharons actions was simply outstanding..

D mose wow moment of dis was d duet dance..

Wat a song☺️N wat a dance☺️

Hayeee yaar

Ur just surprising me day by day wid ur updates..

Way to go gal..

Abhi last part jaldi se post kar.. Bahot galat jagah khatam kiya hai tune isse☺️

Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 11 years ago

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swaron20

@swaron20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Beautiful update...

please update next part soon...

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Trisha paul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

read all the chapters at one go...it was just awesome!!!!!

Great work..👏

continue soon...

thanks for pm..

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zk456789

@zk456789

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Very well written
Loved the way that Sharon is trying to win swayam heart
Love the rasiya sequence
Do update soon
Thanks for the pm

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

finally finish read ur 2 and 3 parts both together... awesome...
finally whole gang understood whole consequence and situation and not to talk about it...
finally sharon let out all to simmi and how swayan to had not talk about this to anyone...
and then simmi let out all her angry on rey... and rey had talk to her that she is to hold
on this for fault and told simmi to make sharon undertand and then they both talk and finally
after a lot of try swayan had made a move to sharon and sharon dad talk to rey about what
go on in sharon life as she is lot upset and talk to true... look forward to read more...
do continue soon and pm me

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tannulove07

@tannulove07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

hey seriously nw i am Big fan of U...wow amazing it's simply amazing. i m always waiting for ur artical n Swaron

I am Big fan of taanu... and also swaron.. i m watching D3 only for swaron but nw i lost my all hopes about swaron.but i really appreciate u for all ur artical on swaron... Keep writing ... i am waiting for ur next artical

hey and ur 1st part almost same as current Track...

Edited by saritaparab - 11 years ago