Swaron Two Shot- Tanhayee..(current track)part4-pg 10

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GlamourousPearl

@GlamourousPearl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

wat a takeoff of sharon's character...tooo guddd
so xited for more update
SUPERBBB... :) :) :) :)
must say dis is da second tym aftr reading ur update...u bring all da emotions on my face be it smile,tear, tense...damn yaarrr...

LOVEDDD it

Do PM abt nxt update...plzzz...cnt wait :(

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Sunil

@Suni1986

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Amazing re
Simmi consol her nd even she forced sharon to think in Swayam POV.
Sharon very well understand where is she wrong, nd now she is on mission to win back her Swayam.
Sharon doing everything for her Swayan nd making him feel special.
Sharon did even care abt her friend nd clg friends, she just showring her love on Swayam.
Swaron convo in projector room was fab. Now determined sharon going to win bak her love swayam.

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zk456789

@zk456789

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Wow nice update waiting for the next chapter

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SnehaluvsKSG

@snehaswaron77

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Read both the chapters in one go!!!! I wouldn't say it was amazing beautiful cuz dat would be an understatement for your work...One thing two say, this was simply "Out of this world" My god you've actually become one of my favorite writer on this forum & I mean it!!!The way u have described Sharon's pain, dilemma, hurt her longing & craving for swayam ...every emotions were put so amazingly & wonderfully , I could actually feel it!!!!Kudos to u & your work gal...Way to go...
Waiting for the next part...update soon..& thanks for the pm dear!!!

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Edited my comment on above sorry to bore you with it its pretty long but I could'nt contain myself from writing so much..😛

Edited by sweet16cash - 11 years ago

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swaron20

@swaron20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Awesome update ...👏

Sharon simmi convo was great ...

Love Sharon's majnu avatar...

Update next part soon.😉

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Fab fab os yaar. .
Dis os i can say is by far ur best best piece of work. .
U have simply nailed it. .
Left me speechless again with dis update. .
D way u have written sharon simmi convo my god brilliant. .
It was so heart touching. .
Simmi was simply outstanding she made sharon realise on were she went wrong. .
Superbly penned. .
N from den on started d most awesome part which made me grin n grin. .
Sharon doin all those things for swayam. .
Woh bhi selflessly without expecting anything from him. .
Dis is Wat i want to see sharon doin. .
Without expecting anything baas she must shower her love n care for swayam. .
D final convo in projector room was perfectly written. .
I could feel d role reversal. .

Sharon n swayam.s character change perfectly portrayed. .
Enjoyed reading it yaar. .
Dis was one master piece 👏 👏
Waiting badly for next part. .

Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 11 years ago